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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
sorry it keeps eating my reply, so if you get like, five responses you can blame the website i guess? XD
@godlyfantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j
Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Making My Antagonist Believable/Likeable (At First Anyway) in the forum Characters 3 years, 3 months ago
@godly-fantasy well…. *breathes out
I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist
1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both sides.
(So maybe have scenes with him being open with Jocelyn at…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@scoutfinch180 Hi! Thanks for the input. I’ll see how I can improve it for sure! 🙂 I’m not really into emotional scenes of this kind but these two have a special relationship, so I wanted to add it. And this is the first draft which is why there may be repeating words, and thank you for mentioning that as I sometimes forget that kind of stuff X…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic What's the most recent book you've finished? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 years, 3 months ago
@kathleenramm oh man good question! I haven’t actually sat down and read a book in months. I’ve been busy with moving across the country and renos and now moving again XD
I’ve listened through the Hobbit and LOTR several times in the last year in audiobook. The last book I actually held in my hands and read was Children of Hurin. Man, that is a…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j ok! good to know XD, thanks!
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j yeah I’d say it is KP because that’s happening to me tooat first it scared me because I thought maybe my computer had a virus or something, XD but I tried my phone and it did the same thingÂ
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j ok, yeah it wouldn’t let me respond for almost half an hour , then it finally loaded the response box 😂
my wifi is fine, it might be my account?
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j
Thanks! By the way am I the only one having trouble loading the page??? It’s been acting weird today. Wouldn’t load the website and errors and stuff… -
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j I think it ate your response; it didn’t show up in email but it shows you did on here xD
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j @precious-y sorry! It’s pretty long lol
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Elfwing and Evelyn are now friends 3 years, 3 months ago
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Elfwing replied to the topic No Need To Open This Topic in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
@abigail-m I read what was on there as of last night (for me, anyways; I live in Nova Scotia lol), and I must say I really liked it! I am terrible at critiqueing other people’s writing. XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
thanks! Lol yeah I’m not much for it either but I figured I have to have some since these two are absolutely besotted with each other XD
ow! That kiss sounds painful! Was the dagger from one of them or someone else though? O.OÂ XD
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Elfwing started the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j @precious-y @abigail-m @daisy-torres @other-people-who-want-to-add-their-two-cents
welllll here’s a kiss scene I did; it’s not meant to be too long, since they’re teenagers and you know *cough * the whole family is watching. Anyways, these two have been separated for months and thought the other was dead; I wanna know what you guys…[Read more]
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