Orielle2023

@theloonyone

You can quote someone by copying what he or she says into the reply box, then selecting it and hitting the ” symbol in the left corner (after the bold and italics symbols)

I had no idea either till someone told @arien lol 🙂

@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.

This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Ezra reminds me of a friend I had when I was younger. Yeah, him and Eva… <3

@lightoverdarkness6

When I was 6, I gave my neighbors Saint Bernard a bath, and he ate the soap😂😬🤫.

That’s hilarious! 😀

@felicity

Ok! I’ll be waiting (no pressure lol)

Can’t wait to read it though!

And yeah, I totally thought you meant you were going to face us, the giants 🤣

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Don’t forget about Ezra!! I really like his mood board. Yeah, freedomwriter76, how do you make such REAL characters?!

@mineralizedwritings

You made me laugh… no, you guys aren’t the giants…it’s my own fears and insecurities. 😀 Alright, I hereby resolve:

On Monday, November 28, I will start a topic for the first part/chapter of Overcome for all your thoughts and critiques.

Thanks girl! @starofthrnorth you too!  You’re helping me to expand my horizons!…[Read more]

@Felicity

yeah! We’d love to see your writing! Lol, we aren’t scary giants then are we? 🤣

I have never had a bad experience sharing writing here!

@starofthenorth

I’ve got good news and bad news…which do you want first? JK! 🙂

This was fun to read but like mineralizedwritings said, I don’t have full context so do what is best for the direction you are taking your book and the personalities of your characters! 🙂

1. I don’t think Briana comes across as a feminist, but more like a tomboy…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Ooh! Interesting.

Ok it’s a bit hard to get a full feel for it, I’ll do my best to provide some feedback anyways! 😀

It seems really unhealthy (Ig that’s what your going for, nothing wrong with portraying that)

I would say an unhealthy dynamic gets a bit more complicated when you add romance, I saw the couple hints in there…[Read more]

@arien

Ooh, what’s your WIP about? That’s great that you discuss adoption, I think there need to be more books about that.

Lets see if I can do this without too many spoilers… 😂

Ok so Lesli (18) and Tauren (16) live in the mining district of the west hills bunkers, one of many scattered over the country after a devastating civil war about 160…[Read more]

@felicity

Aw, thanks! It is challenging–but so beautiful and so worth it! Especially since I get to serve in church.

I love organs, especially when the organist really pulls the stops on a hymn like “How Great Thou Art!”

Bagpipes just make me happy. I don’t know why. 🙂

@starofthenorth

You play cello! 🙂 Wow, good for you!! I’ve heard it’s pretty hard, but it sounds super beautiful. Organs are so solemn and I have great reverence for them. And bagpipes, they are really fun to listen to!

That’s so neat that you’re Scottish!!

@theloonyone

Oh ok! I totally get that. Italicizing in KP is a pain. I went back and italicized my whole thing here only for KP to not save the edit 🤦‍♀️. I was thoroughly dissapionted and it didn’t let me try again, so my second chapter doesn’t read the best.

@felicity

We all play piano, I play cello, my sister plays violin, and my dad plays guitar. I guess we all sing, too. My parents sing for church sometimes. My sister and I play in the church orchestra, and we play piano for youth group, too.

Oo, yes, harps are so pretty! I’m just scared by all the strings lol.

I don’t know what my favorite…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m currently working on a moodboard for her. I’ll share it and make sure to tag you when I’m finished :).

I can’t wait! Thanks!

We’re think about either a Golden Retriever or a Great Pyrenees.

Golden Retriever’s were my favorite dog until I saw a Saint Bernard… 🙂

Happy day-after-Thanksgiving!

@starofthenorth

I guess I do like a lot of instrumental music! It comes from being in a family of crazy music lovers. We all play instruments.

I love musical families!!! Can I barge in here and ask what instruments?

So far my family’s at a band level: classical/electric guitars, keyboard, violin, bongo, trumpet and flute. If I could play any…[Read more]

@madelyn

Amen to everything!!! Our God is an awesome God!

I don’t think I met you yet but…I’m so happy to have another sister in Christ! (Sending a virtual hug…) The amazing thing about Christians is that we are all connected, even when we’ve never met. We’re all part of one Family.

Thanks for that post! It was really encouraging to me and…[Read more]