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March 13, 2024 at 12:00 pm #177767
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Soooo Iāve been really thinking latelyā¦and Iām really curious to kinda see everyoneās opinions on which MC in Freedomās Fire is their fav.
So (and Iām pretty sure I know some of yāallās opinions XD) if yāall had to choose between themā¦
Do you prefer
Leon
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Riker
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Iām just really wanting to see everyoneās opinions, and if yāall could, Iād like to see WHY that MC is your fav.
Yāall are the best <3
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:02 pm #177768@loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @lightoverdarkness6 Forgot to tag yāallš«
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:07 pm #177769Oh, interesting questionā¦
Well my kneejerk reaction is Riker because I feel so bad for him but honestly itās got to be Leon.
Hereās a couple reasons why:
Leon feels realistic. Heās lost his spouse, been in the concentration camp, and now has to start over. It makes sense he might become a alcoholic.
Leonās character arc covers a lot of ground. He has a lot of things happen to him in life, and he has a lot of normal emotions because of it. From missing his wife, to loving his children, and hating Riker and God, he feels a lot of things over the course of the book. I can only relate to a character well if I know where there passions lie (Hence why I canāt fully connect with Luke Skywalker lol, he doesnāt really care about much)
Leonās anger is pretty justified. Not that he should have his back turned on God, but after having been through what he has been throughā¦ a lot of people would react that way.
Yāknow the thing is that thereās a lot of your characters that I like, like Riker, because I feel so bad for them! But Leon is the one I relate to. he seems the most real to me. š
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March 13, 2024 at 12:20 pm #177770*thinks for a short minute*
Riker is interesting, but I definitely like Leon more. Aaannndddā¦. my reasons are basically the same as Minās. š
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March 13, 2024 at 12:21 pm #177771Thank you for the very beautiful response!! <3 Thatās exactly the kind of thing I was looking forš
I really love how Leon has grown, bc when I originally started writing his story he felt so fake and I struggled writing him so much because I couldnāt relate to everything he went through, but as Iāve grown Iāve realized that all of us can at least relate to him a littleā¦I mean, weāve all questioned God at some point and weāve all dealt with loss in some way or another (even if itās not at his level!)ā¦so that really helped me make him real and made it so much easier for me to write him.
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and it makes me so happy to know that readers can/will be able to relate to my charactersš
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:24 pm #177772I honestly donāt think I can answer that, lol.
For me, the two have very similarly structured POVs and voices ā which is totally a stylistic thing since they are supposed to parallel each other. But that makes it harder for me to choose XD
The main difference is their internal struggles. I also canāt say I enjoy one conflict over the other, because they are very universal and closely entwined. Itās choosing an arc of self-forgiveness vs. forgiving others ā and I think I relate more to the latter, but even then, having a low self-esteem feeds into the former.
So I donāt like either voice better than the other, butā¦ okay, Iām going to say Leon because I think we need more POVs from the forgiver.
KaPeefers 'til we're old and gray...
March 13, 2024 at 12:24 pm #177773@grcr Ty for the response!! Iām so glad yāall can relate to Leon <3
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:28 pm #177774@whalekeeper I appreciate your honestyš Yess, Iāve begun to see how the two of them parallel each other as Iāve started writing (and it wasnāt originally on purpose, fyiš) so I see what you mean.
Thx for the response tho!! <3
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:33 pm #177775Ooof. Itās so hard to pick a favorite character. XD Especially when I havenāt actually read the book book yet.
As you know, I do like Leon. He was my first favorite, when I first met them. He also reminds me of other characters I have long adored (Natan Israeli, Judah Ben-Hur). At times I donāt enjoy his arc very much, because heās hurting himself and others, but Iām also an author, so I understand (and might do the same to my characters).
Riker isā¦Riker. He has a love for kids and a desire to do right that resonates, even if that desire doesnāt always come from the right place. He is, at times, the more Christlike of the two, which makes me want to shake Leon on occasion XD. He is such a flawed and broken character, dealing with pressures that shouldnāt be, and yet tries so hard to do right. For that I will always appreciate him.
I did prefer Leon at first, but now theyāre pretty much equal. I donāt personally relate to Rikerās abuse, or Leonās anger against God, but I do understand them.
and they both break my heart, thank you very much.First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
March 13, 2024 at 12:38 pm #177776Tysm for the response!! <3
I also love the honesty and I honestly love to see how you love them both for different reasonsš and yesss, Riker loves kids so much, which is adorableš„°
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He is, at times, the more Christlike of the two, which makes me want to shake Leon on occasion XD
šThat got me XD
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I apologizeā¦arenāt breaking hearts what all writers are best at??? ššš
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:38 pm #177777Yeah, ofc, to everything you said š
I donāt personally relate to Rikerās abuse, or Leonās anger against God, but I do understand them.
