Kingdom Pen | Kayleigh Idea | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/kayleigh-idea/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Kayleigh Idea. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 dfff911c517a3ab8e7d9f81faabf679e Faith Q. started the topic Calling all storytellers... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/calling-all-storytellers/ Fri, 25 Feb 2022 05:48:32 -0500 Okay, y’all, so I recently finished my YA fantasy novel.

*cues the high-pitched screams*

But my next project is a middle-grade novel featuring a 12-year-old MC who gets herself into all sorts of scrapes.

The problem is, I’m not naturally a humorous writer. It’s something I’m trying to work on in this story, true, but a very not funny writer…[Read more]

]]> 5d6628568ea0feb90224a67289532da7 Lin started the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-505/ Mon, 21 Feb 2022 20:47:47 -0500 Hello, one and all! For those of you who are newer, we used to have some topics called “Writer’s Corner” or something like that, but I’m far too lazy to search for the previous ones or consult how many of these we have been through, so we can just start a new one.

This thread is just a place for off-topic chats, where we can talk about our day or…[Read more]

]]> a2d7aa7bf92afb7c25d0dbe3e897ec1c GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/characteristic-lines/page/9/#post-109122 Thu, 17 Feb 2022 05:34:41 -0500 Can we get this up and running again with brand new lines from characters? I still don’t really have many….but maybe we can expand this to be lines of not just dialogue but just very short bits of our books?

@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h@elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms @morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q@power [Read more]

]]> 50f2dcf5d7defb5ccde7978a837599bf GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/developing-a-new-story-idea-help-xd/#post-109046 Sat, 12 Feb 2022 22:38:33 -0500 @kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h @elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms@morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q @power @devastate-lasting @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @abigail-m@autumn-rebecca  @e-k-seaver @daisy-torres @gracie-j @libby @kayleigh-idea @r-m-archer @maryg3 @scoutfinch180 @writerlexi1216…[Read more]

]]> 3c6fede3f6d41378904555f5603d5865 Keilah H. replied to the topic Some questions about characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/some-questions-about-characters/#post-109036 Fri, 11 Feb 2022 22:12:23 -0500 Tagging some more people….

@trahia-the-minstrel @elanor @writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile @daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @m…[Read more]

]]> b7c2a44d9f49bb3f808f23fffe9723a0 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/poem-for-my-book-draft/ Thu, 10 Feb 2022 21:12:21 -0500 OK SO! I know where I’m posting this might be A BIT WEIRD BUT HEAR ME OUT!!!!

So as of rn my second book in fantasy series, (the second book is Project DM) has a looong poem in it. I have just gone back and revised the poem and when I finished I was kinda blown away ngl, and I really like it so I wanted to share it with y’all! So this is kinda a…[Read more]

]]> e93ffa068329c32d8791909ef0c6d078 Trahia the Minstrel started the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-website-is-up-and-functional/ Thu, 10 Feb 2022 08:07:08 -0500 Eeek! I’m so excited! After ages, and my website being put up on the 31st of January, it’s finally fully functional (except for the privacy policy, I’m still working on that cause I’m bad at formal language😅) .

I’m so thrilled to share this with you guys!

My website URL is Hadassah.nz !

I hope you’ll enjoy the content on it! If any of you want…[Read more]

]]> cad82a74e7acbf1ff3110ea2ef897d58 Keilah H. started the topic I finally read Green Ember!! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-finally-read-green-ember/ Mon, 31 Jan 2022 19:15:42 -0500 I finally started reading the Green Ember series and I love it! It’s so cool how the writer did the whole story with wolves and eagles (rabbit predators) as villains and rabbits as heroes. And the lore behind it and backstory–all so cool! I’m on the third book right now. What did you think of it? Who’s your favorite character? I honestly love a…[Read more]

]]> 8618ec6f8150b8c753a4f42d86c57cd9 Faith Q. started the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-is-it-okay-to-defy-the-government/ Sat, 20 Nov 2021 05:52:13 -0500 Okay, y’all, I’ve got a dilemma on my hands.

