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Ava Blue replied to the topic Putting Yourself in your Characters? in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I definitely do this! My 2 favorite charries (Bronwen and Ilwyn) are almost like my alter egos. Ilwyn is a lot more similar to what I’m actually like, he’s a complete softie and he’s got ADHD so he can be really hyper and lazy at the same time. He’s also the same personality type (INFP-T) and he’s my favorite color…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@starofthenorth Hi Erica, good to meet you! I’ve been awful about introducing myself to people on here 🤦♀️ Well, I’m Ava, I’m 15 and I love writing survival stories :3 I’ve been listening to a lot of louder stuff lately (it’s the only thing that can keep me awake hehe) Right now I really like God’s Gonna Cut You Down – Johnny Cash, Aerials – S…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
1. Ooh, I like classical music! And I have some Ludovico Einaudi on my playlist. Movie soundtracks are awesome, too. So do you like a lot of instrumental music? I’ve listened to Peter Hollins, but not Evynne.
2. Ok! I’ll have to add it to my very long list of things to read/watch once I’m less busy! 😂
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@starofthenorth First of all, I’m so glad to hear that you’re okay! I’ve never been to the hospital, that sounds scary.
Personally, I’m very thankful for @loopylin for keeping me alive through the school year 😅 She helped me actually finish a big fat boring paper (and I almost got it in on time lol) and she’s the best friend I could ever ask for…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
1. Ooh yes, fantasy. My favorite. I haven’t read a lot of historical fiction, but I like it. I think my favorite is when it has less to do with a historical event but is its own story in a time period.
2. Oh I wish. Even better would be spotify with no ads but without having to pay for premium. 😄 What kind of music do you listen…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic WIP edits? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
I finally finished chapter seven! I’ve been falling behind, but now that my schedule should be clearing up a little I’ll be able to catch back up. I’ll post it here if you want to read it.
5:30. The concert was at 7:00. He would have time. Milo dropped his satchel and fell into the Synthesis Pod trying to forget about his…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Hey Erica! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m TheLoonyOne!
I’ve also been writing most my life (I always love to pull out that golden writing from when I was eight 😆) but it’s kind of always stayed a hobby for me. That’s so cool that you’re on your third book! Do you have trouble with procrastination? Cause that is… definitely me. I’m…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Hey @felicity! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Sorry it’s taken me so long to say hi
I’m TheLoonyOne. What is your trilogy about? It’s really cool that you’ve made it to your second book. Keep it up! Those are all really fun genres! Do you have a favorite to read? Film writing sounds so fun (I’ve done a little) and its so different from writing a novel.…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I'm not the only one! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 5 months ago
Hi @arien! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m TheLoonyOne, also a Tolkien nerd! (A very very big Tolkien nerd) That’s so cool that your friend told you about KP. For me, it was my cousin 😂
You’ve written a whole book? 😲 That is so awesome! I’m usually quite a big procrastinator but I’m taking a novel in a semester class that is making me actually work…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Alright, my two weeks of incredible busyness are over! I can finally actually join this. Sorry its taken so long!
I’ll throw in my character Elissa with the sister squad even though she isn’t a sister. She has Eastern-Asian features and is most definitely an extrovert.
Milo
“Are you sure it…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
On no, now I’m invested 😂
Anyway, sorry it took me so long to read it. I’ve been really busy
I absolutely love this! Your characters seem really real! I love how important their faith is to Leon and Aadelheide and their relationship with each other. And Riker is so sweet.
I’d love to read more!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
I watched some smoe nova, he was very entertaining! 🤣
Yeah, interest is pinterest
Thanks! 😊 The three heads are characters from Unordinary, one of my webcomics. 😁
I want to try digital art someday, but I haven’t yet. Probably once I’m a bit better and have time. I love your picture of Tauren! You’re really good!
Of…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
KPÂ will not let me send the pictures from my phone. Oh well…
Here you go!



Mostly just practice stoof🤣😁 Thanks!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yes! Try out pinterest!
Ooh, Jazza! He has a lot of helpful stuff. And is entertaining. I also like Kesh, both his style and because he has a lot of really helpful advice. Some others are Sam Does Art, Andymation, Scott Christian Sava (although mostly just YouTube shorts), Alisa Chung, Proko, SLEW, Alpay Efe, uh Kiptoe (I’m…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Well, I was going to share some of my art, but I’ve tried three times and it still hasn’t worked. So, maybe I’ll try with just one

We’ll see if it works xD
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Putting Yourself in your Characters? in the forum Characters 3 years, 5 months ago
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Pinterest has some really good tips and a lot of awesome reference photos. I love it. What are some of the art YouTubers you watch?
I read most of them on webtoon. You have to be careful sometimes, but most chapters have a disclaimer at the beginning telling you if there is something.
Haha, that’s understandable. I’ve only…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ugh, school. I definitely haven’t been planning it in order. xD I have the ending mostly finished in my mind. But I’m planning the chapters right before I write them at the part I’m at right now.
Oh yeah, I have a very long list of things I have to practice on. I’ve kinda been breaking it all up and getting good at one at a…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, definitely a lot of work, but it would be so cool in the end! I remembered one of your drawings being a miner-looking boy with a headlamp and a pickaxe so I guessed they could probably be the same. 😆😁 Keep up the good work!
It’s going pretty good. I’m falling behind a bit on the schedule (both because I’m really busy…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Ooh, I love this! And a graphic novel? That’s such a cool idea! Is this what the characters you drew are from? I like how you are laying down the story and their relationship is so nice! I would love to keep reading if you write more!
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