Kingdom Pen | SeekJustice | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning SeekJustice. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 00d1174267747ae8449ad887cc37e017 whaley started the topic Writing Physical DisabilitiesAbnormalitiesHandicaps of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-physical-disabilitiesabnormalitieshandicaps-of-characters/ Thu, 06 Jul 2023 13:30:12 -0400 So this is bouncing off @godlyfantasy12 ‘s topic concerning neurodivergence.

I am not really familiar with mental quirks (other than my own, and those of people I know), but I have a lot of experience with some physical handicaps.

One of my siblings is in a wheelchair. (Just referring to this sibling vaguely, for privacy reasons, I guess.) He…[Read more]

]]> 507b2b886b5ebeefc0a65cd6c49bbf37 whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-neurodivergent-the-psychological-issues-of-characters/#post-149710 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 13:09:15 -0400 @seekjustice

Oh yes, that’s 100% important to stay aware of. You are right. When I describe the world getting worse, I’m referring to mental illness, or the negative conditions that may fall under the neurodivergence umbrella. Not all neurodivergence 😉

]]> 1d24e75b3b63b3cf6060bd62c8d211b6 whaley replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-neurodivergent-the-psychological-issues-of-characters/#post-149700 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 11:00:27 -0400 @seekjustice @godlyfantasy12

Looking back on my post, I should have been more specific. I agree that we are more able to diagnose these things, and I also think that this world has become more likely to induce anxiety and depression.

There’s always been wickedness in the world, but this last week, I saw a lot of people who are ticking bombs…[Read more]

]]> fd1fad485ca6ac21c27b3296983c33d4 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-neurodivergent-the-psychological-issues-of-characters/#post-149697 Thu, 06 Jul 2023 06:35:28 -0400 @seekjustice hmm curious viewpoint but I kinda view it as the opposite.

 

In earlier times people with ADHD/Autism or neurodivergence didn’t have many chances, and didn’t even understand what they were struggling with, and were often labeled as Possessed, lazy, broken, stupid, etc.

Yes those labels still exist in this day and age of course but…[Read more]

]]> cfa16761a4e7edd645c990e37e007077 Keilah H. replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/apologetics/page/9/#post-148270 Mon, 19 Jun 2023 19:15:25 -0400 @seekjustice Ahhh, I have to disagree on “dragons and mermaids and all that stuff aren’t real.”

Many mythical creatures are real to some degree, and many are still alive today.

You just have to go looking hard for them…..and some of them aren’t what you think they are.

Take mermaids! They’re actually not humanoid at all. They’re big, gray,…[Read more]

]]> 0aa9c8202b57dec2b70cd2b8290caf93 Folith-Feolin replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/apologetics/page/8/#post-148269 Mon, 19 Jun 2023 19:14:09 -0400 @seekjustice
@thearcaneaxiom

Okay so I just have one gripe about the dragon argument. Couldn’t they just be based off of snakes? Because Snakes are long and dragon like, 🐍 🐉 see very similar.

 

]]> 71307366be9ef5af12651211cc684276 TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/apologetics/page/8/#post-148252 Mon, 19 Jun 2023 17:59:52 -0400 @seekjustice

Thanks for your comments! Although, and please forgive me for saying this, but your argument against it doesn’t really counter what I’ve said. He addresses this specifically, but the response I can give is what I already pointed out. Vampires and mermaids and countless other creatures of that sort are all based off of existing things…[Read more]

]]> c1d66dbe6412a88be9abb6b637d85e51 OrangeArmadillo replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/apologetics/page/8/#post-148249 Mon, 19 Jun 2023 17:31:33 -0400 @whalekeeper

Don’t get me wrong here, you can believe in Calvinism if you want (it’s a variation, not a false gospel), but since this forum is about defending our beliefs, I’d like to give my reasons for not being a Calvinist.

1. If we must be chosen by God, and we cannot choose him (as you stated), why wouldn’t anyone in the Bible say so? The…[Read more]

]]> e4ac36be8a411b05df45b7a2c2da33aa Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-1/page/7/#post-148069 Sat, 17 Jun 2023 01:33:58 -0400 @seekjustice YOU’RE HERE!!! 😀 Yeah I totally understand haha!

