Jasmine Godby

@jasmine-godby *spotlight flicks on you stepping out from the shadows*

Absolutely!! It’s exciting to have another KingdomPenner join!!

Yuussss fantastic books to love XD Question of the century about LW though. Who, in your opinion, should Jo have ended up with?

Okay I first read your WiP description as “About an evil queen who has to save her…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Awesome topic!!! Here’s a pretty decent one from my fantasy WIP. It needs punctuational edits though…

The clearing was silent. Not even a ryip’s chirp broke the stillness. The long grass was smashed and flattened, the brush along the edge of the trees looked like it had been trampled, and in many places, the sod had been ripped up i…

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@faith-q

Ah, yes, I understand. Honestly, I don’t really use maps. The places in my worlds pop into existence as I need them. It’s probably not the best way to make geological decisions, but it’s what I’ve done so far. 😉 I’m totally going to check out that website @daisy-torres mentioned though… it sounds awesome!!!

@e-k-seaver

Agh, this is such a tempting offer! Unfortunately, my plate is kinda full right now, so I don’t think I’d be able to get it done by the deadline. 🙁  I hope you get the feedback you’d like! Congrats on finishing a novel!

And, @gracie-j, thanks for tagging me!

@nova21

lol I may or may not feel very similarly about some of my characters… 😉

@nova21

I’m late (this is a theme in my commenting life rn… *facepalm*), but here are a couple of my MCs’ first lines. As a side note, BRILLIANT idea.

These two say their first three lines in the same scene and to each other. First, there’s Trevor, a moody, brooding bully (cinnamon roll type guy, though he doesn’t know it at the moment). Then,…[Read more]

@abigail-m

Oh, this looks lovely! Thank you for the invite. Hopefully, I’ll be able to read it sometime soon! <33

@zatara

Welcome to the forum!

*cheers* Another pineapple pizza person, yay! And I have to agree with your assessment of Narnia vs. LOTR. Tolkien wins, hands down (He is likely the author I admire most), but I also am and forever will be a Narnia nerd. 😛

Now for the customary welcoming questions:

1) What is your favorite mythical animal?

2)…[Read more]

@akbaer

Welcome to the forum, Annika!

I wholeheartedly approve of your hobbies as I myself enjoy all three of those things! And your book choices are also wonderful (J.R.R. Tolkien is probably the writer I admire most).

Fantasy is very fun to write and to read! Have you by chance read the DragonKeeper Chronicles by Donita K. Paul? It’s a…[Read more]

@maryg3

Oh, wonderful! Til We Have Faces is super good. Ah, I see. I’ve flipped through the first book virtually, but hopefully, I’ll actually get around to reading them someday. 😉

No, I have no read that one! I’ll have to do that someday, though.

Wow, he sounds extremely well written! (And don’t worry. I’m 16 and I still enjoy flipping…[Read more]

Of course!!! Good luck!!!

@godlyfantasy12 I think it’s a great idea!! You can make a lot with a yt channel nowadays! I would watch it!!!

@mkfairygirl EEEKKK that’s awesomeee!!! Congrats!!!

@faith-q Absolutely!! Glad to help!

@faith-q Personally, I cheat and use map generators like this: https://azgaar.github.io/Fantasy-Map-Generator/

(Although that’s rare, as I normally don’t make maps XD I, too, am a pantser…)

@e-k-seaver I’d love to read it and give feedback on it!! I haven’t read any dystopian in a while, so this will be fun!

(@gracie-j thanks for the tag!)

@kathleenramm Those lines sound amazing XD

@nova21 Bahaha sure thing! Only, you maay have to jump into the future at least 90 years XD

@devastate-lasting Haha thanks! I’m sure she’d love to be yours as well!