To give you a bit of background information, my main character (Emeric Dertok) has recently come back into society after eight years of living the life of a hermit. He’s working for the King (Jornan), who charged him with the task of tracking down spies trying to sabotage the government. But as enters…[Read more]

]]> e50010849da8e850c99497ad6f0aa088 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/switching-gears-im-writing-an-allegorical-fantasy-now/ Fri, 29 Oct 2021 17:09:42 -0400 @lydia-s @elanor @libby @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h@elfwing  @gracie-j @jenwriter17 @issawriter7@trahia-the-minstrel @maryg3 @kayleigh-idea @lucy @madelyn@anatra23 @scoutfinch180 @mkfairygirl @precious-y @beth-darlene @abigail-m @seekjustice @nova21 @hallie-jean @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @devastate-lasting @e-k-seaver…[Read more]

]]> e72a3ed19d0e75d8cac45041d1d03d98 Keilah H. started the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/worldbuilding-in-a-dystopian-novel/ Tue, 26 Oct 2021 18:13:42 -0400 Hey everyone! Keilah here. I’m currently worldbuilding on a dystopian/sci-fi/fantasy world, and I’d like your feedback on it!

The premise I have so far (for the first book anyway, I might make it a series):

Torrent Starcatcher has had a hard life.

She was born into a universe in turmoil; the violent dictator Indy has been in control since before…

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]]> 400e9d406593089ffb8e44c628243f29 Elfwing started the topic Blog!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/blog/ Sat, 18 Sep 2021 05:06:16 -0400 hi peoples!! I made a website and blog, it was only done today, so there’s very little on it right now, but I wanna put it out there because I have big plans!

For subscribers, there’ll be sneak peeks of my books, which I am looking to publish soon, and more!

http://www.elfwingsadventures.com

@kathleenramm @elanor @abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-s…[Read more]

]]> fcd94a03a5031e909be1fbf92418acf0 Elfwing replied to the topic Share your blog in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/share-your-blog/page/2/#post-104591 Sat, 18 Sep 2021 04:47:23 -0400 @kayleigh-idea i just made mine today!

http://www.elfwingsadventures.com

i literally just started so there’s not much on it.

]]> 19e6014a17ed3e885f4886c6b9372913 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/#post-104585 Fri, 17 Sep 2021 21:38:22 -0400 Feel free to tag others.
@writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene@lydia-s @buildsbygideon @devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile@daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @millennium…[Read more]

]]> a0dd6d8529232928fb0d1b7277b5bd05 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/multiple-protagonists/ Sun, 12 Sep 2021 00:49:00 -0400 @writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]

]]> e9987bbdc0ccc3441880067254f94272 Mary G started the topic 1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/1st-chapter-critique-for-the-inventors-daughter/ Thu, 02 Sep 2021 01:59:51 -0400 Hi all,

I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!

God bless!

@joy-caroline,@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, <…[Read more]

]]> e84b1f5ffa6f76244e05c50c2678bddf Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/#post-103790 Tue, 24 Aug 2021 23:34:03 -0400 @morgan @precious-y @sparksaraabbott11 @elfwing @kathleenramm @maryg3 @e-k-seaver @writerlexi1216 @lydia-s @nanisnook @lewilliams @relia @hallie-jean @anatra23 @iluvhim18 @jenwriter17 @keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-malie @when-i-see-the-kingdom @akbaer @zatara @elanor @see…[Read more]

]]> d0516cb2f77629089f8e3a609068997e GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Cover Design in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cover-design-2/#post-103719 Sat, 21 Aug 2021 23:40:55 -0400 @writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]

]]> 366f8dd39ea3ffb00ca3645c64f1cf7d GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/making-my-antagonist-believable-likeable-at-first-anyway/#post-103284 Sun, 08 Aug 2021 18:39:55 -0400 @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @sparksaraabbott11 @maryg3 @writerlexi1216 @nova21 @scripter-of-kingdoms @jenwriter17 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @elfwing @iluvhim18 @kathleenramm @seekjustice @e-k-seaver @faith-q @daisy-torres @lewilliams @jodi-maile @kayleigh-idea @relia @anatra23

]]> 413468f5b941897eaab8f638c6391e7a Mary G started the topic Advice for starting a Blog/Porfolio in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/advice-for-starting-a-blog-porfolio/ Thu, 05 Aug 2021 23:56:53 -0400 Hey ya’ll,

As you can see by the title, I’m trying to start a Portfolio/Blog. I’m using Wix to host it. Does anyone have any tips or advice on making an engaging website, and what it should/shouldn’t include? Also, when you have a blog, I’ve read that you should stick to one topic, is that true?? Or can I write about anything I think people would…[Read more]

