Kingdom Pen | Ariel | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/ariel-f/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Ariel. Fri, 24 Apr 2026 13:37:33 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 4364d69d16648a02e357ce035a14b9fe GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/need-some-advice-with-an-injury-scene/ Tue, 30 Aug 2022 21:45:49 -0400 HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)

SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]

]]> dd586aade4f07c3488eae3cd2d23e12e GodlyFantasy12 started the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-antagonist-corvina-and-her-problem/ Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:22:30 -0400 Hey everyone!! So, I know I’m still on the first draft of my first book of this series, buuuuut I already am thinking ahead a tooon and, well, im sure some of y’all have heard of my anatabonist (who I love) Corvina.

This post was actually made because I could use a little bit of help with something about her, and it also kinda includes ano…[Read more]

]]> a4062b7d0757929e676ded8630119ae2 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/major-wip-spoiler-forum/ Sat, 25 Jun 2022 16:59:36 -0400 I DID IT!! I FINALLY MADE IT!!

*regrets immediately*

JK. Anyway, I had this idea a while back to make this post where we could come here and talk about our WIPs and MAJOR SPOILERS AND PLOT TWISTS THAT WE ARE SOO EXCITED ABOUT AND HATE HAVING TO KEEP SECRET FROM FRIENDS AND FAMILY WITHOUT HAVING TO DISCLAIMER IN THE POST!!

 

Thus this forum was…[Read more]

]]> 7c79eecf09988dfd2a36518aa6424928 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/page/6/#post-110876 Wed, 11 May 2022 19:19:13 -0400 @denali-christianson @emilysf @e-m-tempke @koshka @keilah-h @issawriter7 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle @daisy-torres @trahia-the-minstrel @libby@lydia-s @e-k-seaver @mkfairygirl @seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm @jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3…[Read more]

]]> c74fc07ef480929613b5d7889d5f0bf8 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic NEW BLOG POST!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-blog-post/ Sat, 07 May 2022 18:54:56 -0400 HEY YALL! Its been a hot minute since I did a new blog post and I am SUPER excited about this one! I think it’ll help some people! Or at least I hope so!

Tags!!

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver…[Read more]

]]> 559d37e4f9ea37669d683dba5da5c99a GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/favorite-scenes-in-our-wips/ Thu, 05 May 2022 04:28:14 -0400 EEEEEE!!! SO I really wanted to make this cuz I really wanted to share my fav scenes I’ve made in my WIP so far/my favorite ideas for scenes and such….soooo YA! (I’ve also made a page for all sorts of fun Charrie stuff! I know I’ve made a lot of forum stuff 🤣)
ANYWHOODLE!! sooo, my process rn, isn’t really drafting full on chapters and scenes, i…[Read more]

]]> d4ddd26f4fd7eade0ddf0355cb75fc00 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/ Wed, 04 May 2022 21:32:02 -0400 SO AS THE TITLE STATES- this is pretty much where we post anything and everything about or CHARRIES!!! FROM AESTHETIC BOARDS TO MEMES ABOUT OUR BOOKS AND CHARRIES TO INSPIRATIONAL MUSIC RELATING TO THEM TO LYRICS THAT RELATE TO POEMS TO YEA WHATEVER.

 

I put this on here cuz I’ve made a TON of memes….

and I’ve made some aesthetics I wante…[Read more]

]]> 8f2b1d82660c46bd3bb0dba6803e676d GodlyFantasy12 started the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page....Woohoo in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-beloved-character-death-discussion-page-woohoo/ Mon, 25 Apr 2022 16:48:16 -0400 (WARNING SUPER LONG, RAMBLING, CHAOTIC POST. ALSO BIG SPOILER FOR WINGFEATHER SAGA IN ONE SECTION. IT IS WARNED AND CAN BE SKIPPED JUST WATCH FOR IT.)

Tags!!

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issaw…[Read more]

]]> 7d10fa75f9dd0dcc004d6c5d8c9944dd Mary G replied to the topic Themes! and Messages! and Plots!? OH, MY!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/themes-and-messages-and-plots-oh-my/#post-109986 Sat, 23 Apr 2022 21:21:05 -0400 Some tags:
@devastate-lasting @joy-caroline @gracie-j@scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon@jodi-maile @annabelle @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl@seekerofthetruth@kathleenramm @jenwriter17@nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice@sparrowhawke @maryg3 @relia@writerlexi1216…[Read more]

]]> acac0d0f6ead50d6506340051954227b GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Find my characters Want/Goal in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/find-my-characters-want-goal/#post-109638 Mon, 28 Mar 2022 23:53:06 -0400 AND SOME TAAAGS!!

