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@grcr @acancello @trailblazer

Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!

@grcr

Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!

I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You guys are so tuning into my vibes right now 😍😎

I’m so glad :’)

That’s what introverts really are. Just various bottled condiments…

Lol oh I love that XD It’s perfect 🤭

@freedomwriter76

Ooooh I love them!!!! 😍😍😍😍

But NOOOOOO LEONNNNNN 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Y’ALL!!!! I’ve got 14 more chapters to edit…then I’ll be done with the major editing of my novel!!!

Girlll!! That’s so exciting and bittersweet at the same timeee 😍😍✨✨😭😭

Congratss!!!!

@euodia-vision

Girl…my brother and I have been watching The Hobbit movie trilogy…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh. My. Goodness. I LOVE that so much XDDD 😍 I love writing snippets like that too. They’re so fun XD <3

Hi!!

@smiley

Awwwww those two chapters! I like Jayla’s background…

But Yelena! Don’t say those things to Buckyyyyyy 😭

@s-tastet

Or any other of Ted Dekker’s books?

@s-tastet

Oh, okay! Yeah, I think I preferred AD30, but 33 was still good. It was really sad though – I won’t spoil XD

Have you read the Chosen series by Jerry B. Jenkins? It’s basically the show, but written as a book, and it’s SO good!! I liked all the insight into the characters. I’ve only seen a few episodes of the show, so I might be…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello

Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.

I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂

@esther-c

Sounds fun!! Min and Allison gave pretty good examples. I don’t really have that much experience writing scripts, but I wish you luck!

@acancello

Lolol 😂

@freedomwriter76 I will pray for your friend!

@whalekeeper

I will pray for your church! That sounds really rough.

Thanks! I do make a lot of my own food, but now a days most places sell gluten free stuff, it’s just pricey.

@smiley

Yeah they did a good job of him seeming human. If vision looked straight up robot I think we’d all be going 🤮🤮🤮 about the romance XD

Also he is really sweet, and you can tell he cares about wanda.

@freedomwriter76

AHHHHHHH

That was SO good and adorable and amazingggggg

😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍

I love Alpine’s backstory!!

@smiley

Wanda better be on that list, I’m still mad at freedom for not including her, *does a Wanda’s head tilt to freedom*

besides the twin should be together

OoOOOOo freedom got the head tilt!!!

Don’t worry, she is. 😉😂

I think my top 5 rn are…

1. Steve

2. Bucky

3. Wanda

4. Spiderman

5. Hawkeye

(Pietro hasn’t quite surpassed those…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!

@savannah_grace2009

I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂

@power

like @lydia-s said: reinforcements have arrived!

Most romantic thing I’ve written (i mean it’s not that romantic but it still makes me happy every time I read it!)

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should ans…

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Okay guys, here’s the most romantic thing I’ve written so far:

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were next to impossible. She knew she should answer, she knew that hiding would only make him worse, but she was paralyzed with the cold hands of fea…

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