@whalekeeper
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 18 minutes ago
To be honest, I was having doubts about this fight, but now…you struck the point of excitement in me, and the emotional point in Alpha. Well done.
Jr
Jr didn’t avoid the knife, letting the blade stab him in the torso. Nar screamed. After looking down, Alpha Grath stared at his attacker.
“Hugo Angelo, this fight isn’t only about…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 8 hours, 31 minutes ago
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Hi everyone!
So the reason I tagged you is simple, my cat had four little kittens last night, and I need four cute kitten names! You can suggest as many as…[Read more] -
RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 44 minutes ago
I understand why you did, but you have made a large error. In a spar, against Hugo, Jr would never use knives. He would rely upon his speed, mobility, and strength to toy with Hugo. I’ll work with what you started with, though.
Jr
The boy thought going behind him would matter. Jr laughed on the inside. But he suddenly…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 1 day, 1 hour ago
Thanks for that! I especially like your idea of giving them common ground 😀
Thanks, hope writing your book goes well for you!
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LoopyLin replied to the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 1 day, 6 hours ago
@whalekeeper I have no idea how to write romance, but good luck! I know it will be an awesome story if you’re writing it
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LoopyLin replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
@whalekeeper Yay! Congrats on your first day of summer break!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 1 day, 9 hours ago
I guess I have dug myself into a hole here. Now, by telling you the name of the series, you will receive major spoilers for it unless you happen to have already read it. Oh well…
This is the Five Kingdoms series by Brandon Mull. It is a fantasy series written for 9-12-year-olds about a boy named Cole who dives into a fantasy world…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 11 hours ago
@whalekeeper sorry, if there are an inaccuracies in this.
Nar and Jr.
“I’m officially bored.”
Nar looked at her brother, and smiled as they walked down the halls. “You can watch me in my ‘physical education’ thingy they have, if you want. It’s the closest thing this place seems to have to combat training.”
“So you’re finally getting back into…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
It’s fine. I’m gonna enjoy the attitude of Alpha if nothing else. I think a draw would stay true to his character if Alpha saw the spar as a game. Oh, will Sebster Gangster be there? Alpha would love to see him.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
I’m honestly really worried about this spar. I don’t want to downplay your character, but at the same, don’t want to do injustice to mine.
…and I’m also really bad at fight scenes…
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TheShadow replied to the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 2 days, 3 hours ago
Hello!!
Ok, I’m not the best at romance, but here’s a few tips I can think of right now:
- Establish why the two dislike or hate each other so much. This will add more tension for when the two are forced to work together.
- Build up to the friendship first, because that might take at least few chapters depending on how much they…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 6 hours ago
It’s past noon, but good luck anyway!
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LoopyLin replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 6 hours ago
It might already be past noon your time, but I’m wishing you both luck anyway! Hope you guys do well with what work you have left and enjoy your summer break! <3
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 2 days, 7 hours ago
Nice to meet you!
I will say, romance is not my area of interest and I have tried to avoid any romance in my books. (However, there are still two characters that I am suspicious would end up falling in love anyway.) However, that does not mean I have nothing to say to help you.
In the series I am currently reading, there is a…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 6 hours ago
Hmm…Alpha is at the 20-22 mark in combat. I mean, he was literally created to fight, and get him motivated past the usual amount of “It’s a fight!” And you’re dead. In a spar, he tones it down…so things should be fine…
That is correct.
Chase
Chase breathed a sigh, relaxing his muscles. His eyes turned more pale…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character development/character discussions in the forum Characters 3 days, 6 hours ago
I really like what Ducky said (can I use that nickname @ducktator ? XD) about having a cultist influence the king within his closer circles. Another idea – since you want to preserve the concept of the land being rich and probably settled and populated – is to create a special communications system, then cut it off somehow before the…
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LoopyLin replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
@whalekeeper I’m graduated:p
@theducktator Yay! You’re close!
What’s blue book? I don’t think I ever did that in school
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LoopyLin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
@rae you said that Chase didn’t actually accidentally poison her, right? @whalekeeper
Oscar
Oscar was used to stares. He met Chase’s gaze as he took a sip from the mug he had forgotten to give to the other boy. Chase had weird eyes. White irises, reminding Oz of his own blind left eye. He smiled at the slight similarity.
“Was, was Mrs. Mmmmo…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 20 hours ago
Idk where Nar is anymore XD I’ll go find him.
Yes, Jr would love a spar.
Question, on a scale of one to 25, (1 being basic fighting skills, enough to fight the average ignorant person, and 25 being won an international championship/ is an elite soldier) how skilled is Hugo?
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Keilah H. posted an update 4 days, 3 hours ago
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I’m going on a two-week cruise tomorrow!! Which means I’ll be disconnected from the Internet for the most part. Y’all can still tag me in stuff,…[Read more]
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I have so many ideas:D
1. Tux
2. If you name one Snips, you need to name another one Snails
3. Domino
4. Millie
5. Fish
6. If you name two of them Snips and Snails, you could name the other two Sugar and Spice
@rae
Oh no. You are asking the Author who came up with a whole fantasy race that is known for being terrible at naming. He then put them in charge so that he would not have to put much thought into the names of many characters and locations. They are a lion-like species known as lyens that take a word related to ‘lion’ and change the…[Read more]
Aww, that’s awesome!
Here are a few names I came up with:
Gandalf the Grey
Dusk
Strawberry
Finnigan
Marshmallow
Biscuit
Snickerdoodle
Pepper
Silver