I second Koshkaās point! Thatās how I would summarize my opinion.
KaPeefers 'til we're old and gray...
March 13, 2024 at 12:39 pm #177778@whalekeeper I love how yāall may not completely relate to them, but you understand them.
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Wow, this is giving me such a confidence boostš
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 12:44 pm #177779I apologizeā¦arenāt breaking hearts what all writers are best at??? ššš
What?!! Of course not!!!!!! *Smirk*
Wow, this is giving me such a confidence boostš
Glad we could help XD
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
March 13, 2024 at 2:27 pm #177788Glad we could help XD
Yesss, thank yāall for all of the help šš
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now to just figure out what to do next in my WIPš« š
Iām on Chapter 10 rn; Iām planning on Chapter 12 being where everything really starts to come to the climax, being that Chapter 12 will mark exactly one year (in the book timeline) since Aadelheideās death and will thus begin Leonās total plunge into hatred/alcoholism and Rikerās plunge intoā¦well, Rikerās already struggling š Basically, Chapter 12 will mark when they both enter into the darkest points of their lives.
But Iām trying to figure out what to do with the two chapters beforehand. I currently have Riker talking with Ezekiel but other than that Iām going blank, ooof
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sorry for the rantš
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Freedom's Fire set to release Spring/Summer 2024March 13, 2024 at 2:59 pm #177791@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @whalekeeper @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-heh-I-can-think-XD
I have this possible scene for Leon/Rikerās 3rd novel!!!
Thereās probably more to this scene, but I havenāt written the rest of it yet and wanted to share what I have so farāØ
I love them so much yāallš
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East Germany, 1952
āOur church numbers are dwindling; people are afraid to even come to church. And those who havenāt been to church before are either afraid or antagonistic to the teachings of Christ. You have no idea how much of a blessing it is that both of you are here.ā
Leon smiled faintly at Nikolai. āWe learned that people needed God here, so we came.ā
āItās a grave danger,ā the young pastorās dark eyebrows furrowed together, āand both of you could be arrested if the authorities learn that you are both here illegally and to help grow a church that refuses to buckle to communism. You two smuggled Bibles here!ā
Riker looked up from where he arranged such Bibles, separating each Bible by language. He rose a playful eyebrow. āWouldnāt be the first time I did something āillegalā under not so good leaders.ā
With everything that had been done for themāeverything God had sacrificedāthe least Leon felt they could do was help people that needed the truth that saved both Leon and Rikerās lives. āItās the least we can do.ā
Nikolai faced Leon with a small, sad smile. āYou could both be arrested. And, well, the Soviets are still furious about the war even though it ended so many years agoā¦if they found out Rikerās pastā¦ā
The rest of his words were left hanging, unsaid. But they were understood by all three men. Leon lowered his voice to a quiet whisper. āIt wouldnāt be pretty.ā
Nikolai nodded, drumming his fingers on his oak desk. āShot at best, a Gulag at the worst. It wouldnāt matter that Riker is an American citizen, not to them. Just knowing that he was in the Schutzstaffel would be enough for them to justify sending him to a Gulag.ā
Leon glanced at his friend; his brown eyes met Rikerās dark blue. Leon stood and strode over to where Riker stood, offering his help sorting Bibles.
Nikolai released a deep breath and stood. āI will be right back, gentlemen. I have something I must take care of.ā
The door closed behind Nikolai, and Leon faced Riker. āMaybe we should get you out of here.ā
Riker faced him and raised an eyebrow; he set one of the Bibles down with a quiet thud. āNo. Why would we-?ā
āIf they found out about what youāveāā
āIf anyone needs to leave, itās you, Leon. Youāre the only one your kids have left other than Louisa, and we both know sheās aging.ā
āIām not the one they would kill in a heartbeat.ā
āThey could.ā
āYou have a family-ā
āAnd you have kids that have no one to depend on but you,ā Riker set a hand on the table, slightly leaning against it; his blue eyes filled with determination and concern, āso itās either you leave, or we both stay.ā
Leon crossed his arms and stared at him for a long moment; he finally let out a sigh. āIsaiahās rightā¦we do argue like brothers.ā
One small corner of Rikerās mouth turned up in a smile; he chuckled and turned back to sorting the Bibles. Leon picked up one of the German Bibles, gently running his hand over the leather cover. āā¦Did you ever think either of us would be here now?ā
āNo,ā Riker admitted, āI thought you were going to kill me.ā
āI wanted to, for a long time.ā Leon whispered; he set the Bible he held with the other Bibles translated into German. āSame as I didnāt want anything to do with God for over a year.ā
āAnd I thought God wanted nothing to do with me.ā
Leon smiled. āTurns out we were both wrong.ā
āThank God.ā Riker whispered.
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and I think Iāve got something planned for Nikolaiā¦hehā¦hehā¦hehš«¢š
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