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				<title>Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 22 Apr 2023 15:48:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> aka the Phantom of Kingdom Pen</p>
<p>Also, hello! I&#8217;m Janellebelovedpig, a new creation in Christ. I am also the youngest of 11 homeschooled siblings, salesclerk, and a writing Christian. Writing is one of my hobbies. Obviously. &#x1f609; I keep up a blog and tiny YouTube channel with songs, poems, and a few stories. Crafts are also a fond past time&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-136196"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/#post-140888" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jayna Baas replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Apr 2023 16:10:57 -0400</pubDate>

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<p><em>Pilgrim’s Progress</em> is probably my favorite and the most classic of all Christian allegories, although it contains a few teachings I don’t agree with. <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> had some really good points. I don’t read a lot of allegories, but my main requirement is that whatever allegorical stuff is in there accurately reflects biblical truth&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-136116"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/#post-140810" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic New Book Release! in the forum Book Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Apr 2023 16:32:05 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Apr 2023 04:52:51 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey! How&#8217;s your allegory going? I&#8217;ve begun writing one of my own, an autobiographical biography&#8211; that makes writing easier because I know what God has taught me and then I just have to translate what that looks like for my characters and setting.</p>
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<p>My favorite allegory would be <em>Hinds Feet on High Places</em> by Hannah Hurnard. I&#8217;m&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-135441"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/#post-140160" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Apr 2023 04:52:51 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hey! How&#8217;s your allegory going? I&#8217;ve begun writing one of my own, an autobiographical biography&#8211; that makes writing easier because I know what God has taught me and then I just have to translate what that looks like for my characters and setting.</p>
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<p>My favorite allegory would be <em>Hinds Feet on High Places</em> by Hannah Hurnard. I&#8217;m&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-135440"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-makes-an-allegory-impactful/#post-140159" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity posted an update: @esther-c @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @god [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 21 Feb 2023 16:45:50 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Hey friends, I&#8217;m taking a two week vacation/break, so I won&#8217;t be on here from Feb. 22 to March 8. You can still tag me if you want, but I won&#8217;t be able to respond until&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-129536"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/129536/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Fan Fic Middle Earth Story in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 10 Feb 2023 15:37:56 -0500</pubDate>

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				<title>Esther replied to the topic “Look Up Child” in the forum Poetry Critiques</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/look-up-child/#post-132060</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 07 Feb 2023 18:57:50 -0500</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>GIRLLLL!!!!! &#x1f496;&#x1f62d;&#x1f496;&#x1f62d;&#x1f496;&#x1f62d;&#x1f496;</p>
<p>That poem is BEAUTIFUL!!!! &#x1f60d;&#x1f970;&#x1f929;&#x1f496;</p>
<p>Amazing job!!! I relate to that poem so much! &#x1f62d;&#x1f496;</p>
<p>Thank you so much for sharing!!! &#x1f970;&#x1f970;&#x1f970;</p></blockquote>
<p>You’re so welcome!! &lt;33</p>
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<p>MercyMe is awesome!! We love listening to them! (Especially the song “Happy Dance” XDXD)</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
<blockquote><p>It’s absolutely beautiful &#x2728;&#x2764;&#xfe0f;</p></blockquote>
<p>Thank you so&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-127679"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/look-up-child/#post-132060" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Fan Fic Middle Earth Story in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 06 Feb 2023 20:24:43 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Part two coming through!!!!</p>
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				<title>Kathleen replied to the topic Your favorites of KP? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/your-favorites-of-kp/page/2/#post-131483</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2023 21:53:11 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Oh my gosh, these lists are amazing! Thank you so much for your input! This really helps me so much, you guys are the best.</p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 started the topic Fan Fic Middle Earth Story in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2023 15:31:43 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey guys. I thought I&#8217;d finally share my Journey to the Past story (JTTP) about four kids who get transported to Tolkien&#8217;s middle earth! This is probably my favorite fan fiction I have written. I wrote it according to The Hobbit book (I don&#8217;t think I had watched the movies when I wrote this so there&#8217;s no Tauriel in it after all.)</p>
<p>Hope you enjoy!&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-127035"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fan-fic-middle-earth-story/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jan 2023 02:31:13 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Hello all. I&#8217;m posting another&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-125803"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/journey-to-the-past-series-by-a/page/2/#post-129943" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 15 Jan 2023 19:54:50 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Story Two in my Journey to the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-125047"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/journey-to-the-past-series-by-a/page/2/#post-129200" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Journey to the Past Series by A in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Jan 2023 13:27:10 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>More tags. 🙂</p>
<p>@wilder-w <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a></p>
<p>As always, enjoy or ignore. 🙂 And if you don&#8217;t want me to tag you, let me know. I won&#8217;t be offended. 😉</p>
