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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 3 hours ago
(Sorry for getting back to you so late!! Life has been pretty busy rn.)
Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love…
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 3 hours ago
No it’s not working. It’s kinda doing the same thing it is for Janessa. 🤔
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Lol that’s not working for me either! Maybe my computer just doesn’t like the link.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Hmm. I tried that, but even with the new tab, it was giving me the same message. It’s a similar message to the one it gives me when the internet disconnects, but I checked and my internet connection is fine right now, so that shouldn’t be the issue.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
No, it just gives me a message that “this site cannot be reached”. I hit the reload button but it didn’t make a difference.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
I’m using my laptop.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
I tried to copy the whole line, but I think it was so long it disappeared off the page and wouldn’t let me get all of it.
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
😊 How’s life been?
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Esther replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hey!! Good to see you again!
Ooh, cool! I’ll try my best to get to it soon. (Maybe be summer break, but hopefully before then. XD)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Hey! I’ll try to read it and give you any feedback I may have as soon as I can!! 😄
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I think if you just copy the link and paste it into the text box it should work. Or if you go to the link button at the top of the text box and paste it there….
I’ve never tried linking a PDF on here, but I’ve done other links.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ve heard mixed opinions about the first chapter of a book… I used to always be told it needed to start off with action to draw the reader in, but I’ve come to realize the scene needs to be set up well, too. I guess it’s finding the balance between just enough action to hook the reader and a solid foundation of getting to know the…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Revolutionary War story idea in the forum Historical 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @freed_and_redeemed (I hope I got that right this time lol) @vinagirl @idon’trememberwhoelsewantedtofollowalongonthis @liberty (I think you’re the one who said you like historical fiction, particularly the American Revolution. If I’m wrong and it’s someone else I’m thinking of, you can ignore…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Um, I don’t think so. I believe I was just pointing out some wording that I felt was a little awkward. My suggestion was a way to word it differently so that it would be smoother to read. As for the describing the forest, you could tap into his emotions a little bit then, but that wasn’t exactly what I was pointing out. I was just sug…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Alrighty, let’s do this.
I’m not in any way the most amazing writer or editor ever, so I recommend to take my advice with a grain of salt. 😉
Brightening the somewhat pale sky, the golden sun streamed beams of light all about
Ok, the first thing I noticed was the word ‘somewhat.’ In most cases, you can always cut this from narrati…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My first short story contest entree! Critiques appreciated in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
ooh, that’s so exciting!! I’ve been wanting to try my hand at some contests this year as well.
So I read it through once, but I don’t have the time rn to give you some feedback. I’ll be sure to get to it later today though!
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Esther replied to the topic Holis! in the forum Start HERE 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Taggin’ some other peeps to say hi…
@freed_and_redeemed @liberty @whalekeeper @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @guys,literallywhyismymindblankingoutonallofy’all’stags?? @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @everyoneee
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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Esther replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I have a dog. His name is Buddy. He’s five, and I’m loving training him! I don’t play volleyball on a team, but I do like playing it with friends/siblings.
Aww, I love it!! What breed is he? I have a Siberian Husky named Bandit (well, he’s our family’s dog, not just mine 😉 ). He’s three and the quietest husky I’ve ever met. XD He’ll…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My Introduction in the forum Start HERE 2 months, 3 weeks ago
What curriculums have you used for your other subjects?
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