“Look Up Child”

[Esther]

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Hey, y’all!!

So I wrote a poem, inspired by two popular lines from The Chosen, “Look up” and “You are mine.”

I’ll take comments and any critiques that you have!! (Plus, if you think it’s too short, I do have another stanza that I’m thinking about adding)

 

I was stuck in the mire,

Unable to escape.

Trapped in sinful desire,

My chains I could not break.

But Christ reached down to save me,

And pulled me from the mud.

His mercy now has freed me,

From every sin I have done.

He simply beckons me,

 

“Look up child,

Into your Savior’s eyes.

Look up child,

I brought you from death to life.

Look up child,

You are mine.”

 

I know I am forgiven,

I know that I’ve been freed,

But when I give in to temptation,

Guilt returns to haunt me.

Yet the Father calls me home,

Into His embrace.

I fall into His arms,

Pleading for forgiveness.

And He says, lovingly,

 

“Look up child,

Into your Savior’s eyes.

Look up child,

I brought you from death to life.

Look up child,

You are still mine.”

 

In this world of darkness,

False pathways abound,

But I know my Savior is,

The true north that I’ve found.

The devil tries to convince me,

That I am not enough.

But the Lord always reminds me,

I am defined by His love.

His voice calls out to me,

 

“Look up child,

Into your Savior’s eyes.

Look up child,

I brought you from death to life.

Look up child,

You are forever mine.

So look to me,

my forever child.”

 

(Don’t feel obligated to reply if you don’t want to. 🙂 )

(Also, I’m thinking to maybe [that’s a very big maybe] add a melody to it.)

• This topic was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by Esther.

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

 

#HugRikerSquad

[MineralizedWritings]

Nice!!

Have you heard Lauren Daigles song “look up child”? It’s really good!! I can’t remember the lyrics distinctly, but she’s a Christian artist.

へびは　かっこいい　です！

[Esther]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

I’m so glad it encouraged you!! 😄

Will do! Here it is!:

So I will sing Your praises,

Throughout all eternity.

I will tell of Your goodness,

Even when all forsake me.

One thing I will never forget,

How Your love changed my life.

May I always ever let,

Your will to be done in my life.

For Your words simply say,

“Look up child,

Into your Savior’s eyes.

Look up child,

I brought you from death to life.

Look up child,

You are mine.

You are forever mine.”

 

Still unsure on the “One thing I will never forget, how Your love changed my life. May I always ever let, Your will to be done in my life.” But for now, it is what it is. Lol 😄

@mineralizedwritings

Nice!!

Thank ya!!

Have you heard Lauren Daigles song “look up child”? It’s really good!! I can’t remember the lyrics distinctly, but she’s a Christian artist.

I have heard of it, but I have not listened to it. If I get the chance I’ll check it out! 🙂

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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@esther-c

Ooh love it!!!! Ahh it’s so good <3<3

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I have!! I love it. I mean, it’s not as good as You Say or Rescue, but it’s probably my 3rd favorite of her songs. Do you listen to K-Love any? It’s such a great radio station!

#HugRikerSquad

[Esther]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ooh love it!!!! Ahh it’s so good <3<3

Thx so much!! 😄 That means a lot! <3

Do you listen to K-Love any? It’s such a great radio station!

Our family does occasionally! (We typically bluetooth my parents’ music to the car instead of the radio.) They do have some good songs on there! 🙂

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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@esther-c

Aww, you’re welcome!! <3<3

Oh yeah, we usually do that too on long car rides. But on short rides we just listen to K-Love a lot! But yeah, they do!! I love the Lauren Daigle songs and the Mercy Me songs.

#HugRikerSquad

[Anonymous]

@esther-c. GIRLLLL!!!!! 💖😭💖😭💖😭💖

That poem is BEAUTIFUL!!!! 😍🥰🤩💖

Amazing job!!! I relate to that poem so much! 😭💖

Thank you so much for sharing!!! 🥰🥰🥰

[MineralizedWritings]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ikr? Rescue is the best song ever!! I don’t listen to K-love (didnt even know they were a station lol) but I do watch there awards ceremonies and interviews online occasionally!

へびは　かっこいい　です！

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@mineralizedwritings

Yess it is!!! Ah I love it. Lol, I didn’t know there were award ceremonies and interviews, so I guess we both taught each other something XD!

#HugRikerSquad

[Madelyn]

@esther-c

It’s absolutely beautiful ✨❤️

~In Christ Alone My Hope Is Found~

[Gwyndalf the Wise]

@esther-c

This is amazing, I love it! ❤️

"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19

[Esther]

@freedomwriter76

GIRLLLL!!!!! 💖😭💖😭💖😭💖

That poem is BEAUTIFUL!!!! 😍🥰🤩💖

Amazing job!!! I relate to that poem so much! 😭💖

Thank you so much for sharing!!! 🥰🥰🥰

You’re so welcome!! <33

@lightoverdarkness6

MercyMe is awesome!! We love listening to them! (Especially the song “Happy Dance” XDXD)

@madelyn

It’s absolutely beautiful ✨❤️

Thank you so much!! 😊

@gwyndalf-the-wise

This is amazing, I love it! ❤️

Thx!! <3 So glad you did! 🙂

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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@esther-c

MercyMe is awesome!! We love listening to them! (Especially the song “Happy Dance” XDXD)

*Gasp* Oh YES!!! Happy Dance is awesome XDXD!! One of my favorites XD

(Also, on the topic of songs, on Saturday night, I went to my first church dance, (Finally old enough🥳🥳 😆) and your charries were on my mind all night, bc one of the songs that was played was “I Ain’t Worried”!!!! Ev and Ami are so sweet and hilarious!! I love their scenes) {You totally can’t tell that I love your charries can you XD}

#HugRikerSquad

[Esther]

@lightoverdarkness6

(Also, on the topic of songs, on Saturday night, I went to my first church dance, (Finally old enough🥳🥳 😆) and your charries were on my mind all night, bc one of the songs that was played was “I Ain’t Worried”!!!! Ev and Ami are so sweet and hilarious!! I love their scenes) {You totally can’t tell that I love your charries can you XD}

That sounds like so much fun!!!

Lol. XD That’s so funny! I know, Ev and Ami are the best!! I’m glad you love ‘em too! 😉😁 That’s super encouraging!! <33 😄

Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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