]]> 81ec610eae21fd788c05a2226ce02b19 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Animated Movie in the forum Film https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/animated-movie-2/#post-102917 Mon, 02 Aug 2021 02:02:42 -0400 @devastate-lasting @valtmy @libby@issawriter7 @jenwriter17 @daisy-torres @elfwing @mkfairygirl @writerlexi1216 @keilah-h@nanisnook @abigail-m @lydia-s@when-i-see-the-kingdom @ilena-louise@jodi-maile @lucy @seekjustice@lewilliams @g_c_al @millennium, @wyn-rose @kayleigh-idea  @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @relia @molly@maryg3

]]> 61f89066e67e12fc721e68ef18662159 Keilah H. replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/#post-102838 Fri, 30 Jul 2021 19:06:27 -0400 copy-pastes a bunch of…[Read more]

]]> b6fd3009a8b5194501f9a4d533489c21 Faith Q. started the topic Maps (creative title, I know) in the forum Fantasy https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/maps-creative-title-i-know/ Fri, 30 Jul 2021 02:30:16 -0400 Okey-doke, guys, so I’m a pantser. I started out my novel with pretty much no idea of what was going to happen when, where or to whom, and now I’m at the point (eight chapters in, actually) that I really, really need to know what my world looks like. (Kudos to all those people that know this stuff starting out, by the way.) So… how do you guys…[Read more]

]]> 5bb8ad59b7c6b1a9dd3371a2dcb72a2b ella replied to the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-continue-a-character-arc-in-a-series/#post-102646 Tue, 27 Jul 2021 17:01:30 -0400 @kayleigh-idea

Hey Kayleigh!!  Of course!  That’s a great idea, I definitely get wanting that feeling of satisfaction. 🙂

@elfwing

Hey Elfwing!  Thanks!!  Oh I totally get that!!  That’s an awesome idea, thanks for the advice!

@daisy-torres

Hey Daisy!  Aw, thanks!!  That’s super helpful, especially the part about realizing that he can love <…[Read more]

]]> 81d1630b95a6d6130c0464ee85741847 ella started the topic What are the 1st three things your MC says? in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/what-are-the-1st-three-things-your-mc-says/ Mon, 26 Jul 2021 23:34:23 -0400 The title says it all, folks.  I just thought it might be fun to compare what your character says to see if the dialogue truly matches their personality or not.

So I’ll share mine first!

MC is Dylan, who is stubborn, quiet, and strong-willed.  A little self-protective.  Lmk if his dialogue fits his personality.

1)  “Better.”  (*rolls eyes…

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]]> 34e877928d6d708efd530ed5d033c19d ella started the topic How do you continue a character arc in a series? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-continue-a-character-arc-in-a-series/ Sat, 24 Jul 2021 19:46:00 -0400 Hey guys!  Before I tell you my problemo, I’ll fill you in on the story first.  Here’s They Came At Night’s synopsis:

24 miles off the Island of Camino, a commercial airline goes down in the Pacific. Only one passenger survives.
Dylan, an orphan-turned-foster child, was living with his uncle when he got the chance of a lifetime: travel to the i…

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]]> f4235f55c10b64f89b9c1af99047e95f GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'M MAKING A WEBSITE!!! YAY! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-making-a-website-yay/page/3/#post-102542 Sat, 24 Jul 2021 01:11:58 -0400 @gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]

]]> 47505adb05a4367e736be76f93928188 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Writing A Christian Fantasy-HELP in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-a-christian-fantasy-help/ Thu, 22 Jul 2021 23:59:40 -0400 @gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]

]]> 36ba98d6c81c693bc615089959b9be66 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'M MAKING A WEBSITE!!! YAY! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-making-a-website-yay/page/2/#post-102483 Thu, 22 Jul 2021 21:03:50 -0400 @gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]

]]> 9526cef26a475cdd88b7cbb5f4340169 Keilah H. started the topic How do you name your characters? in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-name-your-characters/ Sat, 03 Jul 2021 22:19:23 -0400 Hey everyone! I’m a little stuck on names for my characters. Every one of my stories has at least one character with a unique name–even my many fanfictions have tons of OCs (original characters) alongside those belonging to the original story. I want to know how you choose your characters’ names. Here’s how I do it:

  1. I stick with natural names…

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]]> f164eceedf07439f00b5112ce8f8642a Katherine replied to the topic Free story through July 4th in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/free-story-through-july-4th/#post-101726 Sat, 03 Jul 2021 18:12:20 -0400 So, I’m tagging a bunch of people cuz I don’t know who will be interested, but please the post above! 🙂

@writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @keilah-h @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @devastate-lasting @reli…[Read more]

]]> a241e2c8b089edfdacc5625ae0d4bf28 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic New Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-book-ideas/ Wed, 30 Jun 2021 20:43:38 -0400 @gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]