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				<title>Arien posted an update: Okay, so maybe some of you have noticed that Erica [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jan 2023 02:02:28 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, so maybe some of you have noticed that Erica (starofthenorth) and I haven&#8217;t been very active recently. We haven&#8217;t disappeared off the face of the earth, but we&#8217;ve decided to step away from the forum. (One reason is that we want to prioritize things like writing!) Thank you all for being so welcoming and friendly, we appreciated it!&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-124509"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/124509/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 06 Jan 2023 15:41:58 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Anno&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-123919"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/page/3/#post-128078" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Jan 2023 02:47:03 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi KP friends.  Part four is here!!!! As always, enjoy or ignore! If this is the first time you&#8217;ve seen this story, I suggest you read the first three parts first! 😉</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> @wilder-w <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishav&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-123720"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/page/2/#post-127841" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Hobbitchild replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 04 Jan 2023 06:12:10 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Leroy Arvengton, the oldest son of a very rich family, showed his intelligence by graduating high school when he was ten.</p>
<p>Just when he has his sights set on college, his parents suddenly die in an accident. Leroy is ripped away from his familiar life and shipped to a secretive school called Eximus on a mysterious island.</p>
<p>Leroy learns that the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-123591"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/23/#post-127709" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/page/2/#post-127101</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2023 14:07:49 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/booksandbeakers/' rel="nofollow ugc">@booksandbeakers</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lewilliams/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lewilliams</a> @everyone</p>
<p>Happy New Year everybody! Here&#8217;s part three.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-123004"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/page/2/#post-127101" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Arien started the topic Anyone want a year-end challenge/celebration? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-want-a-year-end-challenge-celebration/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Jan 2023 03:31:31 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay guys, since it&#8217;s New Year&#8217;s Eve and all, I have a great idea:</p>
<p>We stay up and write until midnight, when we celebrate the new year, decide our writing goals for the year, and then fall into bed exhausted. How&#8217;s that sound?</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> and I are doing it! Join us, from wherever you are! &#x1f973;&#x1f973;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f386;</p>
<p>Let us know how it goes! &#x1f602;</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishav&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-122957"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/anyone-want-a-year-end-challenge-celebration/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica started the topic Another End of Year Book Party in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 31 Dec 2022 22:23:16 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I believe last year there was a topic of the week for discussing the books we&#8217;ve all read this year. I really  looked forward to being able to be a part of it (I made a list of every book I read this year!) but seeing how it&#8217;s the last day of 2022 (THAT was weird to say!!) and I don&#8217;t think anyone&#8217;s doing topic of the weeks (topics of the week?)&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-122895"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/another-end-of-year-book-party/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/#post-126496</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2022 00:50:17 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Next Post&#8230;..Part Two of the Annie Adams story. Enjoy. Or ignore.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-122422"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/#post-126496" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica started the topic New WIP idea!! in the forum Sci-Fi</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2022 00:48:06 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey there!</p>
<p>Awhile ago I had to write a paper for school, and I decided to write about black holes. I got an idea for a plot . . .</p>
<p>So two boys, Jaedyn and his brother (who needs a name, probably either Rylan or Kardon or maybe something else), their sister Zona and her boyfriend Dylan, get somehow sucked inside a black hole. I need to figure out&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-122416"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-wip-idea/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-keeper-of-the-lost-cities/page/3/#post-126147</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2022 19:47:58 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Hey there! Haven&#8217;t talked to you in a while &#x1f60a;</p>
<blockquote><p>I honestly stopped it because the romance was getting uncomfortable and there were several inappropriate scenes/comments.</p></blockquote>
<p>I noticed that a lot of people on the library website commented about that. I only read the first three books, so I didn&#8217;t get into that a lot.</p>
<blockquote><p>Aside from that, I didn’t l&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<title>Orielle2023 started the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Dec 2022 14:01:39 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/booksandbeakers/' rel="nofollow ugc">@booksandbeakers</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lewilliams/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lewilliams</a></p>
<p>Here is a little something for anyone who likes historical fiction&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-121824"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/annie-adams-a-historical-fiction-novella/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Hey everyone! in the forum Start HERE</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-9/#post-125725</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 26 Dec 2022 15:50:22 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/booksandbeakers/' rel="nofollow ugc">@booksandbeakers</a></p>