 

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile@annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka@trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s@e-k-seaver @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl@seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm@jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing@seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3@relia @writerlexi1216…[Read more]

]]> 1bee0a9ea8c7021d298ba74627bbe3ac GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pitch-critique/#post-109569 Fri, 18 Mar 2022 01:58:49 -0400 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm @jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3 @relia @writerlexi1216 @nova21 @hallie-…[Read more]

]]> 044392dcfd8e8bfc964a7433e6e3c3a4 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-draft-write-the-first-document/ Tue, 15 Mar 2022 04:24:24 -0400 HELLO MY KEEEEEPERS!!! SO! I am currently drafting Project Garden as you know, and I have discovered that I am seriously Pantsing it. Like…legit. I’ve got ideas and obviously some plot and storyline but it’s just like…writing whatever comes which is honestly hard most of the time and easy sometimes. SO WEIRD!

ANYWAY!! I’m wondering how…[Read more]

]]> dfff911c517a3ab8e7d9f81faabf679e Faith Q. started the topic Calling all storytellers... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/calling-all-storytellers/ Fri, 25 Feb 2022 05:48:32 -0500 Okay, y’all, so I recently finished my YA fantasy novel.

*cues the high-pitched screams*

But my next project is a middle-grade novel featuring a 12-year-old MC who gets herself into all sorts of scrapes.

The problem is, I’m not naturally a humorous writer. It’s something I’m trying to work on in this story, true, but a very not funny writer…[Read more]

]]> 3c6fede3f6d41378904555f5603d5865 Keilah H. replied to the topic Some questions about characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/some-questions-about-characters/#post-109036 Fri, 11 Feb 2022 22:12:23 -0500 Tagging some more people….

@trahia-the-minstrel @elanor @writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile @daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @m…[Read more]

]]> cad82a74e7acbf1ff3110ea2ef897d58 Keilah H. started the topic I finally read Green Ember!! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-finally-read-green-ember/ Mon, 31 Jan 2022 19:15:42 -0500 I finally started reading the Green Ember series and I love it! It’s so cool how the writer did the whole story with wolves and eagles (rabbit predators) as villains and rabbits as heroes. And the lore behind it and backstory–all so cool! I’m on the third book right now. What did you think of it? Who’s your favorite character? I honestly love a…[Read more]

]]> 070a8503f67ffed842822ef724161adf Elanor started the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-make-a-non-cliche-escape-scene/ Sun, 21 Nov 2021 16:28:43 -0500 So a person escapes the bad guys. This is a characteristic of most every book I’ve read. I’m writing a prison escape in my current WIP and am wondering how to make it something that’s not just the same old thing.

Any tips and or advice would be gladly appreciated.

I’ll tag a bunch of people.

@kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor @abigail-m @precio…[Read more]

]]> 8618ec6f8150b8c753a4f42d86c57cd9 Faith Q. started the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-is-it-okay-to-defy-the-government/ Sat, 20 Nov 2021 05:52:13 -0500 Okay, y’all, I’ve got a dilemma on my hands.

To give you a bit of background information, my main character (Emeric Dertok) has recently come back into society after eight years of living the life of a hermit. He’s working for the King (Jornan), who charged him with the task of tracking down spies trying to sabotage the government. But as enters…[Read more]

]]> 7ff65521cd3f9e7e4eb2ffbd780f8b11 Mary G replied to the topic The Wait is OVER! My Blog Is published! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-wait-is-over-my-blog-is-published/#post-107412 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 05:33:26 -0500 @kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor@abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @morgan@precious-y @sparksaraabbott11@e-k-seaver@writerlexi1216 @lydia-s@nanisnook @lewilliams @relia@hallie-jean @anatra23@iluvhim18 @jenwriter17@keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @w…[Read more]

]]> e72a3ed19d0e75d8cac45041d1d03d98 Keilah H. started the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/worldbuilding-in-a-dystopian-novel/ Tue, 26 Oct 2021 18:13:42 -0400 Hey everyone! Keilah here. I’m currently worldbuilding on a dystopian/sci-fi/fantasy world, and I’d like your feedback on it!

The premise I have so far (for the first book anyway, I might make it a series):

Torrent Starcatcher has had a hard life.

