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hybridlore started the topic Character Questionnaire in the forum Characters 3 years ago
Hey guys! I know we’ve already had some of these topics, but I made another one! I don’t like to go into TOO much detail about my characters, but I’ve found that answering a few important questions can go a long way in fleshing them out.
I just made this questionnaire the other day, and it’s helped me a lot so far! If any of you wants to use it,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Hi!! Sorry, I would’ve gotten to this earlier, I just didn’t even see it. Do you know how to tag people already or did you just not know who to tag?
It seems interesting so far! I think the biggest thing I noticed was that your paragraphs are really long — I think it would be easier to read if you split the paragraphs up, but that’s sort…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
I just have to show you this…
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years ago
Oh my word, thank you so much!!! That means a lot!! 🥰 I actually emailed in the story to him, but I haven’t gotten any reply yet. (Which doesn’t surprise me. He’s probably busy. 😉 ) But I actually got to meet him at a conference I went to at the beginning of September. I was able to get a picture with him too! It was pretty aweso…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
My favorite character to write… do you mean characters that I’ve created and am writing?
Yep! Any character of your own creation!
I love homeschooling because I have more time to invest my energy in doing things I like to do and learning about things I enjoy.
Yeah, awesome! I would agree. 😉
As for cake or ice cream, ice cream wou…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings
Oh yeah, whoops. 😅
Ok, well, then I’ll reconsider adding her in. 😉
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Esther replied to the topic Paradise Lie recreated in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Alrighty! I’ll be sure to pop in!
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Esther replied to the topic The Paradise Lie in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
If this is the whole first chapter (which I’m assuming it is) my first critique would be to hint in some way at the actual plot. I felt like it was missing something, and maybe that was it. I’m not entirely sure. Because to me, unless this whole story revolves around Ben and his forgiving his father, I see no indication of the plot dev…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Actually, I don’t think those questions have been asked before. Congrats!
Sweet. 😎 *high-fives myself*
Who is your favorite character to write and why? Nahim Alfred Nayhelm, last of his family-clan. I know him as well as if he were my sibling (except whether he would like vanilla or chocolate ice cream, as far as I know, he’s never had it.…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
My Character:
Nahim (nay-him) Alfred Nayhelm
gender: Masculine
Eye color: Red
Hair color: black
Skin Shade: pale brown or little a little b little a little b (abab) to anyone who understands that.
Voice: It has been described as “Young, too young” and “the voice of a thirteen-year-old”
Age in my WIP: 19-21
Height: about 6 feet.
People/…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Hi! I’m RAE or you can call me Ru or Ruee
I’m a blue-eyed girl who’s insane about horses, passionate about writing, loves her God, plays the piano, dabbles in poetry and machine embroidery, and reaches for the sky…But hasn’t reached it yet. I’m a homeschooler with a big imagination at the age of fourteen. Good to meet you. **Hand shake**…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Yess!!! Read and reread them, they’re amazing. My family might be starting the first one as a read aloud, too! 😁 I’ve been trying to get my siblings to read them forever. Who’s your favorite character?
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years ago
Ooh, 1rst Great Awakening? I love that time period, too. It sounds like we might have a few things in common; I write a lot in story form, but I was on a newspaper team during my one year of public school and really enjoyed writing articles, too. I was on the editorial team so if you ever need someone to bounce a paper off of, let me know…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 3 years ago
@euodia-vision Love your location on your profile, lol!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Love the pic! How do you get that detailing in the hair!!!? I’ve been trying to do that for like years!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
Thanks, it’s my most recent watercolor of my MC, Nahim (pronounce nay-him never nah-him)
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
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Ruth started the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 3 years ago
Hi. I’m RAE. You can call me Ru or Ruee, whichever.
I’m writing a book called Guardian Angels, a space story, and I would like some criticism on it. By the way, when I do ‘dialogue’ It means he’s thinking that, not saying it. Here is the first chapter…
CHAPTER 1 LAXAN
Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava drooled red into the city streets. R…[Read more] - Load More
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Why, thank you!!! Do you like Lord of the Rings?
I love your pfp too! Horses are amazinggggg
Do I love lotr? They are my favorite movies and books! Tolkien is my favorite author! I literally did not like books until I read The Hobbit, and I only read that cuz my big brother kept talking about it. Since then, I watched the movies over and over again, plus read the books twice. After I finish school assigned reading, I plan to read them again.
@rae
YUS GIRL!!! *high five*
I’ve only read the books once, but rn I’m working through Lotr a second time. Buuuut, I’ve seen the movies like 8 times. 😂
Do you like books or movies better? And do you like the hobbit or lord of the rings?
I like the books, cuz I appreciate good writing and that was the first book that I cried over only two words, “Aragorn dies” and I’ve never had another book do that to me. I’ve cried over those words twice!
Lord of the Rings, it captures me and Strider was like a game changer for me. i loved his mysterious personality at first.
Awww! 😭 So like the part where it says Aragorn dies of old age?
YES!!! I love Aragorn/Strider!!! Some of my fam thinks he’s weird but he’s my favorite Lotr character, besides Sam ofc.