Liberty

@trailblazer

Oh dear! Well, if you want to, you can send me your email, and I can share the Google Docs file with you. That’s totally up to you, though.

Sorry that the link isn’t working! I hope it’s not like this for everyone.

@trailblazer

Oh, no! Sorry, just forget what I posted above. That’s not what worked!! I don’t know why the new link doesn’t open with you just clicking it. However, this is how I got it to work. I highlighted it by lightly clicking it, not so it would open, but just so it would highlight the entire line by itself. Then, I copied it (using…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Oh, I clicked the new link and it says there’s an error, but if you click and hold with two fingers, the option should appear “Open Link in New Tab.” If you click that, it should open. Of course, I’m using a mac. I think it’s a right-click on a PC to get the options panel.

Let me know if this works!

@trailblazer

file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html

Okay, I’ve posted it here again but made it clickable. Does this work?

@trailblazer

Are you using an iPhone or a computer? On my computer, it works fine. If it’s not working on your computer, I’ll have to find a different way to post it.

@esther-c

Hey, Esther, is it working for you?

@esther-c

Well, a lot is going on concerning family relations. Not ones in my immediate family, but with our other relatives. My grandmother is moving out here soon, so a lot is going to change. There are going to be a lot of opportunities to deny myself and serve and love others. There’s also still tension concerning some other matters in the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yes! I’m glad to be here, again!

@grcr

Thanks a lot! And no pressure! It’s not like you have to read the entire thing! Whatever you wish to read.

@trailblazer

@esther

@rae

@jonas

@grcr

@savannah_grace2009

@freed_and_redeemed

@highscribeofaetherium

Sorry, everyone!

Thank you, Trailblazer, for helping me!

Here is the link to read my book:

file:///Users/barrydurmaz/Downloads/Into%20the%20Mind%20of%20Liberty/IntotheMindofLiberty.html

Make sure you copy the entire line.

@trailblazer

Okay, I’ll try that.

@trailblazer

Anyway as far as the last names, would they use, for example, Mr. Gill and Mr. Edes, or just Gill and Edes? I think for friend and family level I’m gonna stick with first names for the sake of the reader, but otherwise I’ll try to keep some formality.

Either would work.

@trailblazer

1, does it draw you in and make you want to read more?

It certainly does for me! There’s suspense concerning the potential arrest of people, and the growing excitement of a war possibly coming.

 

And 2, does it sound historically accurate to you?

Most of it does. I did note that some of the speech wouldn’t have been used back then.…[Read more]

@esther-c

You pinpointed some great areas for me to work on.

With a sudden toss of his head, he dashed back the emotions threatening to overpower him. His peace shattered, and Thornbriar walked back to the forest.

I just feel like it flows better. And a little side note… Shortly after this sentence, you take a sentence or two to describe t…

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@ester-c

Thanks! I’ll be looking foreward to your feedback!

@esther-c

Awwww! You have a husky! That’s one of my favorite dog breeds! Lord willing, I would like to have one some day.

So, Buddy’s a mutt. He’s a rescue. I want to do a DNA test on him to find out what he truly is, but he’s somewhere between a Plott Hound and a Pit Bull. He looks more like a hound, but I’m super sure he’s got Pit Bull in…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Awesome!! IEW has helped me so much, too! I probably wouldn’t know how to write well unless I’d gone through IEW for many years. I also have learned all my grammar from their Fix It! course.