She was born into a universe in turmoil; the violent dictator Indy has been in control since before…

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]]> 999802afff97dea457d7cb0acf00ac18 Lydia S. started the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/characteristic-lines/ Tue, 12 Oct 2021 23:19:54 -0400 So, I thought it’d be fun to share three of a character’s lines (or however many characters you want to do) that are distinctive to their personalities and could, by themselves, be used to describe your character. Here’s mine:

Character: Catherine Miranda Davis

“The day you come to court me, Rudy Newark, is the day I learn how to use Uncle J…

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]]> 3171b2288a5642e6de828c4814f7d6b7 Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/page/4/#post-104827 Sun, 03 Oct 2021 18:29:04 -0400 GUYYSSSS, IMAGINE IS RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃😃 *cough* Well, it technically released a couple of weeks ago. *cough cough* I’m just late at telling y’all about it. Anyway, the ebook is $0.99 and the paperback is $6.79. And here’s the link if you want to check it out:…[Read more]

]]> 400e9d406593089ffb8e44c628243f29 Elfwing started the topic Blog!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/blog/ Sat, 18 Sep 2021 05:06:16 -0400 hi peoples!! I made a website and blog, it was only done today, so there’s very little on it right now, but I wanna put it out there because I have big plans!

For subscribers, there’ll be sneak peeks of my books, which I am looking to publish soon, and more!

http://www.elfwingsadventures.com

@kathleenramm @elanor @abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-s…[Read more]

]]> 19e6014a17ed3e885f4886c6b9372913 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/#post-104585 Fri, 17 Sep 2021 21:38:22 -0400 Feel free to tag others.
@writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene@lydia-s @buildsbygideon @devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile@daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @millennium…[Read more]

]]> a0dd6d8529232928fb0d1b7277b5bd05 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/multiple-protagonists/ Sun, 12 Sep 2021 00:49:00 -0400 @writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]

]]> d812ada60c0ed1dfdd1975fc751aee6b Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/page/3/#post-104006 Tue, 31 Aug 2021 23:35:58 -0400 @ariel-f @lydia-s Thank you!!!! I hope you love it!!!

@nova21 Eee, I’m sooo excited too!!!!!!! 😀

@jodi-maile Yay, I’m so happy you think so!!!!! 😀 Aw, thanks!!! You’re SO welcome!!!!!

]]> e84b1f5ffa6f76244e05c50c2678bddf Katherine replied to the topic Imagine Anthology in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/imagine-anthology/#post-103790 Tue, 24 Aug 2021 23:34:03 -0400 @morgan @precious-y @sparksaraabbott11 @elfwing @kathleenramm @maryg3 @e-k-seaver @writerlexi1216 @lydia-s @nanisnook @lewilliams @relia @hallie-jean @anatra23 @iluvhim18 @jenwriter17 @keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-malie @when-i-see-the-kingdom @akbaer @zatara @elanor @see…[Read more]

]]> d0516cb2f77629089f8e3a609068997e GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Cover Design in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cover-design-2/#post-103719 Sat, 21 Aug 2021 23:40:55 -0400 @writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]

]]> 7a9bc6e62dc4a96ec15a12e241a629d3 Daisy Torres posted an update: Guys, my aunt was just rushed to the emergency room with a […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/104681/ Wed, 11 Aug 2021 14:15:51 -0400 Guys, my aunt was just rushed to the emergency room with a brain aneurism!! I know this isn’t writing related at all, but could y’all please pray for her?? She has a husband and two children and isn’t ready to leave this world yet. Thank y’all so muchh!!

@gracie-j @abigail-m @nova21 @writerlexi1216 @scripter-of-kingdoms @ariel-f @anyoneelse

]]> 18 8ace0d9d68d99f69d3b5930977514279 Kathleen replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-the-most-recent-book-youve-finished-2/page/2/#post-103340 Tue, 10 Aug 2021 01:14:38 -0400 @ariel-f

That’s interesting. It would be cool to look back through the book to find what exactly it was missing that made you unable to connect. That’s what I love to do when I read a book I don’t like. Pinpoint everything little thing that made me dislike it. It really helps me out with my writing.

Ooo, what book was the best book you’ve read…[Read more]

]]> 51199fdecc8b27ad341909a2aea50f90 Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beta-readers-needed/#post-103332 Mon, 09 Aug 2021 21:16:38 -0400 @keilah-h ok!! *crack knuckles and sweats nervously XD

first beta reader down XD roseoakauthor at gmail dot com 🙂

@ariel-f it’s 61684

 

]]> fa59972424351109c201c1bf99cfe7ce Katherine replied to the topic Free story through July 4th in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/free-story-through-july-4th/#post-102923 Mon, 02 Aug 2021 02:13:50 -0400 @nanisnook @ariel-f @daisy-torres

