Ava Coulter

@trahia-the-minstrel

I wish I could be of help, but I haven’t heard of the Author Conservatory before.

@e-k-seaver

Awesome blurb! I liked it a lot actually, but sadly I don’t have that kind of platform at the moment to sign up. Though I wish you the best! 😀

@keilah-h

Hi, Keilah! I’ve never read Green Ember before, but it sounds awesome. That’s a really wonderful thing about Kingdom Pen, I learn about new books to read, from other writers. I’m totally going to read this one:) What’s your favorite part about it?

@annabelle

Hi, Annabelle! I apologize for replying to you so late, (I can often take awhile with replying on Kingdom Pen, so thank you for your patience). I read the excerpt of your book and thought it was awesome!! I always love a good fantasy/action/romance read:) And of course, here’s my email: abigailmetzger73@gmail.com     where I rec…[Read more]

ty for the reminder!

@karissa-chmil

Oh, I like these a lot. The personality really stands out.

These are quotes from a younger character of mine. But I wrote his character quite a while ago.

“Mr. Jeremy Sir, you must come with us.”

“Oh yea, the Ma’am said that unless you got back soon, the city would pare. Ooh, is that an owl? What’s his name?…

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@godlyfantasy12

Okay, that makes sense.

So, do you have any ideas for your antagonist? What are your characters’ goals (especially the MC)? How does your antagonist oppose those goals?

I also love how you’re using some ideas from the Wingfeather Saga!

And I’m also SUPER curious what happened to their dad…

I hope you don’t mind if I pop in here!

1. Yes, I felt that way about Imogen from the Ascendance Series by Jennifer A. Nielson. She was nice, I guess, but I didn’t really connect with her. I think part of the problem was that she had like zero personality.

2. I’m going to go with Orion from my WIP. I would pick 2 or 4 for him. I absolutely hate…[Read more]

Welcome to the Kingdom Pen community, @jasmine-godby! It’s awesome to have you!

I specialize in babysitting, long-distance relationships/dating, large families, anxiety/fear, perfectionism, loving the hard-to-love, and traveling. So… If you have any questions regarding any of those topics (for a writing project or simply needing advice), feel…[Read more]

I can see that. I don’t like super dark themes. Or weird/adult content. 🤣

@trahia-the-minstrel

I misspelled that the first time.

@trihia-the-minstrel

That’s cool! I’ll have to check it out! I have never quite understood anime completely, but the drawings can be quite beautiful in their unique ways! My brother-in-law draws anime-like characters. They are pretty cool!

@trahia-the-minstrel

That sounds like a very good reason to get sidetracked. Lol.

God, my mom’s encouragement, my little siblings, my big sister, my emotions, my mistakes, and my boyfriend have all greatly impacted my writing in some way or another. 🙂

@keilah-h Probably so! Lol.

*gasp* I will totally check this out! That is so exciting! Congratulations! 🥳

Were you able to get that formal writing completed? I have the opposite issue… I have to remind myself not to speak formally on my blog and newsletter. If you need any help, I might could lend a hand depending on what you are trying to convey.

Thank you so much for…[Read more]

Yes! For sure! It is a great first Marvel movie. Lol.

Wow. This is truly beautiful and captivating. Memorizing and awe-inspiring. You did a beautiful job!

Side note: I can be hard to captivate… Something has to majorly hook me for me to be able to feel it. But this… Wow. I felt it. Before the moral of the poem was spoken, I could tell that there was something deep within it.

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@avacoulter Whoa, that’s so COOL that you’re working on a dystopian trilogy!!!!!!!!! I’ve been pretty interested in the dystopian genre lately!!!! (Haha, yep, I totally know what you mean!😉) OooOooo, those are SUPER cool titles!!!!!!! Aaah, they make the series sound so intriguing!!!!! Aw, don’t be discouraged. I’m sure God will inspire you with…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Whoa, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! 😀 It was enjoyable to read, and I LOVE the rhyme you had going on!!!!! FANTASTIC poem, girl!!!!!! 😀

My only suggestion is that it seemed like there needed to be a period between “dreams” and “Pitch” in this part –> “shattered dreams, Pitch black“.

@trahia-the-minstrel

Congratulations!! I shall check it out for sure.