Enid

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    Everytime you do this –

    🫠

    I lose it.

    @keilah-h

    I know, it was funny 😛

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    That’s great! Careful not to accidentally delete the email draft!!

    @keilah-h

    What about telling will spoil it? WHAT ABOUT TELLING WILL SPOIL IT?? That’s the definition of spoiling!! 😆

    @loopylin

    StOP speaking TRUTH 😝

  • Enid posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    Also I’m sorry if I sounded pushy over the whole darkness topic! 😖

  • Enid posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    It’s okay 🤪 I think there are specific types of dark, and I lean into a different type than others do on here. Like for some reason a lot of people here don’t write or read dark humor? But tragic/tortured/abusive backstories are common and detailed. It’s a weird combination of preferences, and I have to admit I don’t identify with those prefere…[Read more]

    • Also I’m sorry if I sounded pushy over the whole darkness topic! 😖

    • @whalekeeper

      I get that, maybe it does seem odd to other people. Dark humor is pretty much fine to me, Ig just depending on context like anything else.

      I think on kp where the *line* stands seems odd because it’s largely dependent on religious beliefs vs some standard. Like, most of us here are not comfortable with ‘creepy’ stuff. For example,…[Read more]

      • @whalekeeper

        That’s interesting. I analyze other people, but I also analyze myself to a further extent. I want to understand all the things my subconscious is hiding from me so I know exactly how I work XD

        Ah, freezing fear of college. Well, I’ve got a freezing fear of Uni. College isn’t so bad, who cares what people think anyways. You’ll have a…[Read more]

      • Riiight, so it’s a distinction between objectively bad things/creepy/bordering on dark magic. I’ve understood the magic issue to some extent, it’s just a lot of the in-between stuff that bothers me.
        Side note, I was into Veggie Tales and Pixar 🙃
        I’m sorry for the little rampage here 😅 But someone can describe the details of their charact…[Read more]

      • Ah, yes, the elusive subconscious 🤣
        I’m almost definitely taking a gap year. Whenever I tell a well-to-do mom I’m not going to college right away, they’ll pause, and their eyes go glassy… it’s funny but intimidating because I’m not living up to expectations.
        The Katara thing!! Yeeess!!! I absolutely hated that! My dad rolled his eyes, and I had t…[Read more]

      • @whalekeeper

        Ah, I see where some of the confusion is. I think the best way I can explain it is that for the majority of the people here, creepy isn’t a shade of dark, it’s an entirely other animal that isn’t ok. I’m not trying to say your doing something wrong, just some people won’t be on board. It’s something that for me changes with exposure.…[Read more]

      • @whalekeeper

        Lol, that’s interesting. Well you should be proud for picking what works best for you, instead of doing the popular thing. You’re living up to your expectations, not theirs. Isn’t that important? 🙂

        Ikr? And honestly such a wordly strange way to approach it. I’ve read writing advice to use walking in on somebody to further a romance…[Read more]

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    Yeess, this season is so bad 🙄 I hope y’all get better too! (And I won’t rush it lol)

  • Enid posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    @mineralizedwritings
    The string of commenting on comments is maxed 😂
    *Is probably more bothered by the darkness comment than I need to be* Most of my writing is composed of jokes and exaggerated candy metaphors! 😭 That stupid human Pokémon story will never leave me. Never.
    Any I love the redemption idea. I’ve never actually tried a redemption ar…[Read more]

    • @whalekeeper

      Oh I’m sorry I didn’t know it would bug you! I just tagged you and loopy because I knew it wouldn’t disturb you, everyone has different tolerance levels. I didn’t mean to say you are a dark person 😂

      Thanks!

      And thank you for the prayers! <3

      Lol are you infj too?

      Btw how are you doing?

      • It’s okay 🤪 I think there are specific types of dark, and I lean into a different type than others do on here. Like for some reason a lot of people here don’t write or read dark humor? But tragic/tortured/abusive backstories are common and detailed. It’s a weird combination of preferences, and I have to admit I don’t identify with those prefere…[Read more]

        • Also I’m sorry if I sounded pushy over the whole darkness topic! 😖

        • @whalekeeper

          I get that, maybe it does seem odd to other people. Dark humor is pretty much fine to me, Ig just depending on context like anything else.