I’m not too bad. I’ve been focusing my energy on drawing and other things instead of writing over the past few years, although I do have an idea for a writing project that I just need to get over the writer’s block for haha. How’ve you been???

 

@euodia-vision Yeah, it’s a place to…[Read more]

]]> f94b654c02d1462e6cca6b622e7ff550 Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #1 in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-1/page/6/#post-147826 Thu, 15 Jun 2023 06:55:25 -0400 I would like to bring this back once again. Good place to chat while you’re working on stuff. It’s supposed to help people be motivated to write if they know someone else is doing it with you while also chatting with you……. emphasis on *supposed to*, I’m notoriously bad at focusing when I’m talking to people haha, but I’ve always loved the…[Read more]

]]> f80d8801922967c1c5135955d8fd3160 Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/page/2/#post-138738 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 22:56:03 -0400 @seekjustice

 

I also like Le Mis and the Hunchback of Notre Dame. I am really hoping I will be able to see the new Sweeney Todd revival but I haven’t booked any tickets or anything of that matter.

]]> 5c478a03c9635313e3e2855a82a53f51 TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/page/2/#post-138706 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 19:39:10 -0400 @seekjustice

I never got tagged so I didn’t see your response, lol, sorry.

I’m learning quite a few languages! I’ve finished a course and I’m conversational in Hawaiian, I’m proficient in Australian Sign Language and I’m currently learning Scottish Gaelic and Romanian. In the future I’d love to learn Welsh and Māori.  And no I haven’t done…

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]]> c0d9fc2629210bb142f9f1c78e5d5399 Esther replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/page/2/#post-138687 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 17:53:19 -0400 @seekjustice

Huskies are so pretty! So are Aussie Shepherds 😍

Yes!! ☺️

That’s so cool you’re writing a dystopian novel too! I haven’t seen many YA dystopians written lately and there’s so much potential in that genre.

There totally is! (Though, it’s really hard not to fall into cliches if I don’t plot carefully. 😬) I wouldn’t say that mine’s a…[Read more]

]]> b6ef8a23826bc148e4d99c6b119ae607 Felicity replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/page/2/#post-138684 Tue, 28 Mar 2023 16:04:18 -0400 @seekjustice

I’m currently learning Hawaiian (though I finished my course, so I’m not actively learning anymore, just practising every now and then), Australian Sign Language, Scottish Gaelic and Romanian (I also love Eastern European languages!). I’d love to learn Welsh next.

Oh wow! That’s really neat. Is there a big difference between Austr…[Read more]

]]> e6e2be2bf6ef1eb0c658641f75219720 Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/#post-138586 Mon, 27 Mar 2023 15:25:16 -0400 @seekjustice

Sounds really cool! I’d totally read it.

Also, looking back on that fourth question… I don’t remember what I was thinking. At all. So, just three questions. 😅🤣

]]> a3585fda53817ead5c4eb6fdea9a8639 Otherworldly Historian replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/#post-138573 Mon, 27 Mar 2023 12:38:40 -0400 @seekjustice

Welcome back!

I am otherworldly Historian. I enjoy history, tabletop gaming, reading, and working on my WIP. I see you mentioned one of your WIPs as a dark fantasy. Personally dark fantasy is my favourite genre. My main WIP is also a dark fantasy (though it may technically be a sci-fi at this point because their tech level is close…[Read more]

]]> ef58ed62137c9d165be8da481df5cc3c Esther replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-an-article/#post-138402 Sat, 25 Mar 2023 18:36:26 -0400 @kyronthearcanin

I’ve been thinking about writing an article as well. I don’t know what topic you could do, but I’ve been told that it’s a good idea to do something that you’re passionate about and that you know well.

I asked @kathleenramm about writing an article a little while ago. She should be able to give you some pointers. I know that @seekjustice

Welcome back! Nice to meet you! I like your username! It’s a great reminder. I’m Felicity, a homesteader, home school graduate and follower of Jesus. Right now I’m writing multiple WIPs that span from Historical Fiction to fantasy and contemporary fiction. Your stories sound really neat.