]]> 1037781025ae57f64da91d49f77c081d GodlyFantasy12 started the topic I'M MAKING A WEBSITE!!! YAY! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-making-a-website-yay/ Sun, 27 Jun 2021 01:04:03 -0400 @gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-i-see-the-kingdom, @ilena-louise, @daisy-torres, @jodi-maile, @lucy, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @seekjustice, @lewilliams, @e-k-seaver, @kathleenramm, @g_c_al, @millennium, @wyn-rose, @kayleigh-idea, @not-so-secre…[Read more]

]]> ceb19a3849ac62a4773a193c19fadd57 ella started the topic Help! I'm stuck on themes... :( in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/help-im-stuck-on-themes/ Fri, 25 Jun 2021 17:46:45 -0400 Hi KeePers!  I’ve been reading over some of my old writing and I’m a little discouraged right now.  It’s not that my books are unbiblical or unethical, it’s just that I’m lacking strong, foundational themes in my books recently.  I’ve been trying to add them in, but they seem a little forced and/or preachy.  (It might also be that the genres I wri…[Read more]

]]> 78d567f6dbdfd9062f1d151c9f815608 Kathleen replied to the topic What's your favorite Backstory? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-your-favorite-backstory/#post-101188 Thu, 24 Jun 2021 00:25:27 -0400 @kayleigh-idea

That totally makes sense! I too like more complex characters over simple ones.

]]> 078e6b10e304c28c3cd02b7024249cff Kathleen replied to the topic What's your favorite Backstory? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-your-favorite-backstory/#post-101137 Tue, 22 Jun 2021 19:12:21 -0400 @joy-caroline

I’m happy I’m not the only broken record on here. You just like what you like you know? XD

I don’t think I’ve heard of the Casson Family series before, but from the little you said about it, it sounds really interesting. Do you have a favorite book and character from the series?

@kayleigh-idea @ribbonash

I’ve yet to read Six of…[Read more]

]]> 2efa8ebe6f76c981fb9d5d3fc261f7a8 Ribbonash replied to the topic What's your favorite Backstory? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-your-favorite-backstory/#post-101045 Mon, 21 Jun 2021 11:14:28 -0400 @kayleigh-idea

I 100% agree with you there! Their backstories are amazing and the ones I was thinking of when I thought of backstories.

]]> 43977603fd4aa99924a3a19e08243353 ella started the topic superfun charrie development sheet that i made! in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/superfun-charrie-development-sheet-that-i-made/ Sat, 01 May 2021 21:02:55 -0400 hiya friends!

I researched some fun ways to develop characters, and i thought some of y’all might be interested…  feel free to use this, i hope it helps!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W1WFRg0dkC9FwdnjtjtsccqiUKOdx22LMlw1KKtn_F0/edit?usp=sharing

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairyg…[Read more]

]]> 715fee07aa1e86cb5c0ecbb0ea5dad5c ella replied to the topic YA Fantasy Retelling Alpha Readers Needed in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ya-fantasy-retelling-alpha-readers-needed/page/4/#post-98020 Sun, 18 Apr 2021 01:31:43 -0400 @kayleigh-idea

Hey!  Can I finish the last one tomorrow?  So sorry for taking awhile–I’ve super, super busy!!!

But thank you so much for letting me read and critique your story!!  I wish you the best with editing, publishing, and your whole Project Gorgon journey!!!!  You’ve got talent, and I’m so glad you’re using it to glorify God!

Best,

Ella

]]> 8d49678c6a50fbddf2670daccd165993 Scoutillus Finch started the topic Another revision of Ice in the forum Short Story Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/another-revision-of-ice/ Tue, 13 Apr 2021 18:28:05 -0400 Hey, everyone!

@devastate-lasting @nova21 @joy-caroline @gracie-j @writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @scripter-of-kingdoms @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @kayleigh-idea @anyone-else

Hi, y’all! so this is the third time I’ve asked for y’all’s opinion on Ice, do this if you’ve got time, I know everyone’s busy with their own stuff.😊

Here are some questions…[Read more]

]]> b206bdccf0b57f49192f2971f9864964 ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/wip-chat/page/49/#post-97548 Tue, 13 Apr 2021 01:14:13 -0400 @joelle-stone

Welcome Joelle!!  If you need help, I’d gladly give some!!  just let me know what you have in mind.  (No one’s really on here recently, sadly.  I’m gonna try to get it back up and running… )

