Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76

Oh! I love personality types. I don’t have a bunch of mine lined out – in fact, I think I only have one. I need to fix that.

For now, however, here’s the one.

Viktor Mynclais is the adopted son of a farmer and the main protagonist in my second WIP. I don’t know what his love language is, (although I have a few ideas) but his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

So, I tried to comment on here before, but things conspired to destroy two responses before they could be shared. Then life became crazy… Now I will try again.

Also, I’m not pointing fingers at anyone. I want to love people like Jesus does: holding spirit and truth. I can get rather passionate about this and similar topics,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

We’ll, I didn’t get time, but I should today. My sisters and I are working a concessions stand at a children’s church camp. We have several hours when the stand closes in the afternoon to ourselves, so I should be able to get on. If somebody else can before that, please go ahead!

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

I’ll go this evening if no one else does and I get time.

@freedomwriter76

OK, so I know this is a touch belated, but here I am…

I love those collages, and Rima sounds ADORABLE! I also love that it’s about Afghanistan and is about a soldier helping an abandoned child like that. (Like, Mt heart is strung) It’s soooo sweet!

Now, do you mind if I ask a few questions? Honestly, all your WIPs are…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Don’t worry about becoming annoying, I for one, like reading other people’s stuff. 🙂 This was a good one!

As for the questions, here are my thoughts:

1. Yes. His guilt is very obviously portrayed. I would mention though, that in his conversation, it gets a wee bit repetitive. That may be on purpose, because it is probably going…

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@pen_for_christ205

*Slips out from behind a gnarled oak*

You like Chuck Black too?!

*Remembers my manners*

Oh, pardon me.

Greetings, and welcome to the kingdom! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write medieval fantasy, poetry, and children’s church material. My two current WIPs are both medieval fantasy, although one is an…[Read more]

@koshka

I know, right? I’ll be doing the same. 😉

@joy-caroline

First of all, considering that you’re in the third draft, you have made a lot of progress with this WIP. And you like the opening, so that’s a good thing.

YES, I haven’t liked ANY of the opening chapters I’ve written. AT ALL. Mostly because they didn’t convey the feel for the story, characters, or world correctly. If it got one…[Read more]

@hullofellowhumans

Yeah, we had to scratch our original idea, which was only about the children of the prophets and had nothing to do with time traveling. The one you’re doing/did still sounds pretty fun!

@sunny421

I like it, especially what the phrase “living out his childhood dream of being a spy”. Luke sounds like a fun character!

@keilah-h

Go on! Write his reaction! This is gonna be great!

@freedomwriter76

Very good! I love how you can get colors and themes to work together so well in your collages. And your story idea sounds great!

You really need to get these written so I can read them! 😉

@Koshka

That’s all right. Nice response. 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h Koshka,

Who’s next?

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, good!

I may add an extension, if @Koshka is taking a break.

Not that I don’t want to meet Crosshair! XD I just realized how that sounded.

@Koshka @godlyfantasy12

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

It may be getting a bit wild… We’ll have to see.

As for not being on late at night, that’s okay. I shouldn’t be on late. 😉

ARE WE MEETING CROSSHAIR TOO? I’M A LITTLE CONFUSED. I went ahead and write it as if we were, but I’m not sure if we are, so I didn’t really pick up after…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Absolutely! If it weren’t for how it benefits the story, nine of us would kill off our characters. With the possible exception of those authors that just love to break their reader’s heart. XD

We all have a little streak of that in us…

But honestly, a death in a book without reason is one of my pet peeves. I hate it when I…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It is sad. *Sniff* but thank you! That means so much. 🙂