          I think on kp where the *line* stands seems odd because it’s largely dependent on religious beliefs vs some standard. Like, most of us here are not comfortable with ‘creepy’ stuff. For example,…[Read more]

          • @whalekeeper

            That’s interesting. I analyze other people, but I also analyze myself to a further extent. I want to understand all the things my subconscious is hiding from me so I know exactly how I work XD

            Ah, freezing fear of college. Well, I’ve got a freezing fear of Uni. College isn’t so bad, who cares what people think anyways. You’ll have a…[Read more]

          • Riiight, so it’s a distinction between objectively bad things/creepy/bordering on dark magic. I’ve understood the magic issue to some extent, it’s just a lot of the in-between stuff that bothers me.
            Side note, I was into Veggie Tales and Pixar 🙃
            I’m sorry for the little rampage here 😅 But someone can describe the details of their charact…[Read more]

          • Ah, yes, the elusive subconscious 🤣
            I’m almost definitely taking a gap year. Whenever I tell a well-to-do mom I’m not going to college right away, they’ll pause, and their eyes go glassy… it’s funny but intimidating because I’m not living up to expectations.
            The Katara thing!! Yeeess!!! I absolutely hated that! My dad rolled his eyes, and I had t…[Read more]

          • @whalekeeper

            Ah, I see where some of the confusion is. I think the best way I can explain it is that for the majority of the people here, creepy isn’t a shade of dark, it’s an entirely other animal that isn’t ok. I’m not trying to say your doing something wrong, just some people won’t be on board. It’s something that for me changes with exposure.…[Read more]

          • @whalekeeper

            Lol, that’s interesting. Well you should be proud for picking what works best for you, instead of doing the popular thing. You’re living up to your expectations, not theirs. Isn’t that important? 🙂

            Ikr? And honestly such a wordly strange way to approach it. I’ve read writing advice to use walking in on somebody to further a romance…[Read more]

  • @everyone

    S’up.

    I will not have the next part out soon, because I have caught two terrible-horrible-no-good-very-bad viruses back to back 😖

    Am on the mend, but I was on fire for three days and it felt like I was growing laser eyes the hard way.

    Will probably update next week instead, as I now need to catch up on school and hurriedly prepare f…[Read more]

  • @keilah-h

    but did anyone fall to Mundy’s venomous teeth or tail barb?

    I can’t tell you!! 🤣 You gonna make me spoil everything!

    not trying to be greedy or demanding (sorry if I sound that way) but do u have the next chapter ready yet? I (and probably everyone else) really want to see what happens next.

    I really appreciate the enthusiasm ☺️ U are…[Read more]

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    Yeah, ofc, to everything you said 😂

    I don’t personally relate to Riker’s abuse, or Leon’s anger against God, but I do understand them.

    I second Koshka’s point! That’s how I would summarize my opinion.

  • Enid posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago

    It’s so funny that I (and Loops now?) have a reputation of being fine with darkness 😂 Am I darker than the average person?
    Ooh, okay, so is this female scientist going to have a redemption arc? Either I would assume that by reading from her POV, or I would assume she is only going to be an initial POV character as an intro to the world and s…[Read more]

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    I honestly don’t think I can answer that, lol.

    For me, the two have very similarly structured POVs and voices – which is totally a stylistic thing since they are supposed to parallel each other. But that makes it harder for me to choose XD

    The main difference is their internal struggles. I also can’t say I enjoy one con…[Read more]

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    I like Elishavet’s tea idea 😂

  • You know you’re a writer when you scroll through a huge list of baby names, and not one name is new to you

  • @loopylin
    Oh no, Liko! Poor dude… now I feel bad. We must return the keys right after and tell him how cool he is.

  • You know you’re a writer when your sibling physically blocks your mouth from commenting on a new movie

    You know you’re a writer when it takes you 1.2 seconds to create a lengthy theory in your head as to why the new Avatar: Last Airbender show is shooting itself in foot and somehow pulling a character’s turmoil inside out, per the constant refer…[Read more]

  • @godlyfantasy12

    Oh wow, you’re using the Save the Cat method. I’ve never used that outline XD

    I can also volunteer with @koshka as a rambler if you need one.

    Oh oh oh, maybe you need more setting-type things to spur on some scenes. I don’t know much about A’Grend, but it would be great if the setting, and the objects or people who natural…[Read more]

  • @freed_and_redeemed

    No comment 😂

    @godlyfantasy12

    I’m so glad!! I hope it turns out well!!

    @everyone

    I gotta say, it is an absolute drama of an outline and some of the parts are super crazy 😝 Some deaths make no sense at all, while others make a little too much sense.

  • @godlyfantasy12

    Eeeyyy you distracted me in class, and I never get distracted by a phone in class 😂 Now I can say I’ve had a universal teenager experience.

    Hugo

    Bullies – any kind of bully – sent a shiver down Hugo’s spine, spiking the hair along his neck like a dog.

    But he, like this boy, wasn’t aggressive. He would rather smooth himse…[Read more]

  • @rae

    What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?

    Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story, whether big or small.

    Alpha’s purpose is shown through his theme, his drive in life, his passion, or his response to something that changed his perspective forever. What is Alpha’s pur…[Read more]

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