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  • #127582
    Anonymous
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      @godlyfantasy12. IKR!? My characters go through so much…all of them. <3

      Yeah, it wasn’t good. :'( I’ve read multiple books about it.

       

      YESSSS, so glad they have each other!!! <3333

      #127583
      GodlyFantasy12
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        @freedomwriter76 THANK YOU!! He is so great!

         

         

        in fact…

         

         

        SPOILER but

         

         

        in the end the plan is when Grimm leaves, he actually places Conan as “head of the pack” despite being a child.

         

        He knows that the rest of the rebels and everyone will help him grow and they’ll continue to be a family and no longer a dictatorship like Kainda wanted, and if anyone can be a wonderful leader, it will be Conan, the little boy whose lived through it, is one of the persecuted, and still has that childlike innocence, but also a maturity in him most don’t.

         

        Because Grimm knows he can’t stay. He can’t lead anymore. He just…can’t.

         

        and that opens the door for him to go with Ara and the group.

        #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
        #ProtectMarcel
        #ProtectSeb

        #127585
        Anonymous
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          @godlyfantasy12. I think I’ll bring them in…I haven’t gotten to write them a whole lot yet, and I really want them to be developed more. XD

          #127586
          Anonymous
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            @godlyfantasy12. You are sooo welcome!!!!

            And aww, REALLY!? That’s great! Probably no one else Grimm trusted enough to do that other than Conan, probably…which makes me want to cry over Grimm…ughhhhh!!! XD

            My favs are definitely, not necessarily in this order, November, Grimm, and Paxton. Those three…just, <33333333

            But I love Ara and Lyn and Luna and Corvina too! I just don’t know a whole lot about Luna yet…still learning about her. XD

            Ohhhh…and Arthur. I love him too. XD

            #127587
            GodlyFantasy12
            @godlyfantasy12
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              @freedomwroter76 thank u!!!

              And I totally understand the guys are my favs also!

               

              Oh and don’t forget Nyx! (Ik u didn’t mean to 😉)

               

              And yes Luna is still being developed so I’m still learning about her too, and I like so far where she’s going. But still got a lot of developing to go.

               

               

              And yes, Grimm trust him and Otsana the most of all the rebels, and He knows Otsana will continue to groom Conan and be his right hand just as she was to Grimm while he was there.

              #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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              #127709
              Hobbitchild
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                Leroy Arvengton, the oldest son of a very rich family, showed his intelligence by graduating high school when he was ten.

                Just when he has his sights set on college, his parents suddenly die in an accident. Leroy is ripped away from his familiar life and shipped to a secretive school called Eximus on a mysterious island.

                Leroy learns that the school is made up of ten geniuses, himself included, and that the goal of each of them is to prove that they are the best of the crop through a series of tests. If they succeed, the president of the school promises them a tempting prize. If they lose, they will be eliminated…whatever that means.

                 

                Yes, that was copy/paste hehe. It’s still technically kind of a WIP because I haven’t settled on a title yet. @madelyn can you repeat some of the titles you suggested yesterday?

                #127751
                GodlyFantasy12
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                  @hobbitchild THAT SOUNDS AWESOME!!!

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                  #127756
                  Hobbitchild
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                    @godlyfantasy12

                    Whoops actually nine geniuses. I changed it!

                    #127766
                    Keilah H.
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                      @freedomwriter76 Ooh, your group sounds awesome. I, sadly, don’t have too many outside of the ones already created in the fanfic universes I write in. But…I mean…..I suppose I could explain Victory Squad’s story if you want…..

                      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                      #127767
                      Keilah H.
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                        @hobbitchild Very cool! I’d read it!

                        Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                        #127778
                        GodlyFantasy12
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                          Y’all…..

                           

                           

                          Ummm….

                           

                          Ok so I’ve had these moments before, where my characters or things about my books come out and it’s lik Realization moments and im like GASP…. Oh my gosh I didn’t Know that about this characters/thing or whatever

                           

                          I call it Characters talking to me and such XD

                           

                           

                          its actually how I found out about November and Corvinas big plot twist (because believe it or not that wasn’t planned from the get go, that came about one night while I was lying in bed)

                           

                           

                           

                          Umm that just happened again with a villain character and I realized his motivation….

                           

                          And now…while this character remains a villain and does NOT get redeemed…

                           

                          Unlike others…I…

                           

                           

                          Feel for this character….like…a lot….

                           

                          And this is coming from the girl who doesn’t feel really for Lilith or Kainda….

                           

                           

                          And this is a character that we all…umm…

                           

                          Hate is a strong word but yea….

                           

                           

                           

                           

                           

                           

                           

                          Yall 😳

                           

                           

                          And obviously it doesn’t make anything he does good or give him reason but I actually kinda feel for him!

                           

                           

                          WHICH IS CRAZY AND U WILL REALLY THINK SO WHEN U FIND OUT WHO IT IS….

                          @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @felicity @esther-c

                          #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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                          #127786
                          MineralizedWritings
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                            @godlyfantasy12

                            Oh my 😳 who could it be?

                             

                            You might be interested to know that you actually helped me figure something out about one of my characters.

                            Yes. You.

                            🤣

                             

                            That comment you made about Layson the other day is going to be one of Everly’s lines 😂🤣

                            IT JUST WORKS SO WELL!!!

                            I wasn’t sure how I wanted everything to develop between them, and I was thinking about what you had said, and I just realized it was the perfect thing for her to say to Lesli! 😂

                            She’s going to like wait till the boys are out of earshot, and just be like “OH MY GOSH LAYSONS HOOOT”

                            I have yet to figure out Lesli’s reaction 😂

                            へびは かっこいい です!

                            #127790
                            Light
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                              @godlyfantasy12

                              Whoa! :(l). I’m so curious now!! XD

                              Wait a second….Is it who I think it is??? Oh gosh lol.

                              I Must know!!!! XDXD

                              #HugRikerSquad

                              #127793
                              GodlyFantasy12
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                                @lightoverdarkness6 it probably is!

                                 


                                @mineralizedwritings
                                OH MY GOSH REALLY?! That’s so cool!!

                                 

                                (even if u end up not using it lol!)

                                 

                                But if u do, then when it’s out I can be like OH MY GOSH LOOK GUYS THIS LINE WAS ACTUALLY MADE CUZ OF ME XD XD

                                 

                                 

                                 

                                 

                                 

                                also….

                                 

                                 

                                 

                                 

                                Its Aramis yall…

                                #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                                #ProtectMarcel
                                #ProtectSeb

                                #127795
                                Light
                                @lightoverdarkness6
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                                  @godlyfantasy12

                                  *Fistpumps* YES!! I got it!! Girl, I haven’t said anything, but I’ve kinda felt bad for him…a TINY bit. Bc, having such a mother, he couldn’t really help being the way he is. And with all the stuff that happens with him and Paxton, and how he couldn’ve been if he had been redeemed and they could have had a sweet brotherly relationship…just, it is kinda sad 😥.

                                  #HugRikerSquad

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