Hi!! I just wanted to say thank you all again for taking some of your time to read my friend’s story and leave a comment!!!! 😀 I wanted to let you know that she made it on the finalists’ list for Havok’s anthology!!! https://gohavok.com/2021/08/01/prismatic-anthology-finalists-aka-long-list/#comment-11547 I know…[Read more]

]]> 8b446c16a035da9e74e7d457e766d327 Keilah H. replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fanart-or-as-my-phone-tried-to-correct-it-to-canary/page/7/#post-102866 Sat, 31 Jul 2021 21:54:56 -0400 Tron version of Hunter from The Bad Batch…..catching a disc without looking. I drew his half-skull marking with a circuit pattern like some programs have. @ariel-f and @nanisnook I know you like The Bad Batch, and @devastate-lasting I know you like Tron, so here you all go…..Anyone else recognize either of those stories?

]]> 61f89066e67e12fc721e68ef18662159 Keilah H. replied to the topic Dramatic Scenes in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dramatic-scenes/#post-102838 Fri, 30 Jul 2021 19:06:27 -0400 copy-pastes a bunch of…[Read more]

]]> 7c711b73cbac5af86bf7e5059bf437d4 Keilah H. replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fanart-or-as-my-phone-tried-to-correct-it-to-canary/page/7/#post-102619 Mon, 26 Jul 2021 17:01:58 -0400 @Ariel-f I know, right? Me while watching The Bad Batch for the first time….

( at the scene where Hunter and Crosshair are arguing)

Me: Come on, knock him on the head and snap him out of it!

Hunter: (does nothing)

Me: Awww come on, man!

 

@Elfwing Thanks! Actually, I had a picture I traced over, and then I added dragon wings and a tail to…[Read more]

]]> 73a813fcf8e704950c10c4fcc835e33b Keilah H. replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fanart-or-as-my-phone-tried-to-correct-it-to-canary/page/7/#post-102598 Sun, 25 Jul 2021 20:28:14 -0400 @nanisnook @ariel-f I think you’ll recognize this one, whether you like him or not. @elfwing Another one of the dragons I’m clearly obsessed with (sorry if I’m taking up your time or boring you)

He looks like a stone dragon but he’s actually an ice dragon. Read the words on the side and stuff and you’ll figure out what’s up with that. (I told my…[Read more]

]]> db90653d214aeb6d12aae9cd1b0977ee Keilah H. replied to the topic Fanart (or, as my phone tried to correct it to, "Canary") in the forum Art https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/fanart-or-as-my-phone-tried-to-correct-it-to-canary/page/6/#post-102565 Sat, 24 Jul 2021 20:27:06 -0400 @ariel-f Thanks! I love those characters too. I think I have a drawing of Hunter a page or so back in the forum.

@elfwing Thanks so much! Any specific dragon type (fire, ice, stone, sky, etc) you’d like to see?

]]> e39756e7e4cb387e87c1c29d1d70f391 Precious Y replied to the topic Hi guys in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-guys-5/#post-102397 Tue, 20 Jul 2021 20:30:11 -0400 @ariel-f

Hi Ariel,

1. I’ve been writing for a pretty long time, though I’ve just started to get consistent with it. My notes app is filled with tons of uncompleted stories because if I didn’t release them my head would explode. I’ve been bullet journaling almost daily for about 3 years now.

2. My favorite flavour would be vanilla. And then…[Read more]

]]> 3f4afa14dba041572f6909b622420139 Elfwing replied to the topic non-typical critters for stories in the forum Fantasy https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/non-typical-critters-for-stories/page/3/#post-102278 Mon, 19 Jul 2021 01:49:31 -0400 @ariel-f

ooo good idea!! You know m, I just added a squirrel to my one book a friend and I are doing literally yesterday!!!

And  I love donkeys!!! They’re smarter than people give em credit for lol

]]> 16e5a8378d23477a691a559b92c4ae40 Daisy Torres replied to the topic Introduction to Power number 2 in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/introduction-to-power-number-2/#post-102245 Sun, 18 Jul 2021 08:45:41 -0400 @power *gasp* mind-blowing. Well then, I guess here’s hoping that your socks will always remain either hole-less or sewed shut, depending on your preference XD

 

@ariel-f Yess, I definitely agree with reading The Art of War. You can find the audiobook on YouTube if you like!

]]> c15675976957af56fd3516abace64145 Power replied to the topic Introduction to Power number 2 in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/introduction-to-power-number-2/#post-102242 Sun, 18 Jul 2021 05:22:20 -0400 @daisy-torres Technically all socks have holes, if they didn’t you couldn’t get your feet in them (so perhaps hoping for everyone’s socks to be holeless isn’t as good an idea as first I thought. Or maybe it’s better! *evil snicker*)

@ariel-f If you would like to look into military b strategy you might want to look at The Art of War by Sun Tzu. If…[Read more]

]]> be0f127534f8499b8f595c5cab9be15c Daisy Torres posted an update: My sci-fi novel got PUBLISHED today!!! If you wanna read the […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/103427/ Fri, 16 Jul 2021 04:27:22 -0400 My sci-fi novel got PUBLISHED today!!!

