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Erica started the topic Another End of Year Book Party in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I believe last year there was a topic of the week for discussing the books we’ve all read this year. I really looked forward to being able to be a part of it (I made a list of every book I read this year!) but seeing how it’s the last day of 2022 (THAT was weird to say!!) and I don’t think anyone’s doing topic of the weeks (topics of the week?)…[Read more]
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn @arien @booksandbeakers @lewilliams
Next Post…..Part Two of the Annie Adams story. Enjoy. Or ignore.…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic New WIP idea!! in the forum Sci-Fi 1 year, 10 months ago
Hey there!
Awhile ago I had to write a paper for school, and I decided to write about black holes. I got an idea for a plot . . .
So two boys, Jaedyn and his brother (who needs a name, probably either Rylan or Kardon or maybe something else), their sister Zona and her boyfriend Dylan, get somehow sucked inside a black hole. I need to figure out…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Hey there! Haven’t talked to you in a while 😊
I honestly stopped it because the romance was getting uncomfortable and there were several inappropriate scenes/comments.
I noticed that a lot of people on the library website commented about that. I only read the first three books, so I didn’t get into that a lot.
Aside from that, I didn’t l…
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Orielle2023 started the topic Annie Adams: A Historical Fiction Novella in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn @arien @booksandbeakers @lewilliams
Here is a little something for anyone who likes historical fiction…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Hey everyone! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m going to tag some other KeePers… 😀
@arien @orielle21 @starofthenorth @freedomwriter76 @folith-feolin @madelyn @theloonyone @loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic A Short Christmas Story…Critiques Appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]
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Arien started the topic Why did you start writing? Why are you still writing? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 11 months ago
For me, I can’t even remember why I started writing. I was bored, I guess, and I asked Mom for a piece of paper and started writing a rip-off of a Boxcar Children book. I got a few chapters in, then abandoned it. I was maybe 8 at the time. And I wrote some stories about my stuffed animals. Later I tried to write a novel about a cowgirl. *hides in…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
So this past year @arien and I started reading the Keeper of the Lost Cities series. We got three-four books in before deciding to stop reading.
So I’m wondering what you guys think about the books.
Personally, I felt they were very intense, with all the mind control and brokenness, etc. At first I thought Sophie’s mind-reading powers were just…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Hello Hello!!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 11 months ago
I’ll tag some other KeePers to come say hi!
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @sarafini @elishavet-pidyon @kathleen-ramm @esther-c @theloonyone
Here’s chapter three of my WIP Overcome if anyone’s interested!
Any feedback you might have is very welcome! 😀
Glossary of…[Read more]
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Erica started the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 11 months ago
Hey!
So in my WIP, I have this creature that needs a name. They live underground in caves.
I picture them as a cross between Ridgerunners, Oompa Loompas, and squirrels. They’re about fourish feet tall.
They’re also slightly evil.
If any artists want to draw them, I’d love to see it!
@mineralizedwritings @madelyn @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loop…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @sarafini @esther-c @everyone
Here is Chapter 2, for anyone who wants to read it. This is my first draft, to be clear, and I am looking for any feedback and critiques…[Read more]
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Felicity started the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @anyoneandeveryone
Here is the first chapter of my WIP Overcome for anyone who wants to read it! I hope you all enjoy. Please critique it ruthlessly.
Glossary of…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 12 months ago
Thanks! It’s honestly fun *evil writer laugh*
How are they going to make up? I’m sure you know though 😁😂
Ehh–actually I don’t. Quite. Yet.
I also saw that you said romance is only a subplot. What is the first genre?
Hmm, I don’t know exactly what the genre is. Fantasy, but anything more specific than that I don’t know. B…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 12 months ago
I wrote a really long answer and posted it. It didn’t work and got deleted. So here’s a much shorter version!
I don’t think I’ve ever heard anyone say they liked Boromir though. I’m curious, why? 🙂
I had like a two-hundred-word response on why I like Boromir, but uh, yeah. It’s gone now. 🤪 Ahhh…. Anyway, I don’t know if he’s my absol…[Read more]
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Felicity replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 12 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper
Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.
“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 12 months ago
Aw thanks!!
I love to see the build-up of emotion in Christopher’s body language before he snaps at her.
I agree. I love body language lol. 🙂
Also, I think it’d really add to the heartbreak of the scene if you included an undercurrent of pain, of the awareness they both have that they’re breaking the relationship they had. Even thoug…
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 12 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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