What languages do you enjoy? Are you…[Read more]

]]> 82c34ff80cc625342d0f32a607673396 Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/#post-138370 Sat, 25 Mar 2023 14:42:16 -0400 @seekjustice

Nice to meet you!’

I’m Solfyre! I’m a soon-to-be highschooler, worldbuilder, guitar-player, and wolf-lover. I love bringing God subtly into my writing, and exploring aspects of Him in my worlds and characters. I don’t have any dogs (I love them, it’s just that my mom is allergic), but I do have a cat, Stripes (my brother named him…[Read more]

]]> 8ef97f5f17c639db4508a3a5fe96dd1b Esther replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/#post-138369 Sat, 25 Mar 2023 14:27:19 -0400 Welcome back, @seekjustice!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amateur writer!!

So cool that you’re a dog trainer! I love dogs!! 🥰

Ahhh!! You have Aussies!! That’s one of my favorite dog breeds! (The other is Siberian huskies. I have one so… I’m biased. 😁)

Also really awesome that you…[Read more]

]]> 821ffb3166aa9d47e87ab0cf51ce918e TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Well...hello... in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/well-hello/#post-138363 Sat, 25 Mar 2023 13:45:24 -0400 @seekjustice

Nice to meet you, Welcome back!

I’m TheArcaneAxiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truths, and exploring that in my writing. My current project is a sci fi/fantasy universe I’m working on with my sister, where baseline physics operates in a completely different way.

Questions:

You mentioned you like learning…[Read more]

]]> 70a295d7e7434291e35e331aa16ae667 Kathleen replied to the topic Merch much? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/merch-much/#post-113294 Wed, 13 Jul 2022 19:19:11 -0400 @starshiness @elanor @lydia-s @power @seekjustice

Thanks for the input! Notebooks, mugs, stickers, hoodies and ball caps coming right up.

 

]]> dd586aade4f07c3488eae3cd2d23e12e GodlyFantasy12 started the topic My Antagonist: Corvina, And Her Problem in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-antagonist-corvina-and-her-problem/ Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:22:30 -0400 Hey everyone!! So, I know I’m still on the first draft of my first book of this series, buuuuut I already am thinking ahead a tooon and, well, im sure some of y’all have heard of my anatabonist (who I love) Corvina.

This post was actually made because I could use a little bit of help with something about her, and it also kinda includes ano…[Read more]

]]> a4062b7d0757929e676ded8630119ae2 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/major-wip-spoiler-forum/ Sat, 25 Jun 2022 16:59:36 -0400 I DID IT!! I FINALLY MADE IT!!

*regrets immediately*

JK. Anyway, I had this idea a while back to make this post where we could come here and talk about our WIPs and MAJOR SPOILERS AND PLOT TWISTS THAT WE ARE SOO EXCITED ABOUT AND HATE HAVING TO KEEP SECRET FROM FRIENDS AND FAMILY WITHOUT HAVING TO DISCLAIMER IN THE POST!!

 

Thus this forum was…[Read more]

]]> 7c79eecf09988dfd2a36518aa6424928 GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/page/6/#post-110876 Wed, 11 May 2022 19:19:13 -0400 @denali-christianson @emilysf @e-m-tempke @koshka @keilah-h @issawriter7 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle @daisy-torres @trahia-the-minstrel @libby@lydia-s @e-k-seaver @mkfairygirl @seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm @jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3…[Read more]

]]> c74fc07ef480929613b5d7889d5f0bf8 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic NEW BLOG POST!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-blog-post/ Sat, 07 May 2022 18:54:56 -0400 HEY YALL! Its been a hot minute since I did a new blog post and I am SUPER excited about this one! I think it’ll help some people! Or at least I hope so!

Tags!!

