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@koshka @elishavet-pidyon Here it is!! @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @whalekeeper @trailblazer @acancello @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings

I have another chapter to share!!

With Koshka and Elishavet’s help and fabulous ideas, I (FINALLY) got a sweet scene written between Leon and his adorable…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

No comment 😂

Whaleyyyyyyyyyy, you’re scaring meeeeeee

I gotta say, it is an absolute drama of an outline and some of the parts are super crazy 😝 Some deaths make no sense at all, while others make a little too much sense.

AGHHHH, I wanna read it so bad!!!

But I also don’t.🫠

AHHH, this is conflicting😂

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon

Y’all are the absolute best!! I have a scene written and I actually really love how it’s turning out. Y’all are amazing✨✨

@whalekeeper @both-of-y’all-as-well

Yessss, I must do the tea thing in a scene a bit later on. It would be the best thing ever. XD

and now to just figure out what I want to do with Riker in…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper What are the girls and Seb up to?? 😂

@godlyfantasy12 Yessss, I have characters that write themselves XD

Alright y’all, we out of power. And I have a character that’s afraid of the dark, poor boi

But first, Riker!

Riker

“Oh, cool. We don’t have much rock where I’m from, but the little I’ve  heard, I enjoyed. Um, my n…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AWWW THANK YOUU ❤❤

AND IKRRR 😭🥰❤😍🤭

And yes me too girl, I will most likely just sit quietly and feel my heart shatter🫠

@whalekeeper

Ooh okay…sounds interesting  👀

@loopylin

*Pokes head out from secret vantage point*

Hey, I love long RPs. Please don’t apologize. I’d like to see more.

How else are y’all supposed to practice writing and me spying?

*Disappears into the shadows*

@elishavet-pidyon

The tea…XD That should soooo happen.

What if he puts a flower in her hair? What if one of the boys finds a snail or frog and wants to take it home?

@freed_and_redeemed

Awwww, I’ve been so wanting a sweet scene for poor Leon. He’s been through so much.

A walk would be sweet. What about Leon and his daughter picking flowers? The boys could find an earthworm to tantalize their sister with, which could transition into memories of teasing Aadelheide if you wanted (I don’t know if he did, it just…[Read more]

@koshka

Sooooooooo I know that you and @elishavet-pidyon (and @smiley) are all Leon fans….

so I have a question.

I’m currently working on Book #2 (aka Broken Shackles) of my Broken and Redeemed trilogy (Leon/Riker’s standalone trilogy😂) and I’m trying to figure out what to do next.

I want to show a scene of Leon being playful with…[Read more]

@esther-c I’m sorry I forgot about our group🫠

Glad you found a new group for Ev and Adrian to hang out with lol…I think they’ll have a lot of fun on the way😆

@theducktator

Leon is an amazing person for sure! <3 Yesssss, his stubbornness is so much fun😂 bahaha, I’m glad you liked that, bc I changed it from the original where he seemed more like he was just taking all of it without complaint…I feel like him being annoyed at getting beaten up is a lot more fun XD

@godlyfantasy12 Wow…that’s such a hard but important thing to show in your writing

idk what to say right now…maybe an idea will come to me eventually XD

@esther-c

Fin

Fin followed both Easton and Hallie into the classroom. He set down his backpack and offered the teacher a smile. “Good afternoon, Miss.”

“You’re late.”

“I apologize…I wasn’t quite expecting the school to be so…far away? I’m sorry.”

“Well,” she released a deep sigh, visibly exhausted, “at least you’re here…”

Fin smiled…[Read more]

Are you struggling with the plotting itself? or missing scenes?

If you have a vague idea for a scene, you have the base for that scene. How would you describe the event? What emotions are the characters going through? Where is the setting? How did the characters get there? Who all is there? Which ideas could happen first? Are some of these ideas…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly how to help, but I’ll try. Do you want scene ideas, or a workable method to create scenes, or something else?

Here’s a list of scenes I would kinda like to see someday. Discard if not helpful or unfitting.

• Aravember chasing a butterfly.
• Ara with a splinter getting helped by November (or some other swap…

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@princesachronicle22

It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

Yeah, I think I will need a description (: I’m assuming you’ll need one for my charries as well?

Everton

“I hate this place.”

“Ever—”

“Can’t we just break through one of these—” he pounded a fist against the glass, “—windows?”

“Um, no. Take a breather, bro.”

Ev tried to keep his deep breath as silent as possib…[Read more]

@beth-torres Messed up your tag 👆