Elishavet Elroi

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon Here it is!! @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @whalekeeper @trailblazer @acancello @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings

I have another chapter to share!!

With Koshka and Elishavet’s help and fabulous ideas, I (FINALLY) got a sweet scene written between Leon and his adorable…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Y’all are the absolute best!! I have a scene written and I actually really love how it’s turning out. Y’all are amazing✨✨

@whalekeeper @both-of-y’all-as-well

Yessss, I must do the tea thing in a scene a bit later on. It would be the best thing ever. XD

and now to just figure out what I want to do with Riker in…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

The tea…XD That should soooo happen.

@koshka

Sooooooooo I know that you and @elishavet-pidyon (and @smiley) are all Leon fans….

so I have a question.

I’m currently working on Book #2 (aka Broken Shackles) of my Broken and Redeemed trilogy (Leon/Riker’s standalone trilogy😂) and I’m trying to figure out what to do next.

I want to show a scene of Leon being playful with…[Read more]

@smiley I…uhm…have the full scene now 😭 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @rae @anyone-else-idk-lol

I have a scene…

Only one warning: SADNESS. extreme sadness.

Every step sent a pulse of pain through Leon’s head. He gritted his teeth and pressed forward, his re…

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@mineralizedwritings @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk

I wrote this scene a bit back for my WW1 WIP and thought I’d share it here! I’m thinking I may add more later, but idk yet…it could just end this way…maybe break some hearts😏XD jkjk

anywho!!!

SCENE TIME!!!

TW: MENTIONS OF…[Read more]

@esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

why do I always forget to tag y’all? XD

@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @esther-c @rae @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk??

I have another scene!!!!

Leon this time!!🥰

and yeahhhhhhh the poor boi

anywhooooo, scene time!!!!

TW: ALCOHOL USE/ABUSE. ALCOHOLISM. IMPLIED HANGOVER. LEON…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ahhh, Cefin! I forgot for a moment who that was, the poor dear.

@hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @rae @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

Thank you 😘 *Dances a little Charleston step in due glee* I’m glad you guys like it!!

Desiderium aeternitatis means desire for eternity in latin, and for me the phrase represents the fusing of human senses with immaterial ambition. As humans, part physical and part spir…[Read more]

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lydibug @highscribeoftheaetherium @calyhuge @esther-c @euodia-vision @smiley @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h Eeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyy tagzzzz

@elishavet-pidyon Oh neat! I’m wrapping up my senior year to go to college! What are you majoring for, if I may ask??
Also, do you mean his newest, the one with the moose? Or different??

@koshka
*curtsies back* Bonjour, madam!
Writing has been slow lately, and I had to scrap Journey to Amber Forest due to some personal reasons, but I’m halfway…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings Hey! Yeah, its gotten a lot better!! How are you?

@hybridlore I’ve been doing a lot of healing. And just taking the time to dwell with God. How have you been?

@elishavet-pidyon Its good to see your still around lol!!! How’s life?

@elishavet-pidyon

I just read it! It feels so nice, I feel like I could be there in the atmosphere. I think it would be nice to have some more descriptions of the characters. It’s easier for me to remember the names if I have some more attributes. You have a lot of general vibe characteristics (mannerisms) which is really good, that’s the kind of…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I typed this reply up twice, and twice it wouldn’t post so hopefully it will post this time…

So, another few questions. I’ll try to tailor these to plotting..? If that’s helpful…?

1Does this partial blindness affect his depth perception? In turn, the way he fights/does heroic acts?

2 What does he admire most in other…

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@freedomwriter76

That works so much better! I’m excited to see what you come up with for Nano!

@elishavet-pidyon

I agree with Freedom, I think the only main thing I noticed was the characters were a bit confusing in the beginning. I didn’t know if we were looking at two of Viktor’s friends, but then I realized one was his father. Maybe change a…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Huh.

That is…

I would have never thought about that. Splendiferously good question. Tell me if you ever find an answer.

@elishavet-pidyon

woah, it feels like I haven’t seen you in ages! Your writing style is lovely, sadly it’s getting late and i’m to tired to leave a critique lol, keep up the good work!

@elishavet-pidyon

Sorry, forgot to tag you, the reply to your post is above.

@elishavet-pidyon

Sorry, I typed up a reply and it didn’t post, it might be tomorrow before I can reply again, Sorry.