OrangeArmadillo

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, those scenes were so sweet XDXD I love it, girl. Honestly if you decide Tauren actually wants to explore – but is hiding it behind his quiet observer self – and if you made some scenes where it’s clear he’s beginning to make those decisions, I would believe it 😉

@freedomwriter76

It does look better!!

@kydonandwillow

Ooooohhh!! This got interesting fast! XD

@acancello
XXD that’s hilarious! I wouldn’t worry about it, it seems realistic enough.

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

Sebastian

Seb stared back. “If your sanity is dead, talk about the weather. Now, please, answer my question.”

Sebastian

Seb shrugged, staring up at a chandelier as they passed. “I haven’t actively looked for an audience since… oh, the last time I sang in the shower. The matter lies in that, whether one appears or not, there is an automatic behavioral pattern set. Even when I am all alone, I must follow a melody. As if I had an invisible audience, if…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Sebastian

Seb caught up, still a few paces behind the others, and raised an eyebrow at Clement. “With all due respect, sir, I never asked to be part of this group. Nor do I need any protection.”

At Clements bemused expression, he added, “And that isn’t just me trying to sound independent. I genuinely only mean to impress,…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

Ooh that’s okay 😂 Seb is… at this point, 4’5? At maybe fifteen years old.

Sebastian

“Why don’t you just shut it!? I’m getting tired of your… antics.”

Sebastian gasped, and turned to Clement with wide eyes. “Can you believe him? Verbally attacking an innocent, sparkly-eyed child?”

They probably thought…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

This is the topic I mentioned 😊 I’ve got a blurb, somewhere up there *points above*

@keilah-h

Right, so she introduces something new to the combat table.

@savannah_grace2009

Right, so it’s a combination of things.

Thank you! I have a topic on one of them, and I’ll tag you in a sec.

Which authors do you take inspiration from?

I also find it interesting how our representation of God can vary in our stories. Yours is very direct and literal in its allegories, whereas someone like me takes a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh… Okay, that makes more sense now. Why does everyone hate them? Did they do something or represent something in the past?

I like to write superhero-ish fantasies, with a lot of randomness and humor. Right now, I have two stories in progress. Project Sebastian, and Project Chrysanthemum (which I am probably going to change…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright then, Sara 😉 I’m Whaley.

Ah, I actually read your prologue! Now that I’ve read this, too, maybe I have a good idea of your story. I like the name Lilitu. What are Paynes again? Do they have a special power apart from normal humans?

@savannah_grace2009

Helloooooo

We haven’t met before 😋

I’m sorry you’re sick – I have a habit of waking up early when I’m sick too. Although it’s not very early here.

So what do you like writing about, Savannah? Any special story?

@lightoverdarkness6

Thxxx ❤

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings

(Don’t worry Min, I know 😂)

Sebastian

“Anyways, I would love to speak with the owner of this marvelous place, if one is found,” the older man said, eyes sparkling.

Seb turned to face the other men, hands out of his pockets and arms outstretched, as if about to conduct an…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Oh my goodness, did you add The Cat because I mentioned adding Seb’s therapy animal? Because if not, that is a weirdly specific coincidence 😂😂

Also I probably should have mentioned this before stronger, but the Headmistress is @godlyfantasy12 ‘s character, and I don’t think it’s a good idea to roleplay her character’s decisions w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace9208

Sorry, got distracted lol. I liked it! I didn’t really have too much feedback on that part. Sorry, I gtg! I’ll ttyl!

@kydonandwillow

XXD honestly, I sort of wish I could slow down and read normally sometimes.. it’s just, when I get so caught up in a book I don’t want to lol. But I guess it is a nice skill to have for other things, just I feel like I miss things sometimes. I’m glad I don’t have to read every single word, though.

@savannah_grace2009

Okay awesome!! I’ll check it out! No problem lol.

@trailblazer Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, a homeschooled Christian teenager and a sophomore in high school.

No problem, I was entirely new to forums when I joined, too, so don’t worry about it! It’s not too hard to learn how to use!

Oooh, I love all of those genres… I usually write in science fiction or dystopian, but I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooof, yeah, that’s crazy. Yeah, I get where you’re coming from. It’s hard to find friends when everyone already knows everyone, and hard feeling like an outsider too. Oh, yeah. There are a lot of people who claim to be Christians and don’t act it which is sad because it turns nonbelievers away. But I know we all have things we…[Read more]