@beth-torres
Active 5 days, 3 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 535
-
Esther and
LandriC are now friends 3 years, 8 months ago -
Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
-
Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Yes! I do want critique! 🙂
You are so good at the subtle romance between Ev and Ami, it’s really cute!!
Thx!! I love writing it!
I kinda get what you are trying to portray here, but that could be taken pretty badly by some. My personal opinion is that Ev would have a responsibility to both forgive and protect himself from f…
-
Esther replied to the topic Harry Potter? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Now that I read over my post and just saw what you said, I guess that what I thought doesn’t really make any sense. 😅 But that’s okay. 😁
yes, the worldbuilding was awesome!
-
Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
*clears throat*
Ok… I’m good now. 😁😁
-
Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Ok… so I absolutely love Ev and Ami’s friendship!! And Ami and Destry’s relationship!! <3
I have to tell someone this cuz I’m excited for when I finally get to write it, but Destry saying “Always, Ami. Always.” I gonna pop up again!
And Ev and Ami quoting the book together is also going to come up again!
Those scenes… oh I can’t wait to write t…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity@booksandbeakers @freedomwriter76
@gwyndalf-the-wise , I don’t know if you’re interested in reading more of my WIP. If you don’t want me to tag you so you can read at your own pace, just let me know. But if you do want to stay updated, let me know that as well. 🙂
Next two c…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Harry Potter? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Really interesting opinion!
I think I can agree with you on that. Except that I think Harry Potter is young adult fiction/fantasy. In my mind, YA is like (11)12-18. (I may be wrong on the actually definition) At that point, I feel that young adults will be able to make up their own minds and not be so easily convinced of things.…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Idea Poll in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Oooh!! I love both ideas! They both seem really interesting.
But I think I have to agree with Power and Freedom. I think the first one is the best!
-
Esther replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I didn’t know there was a free version of Canva. I’ll have to check it out. 😉
-
Esther replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 8 months ago
Yes!! I love frappes too!! Specifically caramel ones. Though caramel in any coffee, (iced, hot, or frozen) is great! And my preference for how I want my coffee changes depending on my mood (or the weather XD).
I’ve probably played piano since first grade as well!
A baby dragon would be pretty awesome!! 😉
Yes, I LOVE The Wingfeather S…
-
Esther replied to the topic Hello everyone! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
Welcome, welcome!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, amature writer!!
As for my writing, I dabble in a bit of everything. My WIP is ya dystopian, I have written the first book in a fantasy duology, and I have ideas for a his-fic, contemporary, and 2-4 ideas for biblical fiction s…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Based on this start, Would you read my book, Finding You? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Love the collages/moodboards!!! They look really awesome!!
and the villain… Man he sounds so cool. Er *clears throat* intriguing. I like writing villains. 😁😁
-
Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
yea but I didn’t know what was behind the door….
Oh yeah… oops. XD
GASP HEY!!!! Maybe @princesachronicle22 new healer character?! That way she can help Nyx??
Yes!! Great idea! If she wants to do it then I’m in! 🙂
-
Esther replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I just read the first chapter and it sounds really interesting!
And the cover is beautiful!! Did you design it yourself? (And if so, where/how did you do it?)
I’ll probably pop in on here and read a few chapters from time to time. (I’m in the middle of a few other books for my own pleasure and for school atm) You don’t need to ta…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Hello, Humans of Planet Earth! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 9 months ago
@gold-hummingbird
And I have absolutely no idea what I am doing.
Do any of us really?? XD
Anywho…
Hi!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, homeschooled, amature writer!
My writing is a little bit of everything! My WIP is a ya dystopian, I wrote the first book in a fantasy duology (which is being put asi…[Read more]
-
Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
It’s never too late! We just keep throwing people in. It’s great! XD
Now I’m on! And I am actually getting the notifications now. It may have just been those one or two posts…
or I may have accidentally deleted the email 😅*clears throat*I almost wrote another RP, but I think it’s your turn. 🙂
-
Esther replied to the topic Oh God, Where Are You? in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 9 months ago
-
Esther replied to the topic Encouragement for the Weary Writer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 9 months ago
-
Esther replied to the topic ✨Memes✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That last one! XDXDXD
- Load More
