Elishavet Elroi

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Lyn & Nyx 

“Slowpoke,” Lyn trilled, sliding to a stop near a tree.

”I beat you by a mile!” Nyx hissed playfully.

”Mm, sure.” Lyn grinned, looking back. She waved when she saw Alyona, sitting at the foot of a tree a few feet away. She knew the girl had followed her, and had welcome the game of chase initiated by…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon HERE!! And I’m gonna have to go thru and read the new RPs and new characters! And add them to my notes!

Arabella

I sucked in a breath of crisp, fresh air, allowing the cool breeze to blow strands of my hair back.

The garden was nothing like the one at home, which was to be expected. Nothing could top A’Grend after all…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

I only got to see the video recording of Jesus, too. We have friends who saw the show in theater, and they RAVED about it! Alas, I didn’t even know that the Theater existed when that show was playing!

I agree. All of the songs are amazing! The crew at S&S is so talented at choosing just the right words, melodies, instruments,…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I’m sorry y’all. I’ll try to stay on track this time.

Mila means ‘beloved, gracious’, and in some translations ‘precious’.

Vulkasin

A cool breeze welcomed them to the outdoors. Glorious, wonderful free air. No low ceilings or hanging rafters to bash out ones head off. The lady shone in the heavens,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, we did!!! I won’t torture you with a rant about it. 😉 All I’ll say is that it’s my favorite show they’ve done yet. It even beat Jesus, which I assumed was impossible! Plus, we met the actor who plays John (in Jesus) and Joab (in David); that was pretty cool. XD

Do you have a favorite song from the soundtrack? I think…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon AHHH yes, I definitely agree with you there! I love the artistic tidbits found in the Bible, and how it has some of the best imagery and patterns for writing. I mean take the book of Psalms, how much more BEAUTIFUL poetry can you get than that?!

Sweet!

Oh I love that! The paragraph is very short and concise so the use of the…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Hmm I do see what you mean there. Since I finished this piece, I kept getting the feeling that there was *something* not quite right; maybe this is it! Tysm for the feedback!!

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

Is it my turn, or does Mila get a chance?

By the by, Emilysf, do you know what the name Mila means when it has an Old Slavic base?

@elishavet-pidyon

Aahhhhhhh!!!!!!! Alwin, my dear lad…*sigh* That sounds awesome for a first chapter; definitely something I could get hooked on.

Honestly I’ve always envisioned your books to be more YA than middle grade, so don’t worry about that. Your themes will be more powerful to an older age group anyway.

Yes, it’s Mikkel! Thank you,…[Read more]

Not entirely sure who to tag, but here goes!

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

This is part of a scene I’ve had running through my head. It’s from the serie’s last book, Seas of Fury, which is set about 800 Years later, so the technology is way more advanced than in the first two books.

Fog swirled around him, penetrated by something…

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@elishavet-pidyon yes! They’re there!

@elishavet-pidyon OH MY GOSH!! 2 of my friends/youth group is there!!!

@elishavet-pidyon oh cool!!

Hey…I promise I’m not trying to be a creeper 🤣 but r u at a youth camp?

@elishavet-pidyon u wanna go?

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka either of u can go next

I’d like to go to the gardens if ya want??

@samuel-p-robbins

AHHH THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!!! OH MY WORD!!! Is this a first draft because if so…

*faints*

NO BUT SRSLY LIKE HOW?!?! HOW IS IT SO GOOD?!

Maaaaan this was soooo great!! I was HOOKED!!

and the Way you wrote God was soooo awesome!!

here, I’ll tag some ppl for u to read this awesomeness and help ya out!

@gracie-j @koshka…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Arabella

At the mention of gardens, Ara’s mind alighted. She found herself wandering through flashes of color and memories years past.

Home. 

Her eyes glazed over and she smiled faintly, remembering the beauty that had been A’Grend’s garden.

Her Eden.

The birds whistling, the sunlight beaming. Flora and fauna of var…[Read more]