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @abigail-m, @jenwriter17, @lydia-s, @when-…[Read more]

]]> 026a715a2e4d08a2c8d474ee97f2963e ella started the topic Awesome Poll: Mystery/Thriller Book COVERS!! :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/awesome-poll-mystery-thriller-book-covers/ Sun, 11 Apr 2021 22:23:43 -0400 Hello everyone, I’m back… this time with book covers!  But before I share the link, here’s the stats for titles:

  • Spirals–5
  • Dark Thing Wandering–4
  • Midsummer–2
  • The Space In Time–2
  • If I Could See Myself–2
  • When I Dream–2
  • Like Hope I Never Die–2
  • The Cabin in the Woods–1

Soooo, it appears Spirals wins!  With that in mind, let…[Read more]

]]> 14c7bf1cab35736e7c5501ed88e48ee6 ella started the topic Fun Poll: Mystery/Thriller Book Titles!! :) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fun-poll-mystery-thriller-book-titles/ Sat, 10 Apr 2021 23:13:32 -0400 Hello bestiest people ever!!! I’m back with a poll for y’all to take. First, though, let me do a few things…

1) I’m posting this poll first, then I’ll post another cover mock-up poll when I have the title results. I’ll let y’all know what the results are after. 😃

2) Here’s the synopsis:

All she remembers is watching the world tear itself…

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]]> 70c3ee7f2228b7940a7c4de29a34f5e2 ella started the topic in the forum Mystery https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/awesome-poll-mystery-thriller-book-titles/ Sat, 10 Apr 2021 22:57:23 -0400 Hello bestiest people ever!!!  I’m back with a poll for y’all to take.  First, though, let me do a few things…

1)  I’m posting this poll first, then I’ll post another cover mock-up poll when I have the title results.  I’ll let y’all know what the results are after. 😃

2)  Here’s the synopsis:

All she remembers is watching the world tear itse…

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]]> 474c5e77ef47099a5276c39cd4d67c1e ella started the topic Help! I don't know what to do next... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/help-i-dont-know-what-to-do-next/ Sun, 04 Apr 2021 19:48:28 -0400 Hi guys!  I need some brainstorming help for my Camp NaNo project…

Let me break it down:

Hope, MC, is living in the wild with no one except a stray dog as a friend.  She lives in a cabin in a valley, surrounded by cities full of hostile people (who are diseased).  The cabin is strange–there are weird sounds in the attic, strange knocks on th…[Read more]

]]> a04c41c668ac5217ff5eb563d4403828 ella replied to the topic YA Fantasy Retelling Alpha Readers Needed in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ya-fantasy-retelling-alpha-readers-needed/page/3/#post-95537 Sun, 14 Mar 2021 19:02:05 -0400 @kayleigh-idea

Yay! 🎉

]]> 0099f8a9ec6efe98b12c7c8b0dd0e238 Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Into the Lamp (YA fantasy) Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/into-the-lamp-ya-fantasy-critique/#post-95236 Thu, 11 Mar 2021 00:34:28 -0500 Oh, and some tagges:

@mkfairygirl @scripter-of-kingdoms @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @nova21 @abigail-m @imwritehere1920 @ribbonash @kayleigh-idea @godlyfantasy12 @millennium @daisy-torres @e-k-seaver @anyone-who-likes-fantasy @anyone-who-is-reading-this @colin-carlson…[Read more]

]]> d40d764d2785e664260f12b0c496398c ella replied to the topic YA Fantasy Retelling Alpha Readers Needed in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ya-fantasy-retelling-alpha-readers-needed/page/3/#post-94509 Mon, 01 Mar 2021 15:06:39 -0500 @kayleigh-idea

Great, thanks!!

]]> 7dd249b3837223f3d285c8d182be062e Elizabeth replied to the topic Share your blog in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/share-your-blog/page/2/#post-94063 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 19:09:58 -0500 @kayleigh-idea Oh, what a lovely topic!! I can’t wait to check out everyone’s blogs!

Mine is https://www.lewilliamsauthor.com. I haven’t been super active on there because I’m currently slogging my way through working on my senior thesis school has been a bit intense, but I hope to change that in the very near future.

]]> ef6821ea1efa89638abcde5fa876ddb5 Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Fortitude: Chapter Two Reading Request in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fortitude-chapter-two-reading-request-2/page/2/#post-93994 Wed, 24 Feb 2021 20:56:17 -0500 By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…

@jenwriter17 @kayleigh-idea @ribbonash @wyn-rose @daisy-torres @mkfairygirl @godlyfantasy12

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