Power

@power

*gasp*

How dare you.

@power

Swords are overrated.

Bows and pole weapons are much better.

In real life? Yes, because range is a huge advantage. Swords were historically a sidearm.

But swords are cooler, and have more personality than other weapons.

@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different…

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@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.

CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
Mandin adjusted the thick band to the satchel over his…

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@power @hanako @thearcaneaxiom

CRYSTAL SWORDS, The weapon of Thurston.

Twelve-year-old Nahim cast little bits of metal and crystal across a rough floor in disgust. He hung his head, every minute of free time he had gone to his little private hiding hole and labored over this project for months, and yet he had no progress to show it. He figured a…

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@power

Believe it or not, every one of your posts make me laugh. It would be interesting to meet you in person one day, that conversation could go really good or really bad fast.

I apprieciate your comment very much. I shall be changing that. In fact, I’ve been doing a re-work of chapter one and shall post it here when I’m done.

@power

Thanks, nice to meet you!

@power

I believe number one to be the correct guess, metaphorically.Okay, you sound like my big brother, C, when you say “Affirmative, I do indeed enjoy military stratagem.” Lol. That is exactly the technical funny way he would state it!

Have you ever been to the American Heritage Museum in Hudson, Mass? If you haven’t, PACK YOUR BAGS! I am no…[Read more]

@power
What is the Galaxies! Man, that is a cool greeting.
So, I’ve been working on Guardian Angels and getting a headache from it every five seconds. It’s run into a wall and I’m waiting for one of the people I email to email me back so i can hopefully back it out of the wall. I’ve also got a character who is driving me INSANE! I love him but…

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@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)

@power

like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!

Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…

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@power

Reinforcements have arrived.

here is the most romantic thing I have ever written.

Let the gagging begin. *cackles*

@everyone else

Here’s this! I wrote it a while back, so it needs edited. I thought I’d throw it out anyway, tho. 😉

The door gave way easily, letting Emmett out into the open air. He could hear the soft burbling of the…

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@power @acancello @godlyfantasy12  @awsumfaith @anyone-else-on-here

Does anyone have any tips on building attraction between two characters in an enemy-to-friends to trope? Currently I have two characters who need to fall in love with each other, but they’re in the I-really-don’t-like-you stage and I don’t know how to get them out!…[Read more]

@power ROFL!!!! Bruh u crack me up lol!!

@power

I found that highly amusing XD

@power

Ummmm. 😐 🤨 🤔 😏 🤣 👏

So you want to rant an rage about writing romance and laugh at us?🤣 Why? Nothing is wrong with a bit of romance in a book. It is nice to have a whole bunch of different pieces to your book to make it seem more real in my opinion. Of course you don’t have to have just romance. You could just have good friends…. So yeah…[Read more]

*Runs up, skirts flying, breath lost* Ah, here I am! I’m glad I didn’t miss too much. Romance has been an interesting topic to me as of late.

I can’t say I can give advice as an expert writer (which I am not), but I can certainly make observations based on real life experiences. You want to know what it’s like to have a boy crush on you crazily…[Read more]