Erica

@theloonyone

Yeah!

Old writing 😳 oh dear.

One of my oldest writings is a cinderella retelling which I believe was just me taking the opportunity to write myself being better than my sister… I mean it isn’t like I named a stepsister after her… but it had some kind of mental connection 🤣

Not my proudest moment

@theloonyone

😍😲😍 I LOVE it! Your art is so good! And the panel formatting is so cool! So excited that you’re working on this! I’ve already loved your first two chapters, but two see it in comic book format?! YES!

Thank you!! (I’m super excited about it too, also overwhelmed 😂) And also… you actually have met Layson, he’s a side character in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you!! <33

Glad you like it! Of course I started at this point in the book because for quite some time I won’t have to draw girls… I’m not very good at that 🤣

And also Layson is the easiest character I have to draw, like once I get his basic features right it just looks like him almost every time. So yeah, problem solved…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Glad to be of service!! 😉

Oooh, I love that scene!! You’re doing great with the tension between them 😀

@theloonyone @whale-keeper @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @freedomwriter76 @felicity @Folith-feolin @loopylin @ava-blue @anyone

I have kinda sorta started doing the comics for my book, but really I’m just going to try it in a bunch of different ways to figure out the most efficient way to do it. I’m moving pretty slow with this because it’s time…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Ah yes complaining… that’s a hard but important one 😂

@freedomwriter76

I had a alright thanksgiving, first one without my sister!

Our sermon was about how we should treat disabled people just like others, and how it’s important to not act like they are a burden on the church, but do whatever it takes to get them to church because they have stuff to offer too and are made in the image of God just…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you, that helps a lot!

I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features in my mind.

Thank you! I enjoy describing how I see the characters in my mind, but I didn’t want t…[Read more]

Yes, I finally made it out of being a bumbling henchman! I’d much rather be a rebel, especially a charismatic one 😛

@lightoverdarkness6

Hello and nice to meet you!

First off, I love your name!

Thank you! Arien is a kind of obscure character in The Silmarillion, and when I found it, I thought that’s cool, I think I’ll make that my pen name! 🙂

I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a young teenage girl who loves writing, reading, playing piano, and exploring in the woods nea…

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@felicity

Thank you, and thank your brother and sister too! It was great to get three opinions! (And I’m glad they were all positive, LOL!)

The twin dynamic is fun. As for personalities, I’m sort of getting that Aedan is resourceful, alert and protective of his sister.

Yay, I’m glad you liked it! And yes, that is Aedan. He’s kind of developed mo…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

The only thing I might suggest is just making it a little longer, for a first chapter it was pretty short.

I know, I write kind of short chapters. When I was younger, I used waaaay too much description and purple prose. Then I reacted against that and barely described anything at all. Now I’m trying to train myself back into…[Read more]

@theloonyone @folith-feolin @loopylin @anyone!

Cool! I used campfire write for awhile, and might use it more later, but in-putting all the character info I already had (semi) organized in my writing book was a lot of work and I figured I already had it all in one place to begin with.

If you don’t mind, I’m going to put here what I’m currently…[Read more]

@arien

Your WIP sounds good! I read the first chapter that you posted on here a while ago, and I liked the way you used their diaries for flashbacks and telling the story.

Thanks!

 It’s so fun!

Ikr! It helps with planning too.

Thanks for showing me how to quote!

Yeah!

@koshka

So I’ve been stalking this page…you have to agree it’s super fun to read!

Nyx turned around, eyes wide with horror. “And you’re still in highschool?!”

Hilarious! I love it! 😀

@lightoverdarkness

<3 <3 Samwise the Brave! 😀

@felicity

Girl! You’re totally fine😊. IKR?! It’s sooo good! Sam is precious.❤️🥰😊.

@madelyn

Thanks for posting that! I was wondering about that myself…

@lightoverdarkness6

I know that LotR quote was for @starofthenorth…but that part gets me every time! Sam is too wonderful!!!