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver…[Read more]

]]> d531e224957492e41622ddbb95d5e3bf Faith Q. started the topic Y'all help me storm my brain!!!! in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/yall-help-me-storm-my-brain/ Sat, 07 May 2022 04:18:01 -0400 Okay, y’all, I need a brainstorming partner… or two… or as many as I can find, haha…

It’ll actually be for two separate projects. One is a middle-grade contemporary novel, and the other is a YA fantasy. If you’re up for helping me brainstorm, either (or both!) need work, so anyone who can, pretty much? I’ll give the tags here, and then put…[Read more]

]]> d4ddd26f4fd7eade0ddf0355cb75fc00 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/memes-inspo-aesthetics-pretty-much-anything-xd/ Wed, 04 May 2022 21:32:02 -0400 SO AS THE TITLE STATES- this is pretty much where we post anything and everything about or CHARRIES!!! FROM AESTHETIC BOARDS TO MEMES ABOUT OUR BOOKS AND CHARRIES TO INSPIRATIONAL MUSIC RELATING TO THEM TO LYRICS THAT RELATE TO POEMS TO YEA WHATEVER.

 

I put this on here cuz I’ve made a TON of memes….

and I’ve made some aesthetics I wante…[Read more]

]]> 8f2b1d82660c46bd3bb0dba6803e676d GodlyFantasy12 started the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page....Woohoo in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-beloved-character-death-discussion-page-woohoo/ Mon, 25 Apr 2022 16:48:16 -0400 (WARNING SUPER LONG, RAMBLING, CHAOTIC POST. ALSO BIG SPOILER FOR WINGFEATHER SAGA IN ONE SECTION. IT IS WARNED AND CAN BE SKIPPED JUST WATCH FOR IT.)

Tags!!

@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issaw…[Read more]

]]> 91497d61c3c09f92bfa74662db0cd7cb Faith Q. started the topic Me idea in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/me-idea/ Sun, 17 Apr 2022 02:56:42 -0400 Okay, so last night I got this amazing idea. At least I think it sounds amazing. But my problem is, it also sounds a bit cliche.

The problem is, I don’t get out much. Honestly, I’m pretty picky about what I read, so modern secular works are very rarely added to the list, and I am pretty clueless about what’s actually on the shelves. I know I…[Read more]

]]> 1bee0a9ea8c7021d298ba74627bbe3ac GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/pitch-critique/#post-109569 Fri, 18 Mar 2022 01:58:49 -0400 @devastate-lasting @gracie-j @scripter-of-kingdoms @abigail-m @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile @annabelle  @daisy-torres @koshka @trahia-the-minstrel @libby @lydia-s @e-k-seaver @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @seekerofthetruth @kathleenramm @jenwriter17 @nanisnook @elfwing @seekjustice @sparrowhawke @maryg3 @relia @writerlexi1216 @nova21 @hallie-…[Read more]

]]> 044392dcfd8e8bfc964a7433e6e3c3a4 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-you-draft-write-the-first-document/ Tue, 15 Mar 2022 04:24:24 -0400 HELLO MY KEEEEEPERS!!! SO! I am currently drafting Project Garden as you know, and I have discovered that I am seriously Pantsing it. Like…legit. I’ve got ideas and obviously some plot and storyline but it’s just like…writing whatever comes which is honestly hard most of the time and easy sometimes. SO WEIRD!

ANYWAY!! I’m wondering how…[Read more]

]]> 3c6fede3f6d41378904555f5603d5865 Keilah H. replied to the topic Some questions about characters in the forum Characters https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/some-questions-about-characters/#post-109036 Fri, 11 Feb 2022 22:12:23 -0500 Tagging some more people….

@trahia-the-minstrel @elanor @writerlexi1216 @kathleenramm @abigail-m @faith-q @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @nova21 @ariel-f @nanisnook @scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile @daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @m…[Read more]

]]> cad82a74e7acbf1ff3110ea2ef897d58 Keilah H. started the topic I finally read Green Ember!! in the forum Book Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-finally-read-green-ember/ Mon, 31 Jan 2022 19:15:42 -0500 I finally started reading the Green Ember series and I love it! It’s so cool how the writer did the whole story with wolves and eagles (rabbit predators) as villains and rabbits as heroes. And the lore behind it and backstory–all so cool! I’m on the third book right now. What did you think of it? Who’s your favorite character? I honestly love a…[Read more]

]]> d7fdfd7e70c75f531d5c42270a7e9596 Kathleen replied to the topic Have you ever considered writing under a pseudonym, and why or why not? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-considered-writing-under-a-pseudonym-and-why-or-why-not/#post-108664 Sat, 29 Jan 2022 03:20:40 -0500 @r-m-archer

Haha, yeah pseudonyms are a great chance to have the name you always wished was yours lol.