If you wanna read the first 3 chapters of The Art of Deception for free, I’ll post a link in the comments!!!!

Thank you to all the writers on here who gave me so much help and encouragement!!! I love y’all!!!

@abigail-m @writerlexi1216 @ariel-f @elfwing @nova21 @faith-q @issawriter7 @scripter-of-kingdoms @m…[Read more]

]]> 12 ffc341ef450cfd6ed85d9029bd120231 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Ignite Memes and More! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ignite-memes-and-more/page/4/#post-102111 Wed, 14 Jul 2021 20:38:14 -0400 @ariel-f AHH I’m so glad you loved it! 😀

]]> bc5590eee856509da5f9c615b63d59c3 Jean Coul started the topic Questions on drafts and beginnings... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/questions-on-drafts-and-beginnings/ Mon, 12 Jul 2021 21:56:24 -0400 Hi, everyone!!! I haven’t been on here in what seems like forever! But I’ve found myself stuck in a problem I was hoping some writers on here could help me out with!

Basically, my WIP is struggling! 🙂

So my main question is, what qualifies as a “first draft?” When writers say that, do they mean the first draft of the whole book?? Or the first…[Read more]

]]> 065c73b5b1e083f1ad438f1d9b055ea7 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Ignite Memes and More! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ignite-memes-and-more/page/3/#post-102046 Mon, 12 Jul 2021 16:00:13 -0400 Oops… @ariel-f

]]> 0e7d56aab701c3b775328524fbddb8f0 Katherine replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/official-writing-sprint-leaderboard/page/72/#post-101988 Sat, 10 Jul 2021 01:14:30 -0400 I’m going to be writing for a bit if anyone wants to join me. 🙂

@faith-q @joy-caroline @joelle-stone @nanisnook @writerlexi1216 @scripter-of-kingdoms @nova21 @ariel-f @devastate-lasting @anyone-who-feels-like-writing

]]> 1405c333c468b1ad00384496c390332d Daisy Torres started the topic Welcome jasmine-godby!!! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/welcome-jasmine-godby/ Thu, 08 Jul 2021 05:51:29 -0400 @jasmine-godby Welcome to Kingdompen!!! *holds up german chocolate cake* I assume you like chocolate cake? Have a slice!

(It was going to be cookies, but they sorta burned….)

*clears throat* Allow me to introduce myself!! My name is Daisy Torres and I am 17. My published novel is an Alice in Wonderland retelling called Era of Shadows, and my…[Read more]

]]> 07b8f0e0cd60a9eda7f8a5b92e520889 Katherine replied to the topic Free story through July 4th in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/free-story-through-july-4th/#post-101904 Tue, 06 Jul 2021 22:04:30 -0400 @nanisnook @ariel-f @daisy-torres

THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading the story and leaving a comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😀 Y’all are seriously AWESOME for supporting fellow writers!!!!!! *sends each of you your favorite dessert*

]]> a4d992971ccc30fa7baa368006cba17f Keilah H. replied to the topic How do you name your characters? in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-name-your-characters/#post-101751 Sun, 04 Jul 2021 16:51:23 -0400 @ariel-f I love the name Spark! I think I’ll use it, thanks!

]]> 27a6460ccaacb15b98922b48b2aa982e Daisy Torres replied to the topic Using a Pen Name: Yay or Nay? in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/using-a-pen-name-yay-or-nay/page/3/#post-101750 Sun, 04 Jul 2021 07:43:01 -0400 @ariel-f Hahaha yuuupp *sweats nervously* I’ve done that too… Thankfully most of my pins were junk tho so I just deleted it XD You know, I thiiink if you go into settings, you can change it?

]]> a3b318f6255073f7f4aff7aea09c1ade Anatra replied to the topic Welcome Anatra23!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/welcome-anatra23/page/3/#post-101734 Sun, 04 Jul 2021 01:43:05 -0400 @ariel-f

Much appreciated. I do enjoy mostly writing fiction, and mainly fantasy at that. Creating my own world and building off of this one always interested me.

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

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OH I GET IT

@writerlexi1216

Dip? You’re too kind.

@devastate-lasting

1. Painting. Music.

2. Fantasy.

3. A novel abt 59,000 words long…[Read more]

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