<p>I&#8217;m going to tag some other KeePers&#8230; 😀</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/orielle21/' rel="nofollow ugc">@orielle21</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a></p>
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				<title>Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story...Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-short-christmas-story-critiques-appreciated/#post-125639</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 24 Dec 2022 13:06:24 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &#038;&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-121615"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-short-christmas-story-critiques-appreciated/#post-125639" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Arien started the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-did-you-start-writing-why-are-you-still-writing/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Dec 2022 16:30:34 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>For me, I can&#8217;t even remember why I started writing. I was bored, I guess, and I asked Mom for a piece of paper and started writing a rip-off of a Boxcar Children book. I got a few chapters in, then abandoned it. I was maybe 8 at the time. And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-121520"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-did-you-start-writing-why-are-you-still-writing/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica started the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-keeper-of-the-lost-cities/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Dec 2022 01:57:24 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So this past year <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> and I started reading the Keeper of the Lost Cities series. We got three-four books in before deciding to stop reading.</p>
<p>So I&#8217;m wondering what you guys think about the books.</p>
<p>Personally, I felt they were very intense, with all the mind control and brokenness, etc. At first I thought Sophie&#8217;s mind-reading powers were just&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-121286"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-keeper-of-the-lost-cities/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Arien replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hello-hello-3/#post-125269</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Dec 2022 00:26:44 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll tag some other KeePers to come say hi!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/felicity/' rel="nofollow ugc">@felicity</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/power/' rel="nofollow ugc">@power</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/page/3/#post-124983</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Dec 2022 21:09:53 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> @kathleen-ramm <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a></p>
<p>Here&#8217;s chapter three of my WIP <em>Overcome</em> if anyone&#8217;s interested!</p>
<p>Any feedback you might have is very welcome! 😀</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Glossary of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-120983"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/page/3/#post-124983" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica started the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Dec 2022 23:46:21 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey!</p>
<p>So in my WIP, I have this creature that needs a name. They live underground in caves.</p>
<p>I picture them as a cross between Ridgerunners, Oompa Loompas, and squirrels. They&#8217;re about fourish feet tall.</p>
<p>They&#8217;re also slightly evil.</p>
<p>If any artists want to draw them, I&#8217;d love to see it!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loop&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-120537"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-need-a-creature-name/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/page/2/#post-123793</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 09 Dec 2022 16:42:18 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/sarafini/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarafini</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/esther-c/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-c</a> @everyone</p>
<p>Here is Chapter 2, for anyone who wants to read it. This is my first draft, to be clear, and I am looking for any feedback and critiques&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-119918"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/page/2/#post-123793" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity started the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2022 19:07:41 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/freedomwriter76/' rel="nofollow ugc">@freedomwriter76</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/arien/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arien</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/starofthenorth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@starofthenorth</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/godlyfantasy12/' rel="nofollow ugc">@godlyfantasy12</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/wilder-w/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wilder-w</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> @anyoneandeveryone</p>
<p>Here is the first chapter of my WIP <em>Overcome </em>for anyone who wants to read it! I hope you all enjoy. Please critique it ruthlessly.</p>
<p>Glossary of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-119169"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/russo-ukrainian-war-novel-please-critique/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ideas-on-a-scene/page/2/#post-122497</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Nov 2022 02:41:52 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
<p>Thanks! It&#8217;s honestly fun *evil writer laugh*</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/theloonyone/' rel="nofollow ugc">@theloonyone</a></p>
<blockquote><p>How are they going to make up? I’m sure you know though &#x1f601;&#x1f602;</p></blockquote>
<p>Ehh&#8211;actually I don&#8217;t. Quite. Yet.</p>
<blockquote><p>I also saw that you said romance is only a subplot. What is the first genre?</p></blockquote>
<p>Hmm, I don&#8217;t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don&#8217;t know. B&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118721"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ideas-on-a-scene/page/2/#post-122497" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 27 Nov 2022 20:58:39 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>I wrote a really long answer and posted it. It didn&#8217;t work and got deleted. So here&#8217;s a much shorter version!</p>
<blockquote><p>I don’t think I’ve ever heard anyone say they liked Boromir though. I’m curious, why? &#x1f642;</p></blockquote>