Also, I really like the meaning behind your name archer! It constantly gives you the reminder of what you are aiming towards. Plus, it sounds cool which is a bonus.

@lavenderbookling

I 100% agree with you about it being so much easier being…[Read more]

]]> 070a8503f67ffed842822ef724161adf Elanor started the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-make-a-non-cliche-escape-scene/ Sun, 21 Nov 2021 16:28:43 -0500 So a person escapes the bad guys. This is a characteristic of most every book I’ve read. I’m writing a prison escape in my current WIP and am wondering how to make it something that’s not just the same old thing.

Any tips and or advice would be gladly appreciated.

I’ll tag a bunch of people.

@kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor @abigail-m @precio…[Read more]

]]> a1b426e4999b1180f9420fcd711dfcce Bethany replied to the topic What's a book that hasn't aged well for you? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-a-book-that-hasnt-aged-well-for-you/page/3/#post-107453 Sat, 20 Nov 2021 23:09:09 -0500 @seekjustice

Oh yes Pollyanna! That was one of the first novels I read, and I enjoyed it then, but I haven’t read it since. I have a hunch my feelings toward it now would be quite different.

I haven’t read Elsie Dinsmore, but I’ve heard enough about it that I know I’d only read it for laughs. Or if I want to pull all my hair out. Probably the latter.

]]> 8618ec6f8150b8c753a4f42d86c57cd9 Faith Q. started the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-is-it-okay-to-defy-the-government/ Sat, 20 Nov 2021 05:52:13 -0500 Okay, y’all, I’ve got a dilemma on my hands.

To give you a bit of background information, my main character (Emeric Dertok) has recently come back into society after eight years of living the life of a hermit. He’s working for the King (Jornan), who charged him with the task of tracking down spies trying to sabotage the government. But as enters…[Read more]

]]> 7ff65521cd3f9e7e4eb2ffbd780f8b11 Mary G replied to the topic The Wait is OVER! My Blog Is published! in the forum Publishing & Platform https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-wait-is-over-my-blog-is-published/#post-107412 Fri, 19 Nov 2021 05:33:26 -0500 @kathleenramm @joy-caroline@elanor@abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @morgan@precious-y @sparksaraabbott11@e-k-seaver@writerlexi1216 @lydia-s@nanisnook @lewilliams @relia@hallie-jean @anatra23@iluvhim18 @jenwriter17@keilah-h @nova21 @ariel-f @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @beth-darlene @buildsbygideon @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @w…[Read more]

]]> 549bc9a890cf2c110d1ffe3b55317897 ella replied to the topic dealing with overloads of stress :)) in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/dealing-with-overloads-of-stress/#post-107205 Sat, 13 Nov 2021 22:02:16 -0500 @kathleenramm

thank you for the kind words, Kathleen!  John 14 is a wonderful idea.  it’s hard to always remember that God is there, but what you said is so true.  now that i think about it, songs are the main things that come on and remind me of the truth.  “water under the bridge” is what my mom likes to say, when life is hard sometimes.  thank…[Read more]

]]> e50010849da8e850c99497ad6f0aa088 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Switching Gears: I'm Writing An Allegorical Fantasy Now! in the forum Biblical Fiction https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/switching-gears-im-writing-an-allegorical-fantasy-now/ Fri, 29 Oct 2021 17:09:42 -0400 @lydia-s @elanor @libby @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h@elfwing  @gracie-j @jenwriter17 @issawriter7@trahia-the-minstrel @maryg3 @kayleigh-idea @lucy @madelyn@anatra23 @scoutfinch180 @mkfairygirl @precious-y @beth-darlene @abigail-m @seekjustice @nova21 @hallie-jean @daisy-torres @jodi-maile @devastate-lasting @e-k-seaver…[Read more]

]]> e72a3ed19d0e75d8cac45041d1d03d98 Keilah H. started the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/worldbuilding-in-a-dystopian-novel/ Tue, 26 Oct 2021 18:13:42 -0400 Hey everyone! Keilah here. I’m currently worldbuilding on a dystopian/sci-fi/fantasy world, and I’d like your feedback on it!

