@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic My Book Feels Too Big (Also heeeey!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
Heeyyyyyyy! So good to see you!
Congratulations on completing your draft! *Throws confetti* That is absolutely amazing! ✨🎉👏🏻 Have you celebrated ? Rewarded yourself?
Some questions… Is it the Destina project or a different one? I don’t want to asume lol. Also, second draft, is it an edited version or a second book? Just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 6 hours ago
Lol. Latin is fascinating.
Collecting slang sounds brilliant and fun. *Takes recommendation* I’ve played with coloquialisms a little, but in a useful way. I shall have to try that.
What’s your favorite word biome so far?
*peers through the glitter*
Wow. Grammar is interesting, but I haven’t done work in it. Your conlags…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
True enough.
Oh this is interesting.
Reúven
Now that was a harder question. He scrunched his eyebrows together as he worked it out.
“Yeah. Accidents happen. I guess any school is going to have those. It’s gotten much better, though, under the current administration. The bully gang was broken up, so most accidents are, well,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 22 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Yay!
Reúven
He had no idea who this lady was. She looked like a student, and near his class year at that. She had to be new.
But if she was new, how did she get on the school newspaper committee?
He looked back to the game as if he was distracted by something over there. Her face blurred in the corner of his vision. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Oh fun! Extinct languages in stories are some of my favorite. Is it commonly understood by the characters, or is it like Latin and has a niche group that uses it?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Question for other world building enthusiasts and /or other KeePers.
Anyone else make up languages? If so, what methods do you use? If not, is there any language you just like the sound of? Do y’all prefer logical languages or something closer to linguistic chaos?
I’ve been working on one off and on the last few years. It’s nothing serious,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
In continuation because this is fun for me at least. XD
Reúven
Yes, this game was fun.
For some reason, that phrase echoed through his head as he lay on his back, staring at the tangle of arms and legs that had plowed into him. Two younger kids had tried to dodge into the same space. Unfortunately, it had been Reúven’s space. He was going to b…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
I guess Reúven is in the Dodgeball game… Hmm.
Reúven
Eibuavkin! His ball smacked soundly into an opposite teammate. Reúven ducked back from the line before someone could fire back. One of his own teammates passed him another ball. Reúven turned the thing in his hands, testing the give of the rubber while he picked out a target. This ball had…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 2 days ago
Lol ok.
Sounds good! I can understand that and sympathize. XD I’ll try to get in some POVs from Reúven so it’ll be ready when you are able. It’ll be fun.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
I’m looking forward to meeting her!
Reúven is not wanting any attention, so that could be suspicious to her. He also usually carries a “pocket knife” that’s beyond the allowed length. She could also see him in uniform and think he’s some hired guard, or otherwise think he’d be great to interview. Then when he refuses an interview,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
That would work splendidly. XD *paused to decide if I’ll info dump on the RP-AU or how he is in canon…*
CANON In his story, his father Micha is the younger brother of one of the heads of the Eirtanian houses (Viktor’s dad). Micha married the daughter and heir of a different house, so Reúven is actually the intended Ra’ehan of the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Dunno who to tag. If you see this, consider yourself tagged.
@RPFam
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I’m seriously considering putting Reúven in some hot water (Figuratively). In the books, he’s deeply involved in espionage. I would like to expand on that part of his personality. So… thoughts or suggestions? I was thinking of having an invisible nemesis start connecting the dots back to the Elrois, but that wouldn’t be as fun as someone else…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@loopylin @theducktator @koshka
I’m not sure how to move forward with the dodgeball. It’s fun, but I’m a little lost. Should we declare a winner?
Viktor
Something blurred in the corner of his vision. Viktor swiveled, his breath locking up in his chest as he recognized the shape.
A ball.
Reflexes got the better of him. His hands shot out and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Hmm. I’ve been thinking about this RP lately. Either way. I was probably going to start unrelated chaos with my Charries, so whatever you like best. I think Reúven should be dabbling in stuff over his head. Hehe.
I kind of got lost in the dodgeball. I’ll attempt to put in an RP in a few minutes. Got to get lunch together.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@hybridlore @whoeverelseknew @AwesomeKeePers @IcannotrememberwhoItold @jetlag
This isn’t a prayer request, just a praise report. For those of you who knew, my sister and I went to Eastern Europe at the start of this year. It has been amazing! And now we are back home, safe and sound. Thanks for the prayers, empathy, and 3 am activity. For the Kingdom!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
That is epic and adorable and yes, it absolutely works! XD If that’s not art, I don’t know what is. It’s amazing.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month ago
Request taken! I’ve actually done both before, (separate portraits) but my style has developed a bit since then. They deserve a revisit. Plus I haven’t tried drawing a couple before. This could be fun. (I actually had an idea for a comic of them a few days ago, but comics are usually too much for me. XD I’ll see what I can do…[Read more]
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