<p>I had like a two-hundred-word response on why I like Boromir, but uh, yeah. It&#8217;s gone now. &#x1f92a; Ahhh&#8230;. Anyway, I don&#8217;t know if he&#8217;s my absol&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118485"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-the-only-one/page/3/#post-122251" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 27 Nov 2022 01:50:47 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks for posting that! I was wondering about that myself&#8230;</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 23:45:54 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.</p>
<blockquote><p>“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 23:36:24 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Aw thanks!!</p>
<blockquote><p>I love to see the build-up of emotion in Christopher’s body language before he snaps at her.</p></blockquote>
<p>I agree. I love body language lol. 🙂</p>
<blockquote><p>Also, I think it’d really add to the heartbreak of the scene if you included an undercurrent of pain, of the awareness they both have that they’re breaking the relationship they had. Even thoug&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 23:22:01 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, I said I&#8217;d post something from my last book, <em>A Dream Come True</em>, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!</p>
<p>First, the pitch:</p>
<blockquote><p>Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:58:04 -0500</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>Favorite character? Ah, that’s hard. Too hard… I can’t &#x1f923; I love them all! Probably Sam or Boromir, though. What about you?</p></blockquote>
<p>Oh yes, Sam. He&#8217;s the best! So loyal and loving all the way there and back! I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve ever heard anyone say they liked Boromir though. I&#8217;m curious, why? 🙂</p>
<blockquote><p>What about you?</p></blockquote>
<p>Definitely Eowyn, followed close&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118427"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-the-only-one/page/2/#post-122191" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:45:25 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Yes, <em>The Count of Monte Cristo</em> is so good! Wow, that&#8217;s cool your dad likes it! It doesn&#8217;t seem like the kind of book that a non-book person would really like, just because it&#8217;s so long and has some complicated stuff. (Seriously, I almost lost patience with it when I read it the first time, because just as I was getting into the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118423"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-the-only-one/page/2/#post-122187" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:35:58 -0500</pubDate>

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<blockquote><p>I’m from the Midwest; I love writing, creative lettering, cartography, decorating, baking, languages, and medical science. I’d like to go into the medical field someday–specifically exercise or nutrition (basically lifestyle coaching)–though I’d prefer marriage and raising a family over a career ;P But it’s good to have a backup plan&hellip;</p></blockquote>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:21:56 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Amen! The King reigns!</p>
<blockquote><p>I’m not very experienced in it, but anytime I make anything from scratch it’s so much more enjoyable than buying it at a store!! What’s your favorite aspect of homesteading?</p></blockquote>
<p>My favorite aspect&#8230;let&#8217;s see. Probably gardening. I like that a lot and it&#8217;s so relaxing and beautiful!</p>
<p>Since I&#8217;m into History too, I like&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118419"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/thanksgiving/page/2/#post-122183" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 22:21:21 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Thank you. 😉</p>
<p>Hey, that&#8217;s really helpful! Can&#8217;t wait till I&#8217;m a wise jester (at least I&#8217;m wise, even if I am a goof)</p>
<p>I trust your Thanksgiving was amazing and the turkey did not shoot out of the oven (look up the poem &#8220;The Turkey Shot Out of the Oven&#8221;) lol</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 26 Nov 2022 21:34:41 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Hello! I don&#8217;t believe we&#8217;ve met.</p>
<p>Everything you said is so true! I love seeing how God has been working in others&#8217; lives.</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a></p>
<p>Well, I got my braces early this month . . . I think they&#8217;re saying 20-24 months. One down, 23 more to go! lol</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2022 21:54:30 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello! I would like some ideas on this scene.</p>
<p>Background: Christopher and Briana used to like each other, but then they got captured and Briana blamed it on Christopher. She is trying to convince herself that she hates him, though she still likes him. Christopher loves her, but he hates her for hating him. (does that make sense lol?) Currently&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118351"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ideas-on-a-scene/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2022 21:02:04 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Yes, <em>The Count of Monte Cristo</em> is good! Sometime I want to write an article or something about how the quest for revenge is different in <em>The Count</em> and <em>The Lantern Bearers </em>by Rosemary Sutcliff. (You should read it! It&#8217;s the third in the Roman Britain Trilogy: <em>The Eagle of the Ninth</em>, <em>The Silver Branch</em>, and <em>The Lantern Bearers</em>.)</p>
<p>It&#8217;s tech&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118344"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-not-the-only-one/page/2/#post-122107" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Felicity replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2022 17:03:00 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Amen to everything!!! Our God is an awesome God!</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think I met you yet but&#8230;I&#8217;m so happy to have another sister in Christ! (Sending a virtual hug&#8230;) The amazing thing about Christians is that we are all connected, even when we&#8217;ve never met. We&#8217;re all part of one Family.</p>
<p>Thanks for that post! It was really encouraging to me and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118328"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/thanksgiving/page/2/#post-122091" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2022 16:46:37 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>I love your focus on God, and how you&#8217;re just gushing with joy lol 🙂 I know you&#8217;ve been through some challenges, but God is faithful and always will be.</p>
<p>Ah yes, Hobby Lobby. What would we do without it? And cats. And toothpaste. And . . . floss. I have braces and am not enjoying how long flossing takes.</p>
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<p>Don&#8217;t worry! It&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-118327"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/thanksgiving/page/2/#post-122090" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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