The premise I have so far (for the first book anyway, I might make it a series):

Torrent Starcatcher has had a hard life.

She was born into a universe in turmoil; the violent dictator Indy has been in control since before…

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]]> 1c79a28bc52ae4870280e3ba8bb97cc6 Jodi Maile started the topic When you don't like the direction of your story... in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/ Thu, 30 Sep 2021 17:01:45 -0400 Hello, everyone! I wanted to ask for some advice about a problem I have with a short story. Right now, I mostly do short stories, but this has been a big problem for me with novels as well.

So, here’s the problem: I’ll usually start a story with a clear idea of the direction it’s taking, the feeling I want the story to have. I’ll follow that…[Read more]

]]> e74c0c81a4e40483c9b0420375f82342 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/page/2/#post-104727 Sat, 25 Sep 2021 16:45:10 -0400 @seekjustice *gasp* I LOVE the warrior cats books! I write Warriors fanfics for all my other fandoms–I have Star Wars, Marvel, Lord of the Rings, Jurassic World, Tron, and Keeper of the Lost Cities warrior clans. (The last two you might not have heard of. They’re a movie series and book series respectively.)

]]> 6f2eec9f0ed77649a2658a36cd40fa59 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/#post-104610 Sat, 18 Sep 2021 19:38:47 -0400 @seekjustice My stories from various places: the characters usually come from Star Wars, Marvel, or Tron (a two-movie series barely anyone has heard of but I really love), and the storylines can come from those movies but often instead are from book series such as Wings of Fire (about dragons) or Warriors (about cats). I have built up a huge…[Read more]

]]> c0aed0817b03b349c044cbbdd5745123 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/#post-104598 Sat, 18 Sep 2021 18:06:53 -0400 @devastate-lasting Cool, what was it about? @seekjustice Star Wars with anything is awesome, and it’s cool how stuff like that ended up as an original story! What were your fanfics about?

]]> 400e9d406593089ffb8e44c628243f29 Elfwing started the topic Blog!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/blog/ Sat, 18 Sep 2021 05:06:16 -0400 hi peoples!! I made a website and blog, it was only done today, so there’s very little on it right now, but I wanna put it out there because I have big plans!

For subscribers, there’ll be sneak peeks of my books, which I am looking to publish soon, and more!

http://www.elfwingsadventures.com

@kathleenramm @elanor @abigail-m @precious-y @not-so-secret-s…[Read more]

]]> 19e6014a17ed3e885f4886c6b9372913 Keilah H. replied to the topic Have you ever created a crossover fanfiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-created-a-crossover-fanfiction/#post-104585 Fri, 17 Sep 2021 21:38:22 -0400 Feel free to tag others.
@writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams @ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene@lydia-s @buildsbygideon @devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18 @jodi-maile@daisy-torres @godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy @millennium…[Read more]

]]> a0dd6d8529232928fb0d1b7277b5bd05 GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Multiple Protagonists in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/multiple-protagonists/ Sun, 12 Sep 2021 00:49:00 -0400 @writerlexi1216

@kathleenramm

@abigail-m

@faith-q

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

@nova21

@ariel-f

@nanisnook

@scripter-of-kingdoms @lewilliams@ribbonash @imwritehere1920 @beth-darlene @lydia-s @buildsbygideon@devastate-lasting @relia @iluvhim18@jodi-maile @daisy-torres@godlyfantasy12 @jenwriter17 @lucy@millennium @kayleigh-idea  @seekjustic…[Read more]

]]> 29cf4e531da3cdb11d6e220945b347c9 Elfwing replied to the topic What's the harshest critique you've ever received about your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-the-harshest-critique-youve-ever-received-about-your-writing/#post-104201 Sun, 05 Sep 2021 21:13:10 -0400 @kathleenramm The toughest criticism of anything I had, would be my mom on a story I wrote. it was very ridiculous, even for a 12-year-old’s writing and she told me as much and that I could definitely improve it. She said it lovingly, but at that point, it didn’t matter how she said it, it stung my childish pride. XD It was for my schoolwork and…[Read more]

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