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				<title>NC Stokes replied to the topic Learning How to Plot in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 18 Apr 2018 04:56:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> *trips over self in excitement about those picture thingies* These are great!!! Thank you for sharing!</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bethanysinkyroses/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bethanysinkyroses</a> Ah, plotting, my sticking point for every story. 😉 This link is a list of key scenes in any plot. It helps me tremendously to go through the list and come up with ideas for what each scene will be in my story.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-78237"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/learning-how-to-plot/page/2/#post-71087" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Joy started the topic Why Do You Blog? in the forum Non-Fiction</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Mar 2018 12:32:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Someday, unfortunately NOT someday <em>soon,</em> I want to start a blog. But basically the only reason I want to right now is because a bunch of you guys are also doing it, and I want to join the bandwagon. And because, well, who wouldn&#8217;t want a website where they talked about themselves a lot??</p>
<p>So I was wondering if there are other better, less&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-75359"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/why-do-you-blog/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Mar 2018 16:10:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>  Gotcha. Well hey, film-making is technically writing, too, right? XD</p>
<p>And as long as I&#8217;m here I shall lay out a bunch of my favorite movies&#8230;</p>
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<li>Inside Out</li>
<li>Finding Dory</li>
<li>Home (animated film)</li>
<li>The Cat Returns</li>
<li>Big Hero 6</li>
<li>Zootopia</li>
<li>Despicable Me</li>
<li>LEGO Movie</li>
<li>LEGO Batman Movie</li>
<li>Peanuts Movie</li>
<li>Rio, and the sequel</li>
<li>Kung&hellip;</li>
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				<title>Joy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Mar 2018 05:25:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>  Ooh! Those sound interesting!</p>
<p>Have you ever heard of or seen the movie <em>The Insanity of God?</em> Your post reminded me of it. I would recommend it! but I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s out yet&#8230; It&#8217;s about a couple of missionaries spreading the Gospel in the African Muslin country of Somalia. It&#8217;s really exciting and tugs your heart. 8 out of 10.</p>
<p>Note:&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-75133"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/favorite-movies/page/18/#post-68119" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2018 01:37:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> Oh, yeah. You&#8217;re a Bob Jones guy. I didn&#8217;t see Grounded or Created and Redeemed, but my mom saw Created and Redeemed and told me it was really good.</p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Mar 2018 17:19:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi friends,</p>
<p>I just came back from The Christian Worldview Film Festival, if any of you have heard of that. Basically, all I did was watch Christian films for three days, so I thought I&#8217;d share my opinions on what I watched.</p>
<p>Feature films:<br />
Altar Egos. This film has a tacked on theme and is not very moving, but it is super hilarious!<br />
Like Arrows.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-74693"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/favorite-movies/page/18/#post-67691" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic I don&#039;t know what I&#039;m asking... in the forum Book Discussions</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-dont-know-what-im-asking/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 30 Jan 2018 00:15:40 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>Any book recommendations? I&#8217;m looking for fantasy or historical fiction (or even historical nonfiction) with political intrigue, or just intrigue in general. Or maybe just some clean reads&#8230;&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68570"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/i-dont-know-what-im-asking/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>NaomiJackson replied to the topic The Elements of Elemental Cliche... in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 24 Jan 2018 19:19:58 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As someone who is considering using Elemental powers in an upcoming book, I had to ask: what is the MOST ANNOYING thing you&#8217;ve seen done using Elementals? What is the coolest? That would really help me, thanks! <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/warrioroftherealm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@warrioroftherealm</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Cliche? in the forum Fantasy</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cliche/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jan 2018 19:03:45 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>The moment in some movies where one of the characters finds a secret message wrapped around an arrow (which is shot into the room)&#8230; Is it cliche?</p>
<p>Jackson E.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-67812"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cliche/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Fantasy Medicinal Plant Names? in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jan 2018 19:27:38 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>Any names for a fake medicinal plant/root/herb?</p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic The Elements of Elemental Cliche... in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 10 Jan 2018 18:18:51 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>Do you guys think elemental powers (i.e. fire and ice powers) are cliche? And if they are, what are some reasonable alternatives?</p>
<p>Jackson E. Graham</p>
<p><a href="http://jacksonegraham.wix.com/jackson-e-graham" rel="nofollow ugc">http://jacksonegraham.wix.com/jackson-e-graham</a></p>
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				<title>bethanys.inky.roses started the topic The Semi-Grand Return of the Ink Rose in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 29 Dec 2017 18:21:47 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah yes. The famous re-introduction, which has now become customary for those bumbling henchmen who say hello, hang out in the forum for a bit, and disappear.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been a part of the KP forum for perhaps nine months. I absolutely love the site. But I vanished off the face of the kingdom about three months ago. I kept meaning to return, but&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-65102"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-semi-grand-return-of-the-ink-rose/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic What Are the Cliches of Sci-Fi? in the forum Sci-Fi</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 Dec 2017 14:03:19 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> had a great thread on sci-fi a while back that touched on a lot of cliches&#8230; Well-worth reading: http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/beginners-tips-for-writing-science-fiction/</p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Because I promised I would... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 09 Nov 2017 20:19:12 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> thanks. 🙂</p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy started the topic Because I promised I would... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 09 Nov 2017 18:37:47 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*crawls out of a hidden drain, dripping wet and covered in seaweed* SO&#8230; hey. It&#8217;s me. I actually don&#8217;t have a revolutionary writing concept to share today. Or advice to ask for. I&#8217;m starting this topic for a much more mundane reason.</p>
<p>I promised several of you (and I&#8217;ve forgotten exactly who *cringes*) to let you know when I had my blog up and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59616"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/because-i-promised-i-would/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snapper started the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 08 Nov 2017 17:51:23 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So, I have an idea for a story, but I need a reason for this one aspect.</p>
<p>Why would a city be abandoned after a war. Like a huge city, with a population of a couple million. Why would it be abandoned, and why would it stay abandoned for 15+ years. Ideas? Brainstorm? Throw it at me. </p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/catwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@catwing</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emily/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emily</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/lady-iliara/' rel="nofollow ugc">@la&hellip;</a><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59497"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/war-torn-city/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Stay out! in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 13 Oct 2017 19:06:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>What are some ways to separate two enemy countries at the border, yet have someone accidentally cross it (or go to war)? I thought about a wall, but that&#8217;s not really original.</p>
<p>Jackson E. Graham</p>
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				<title>bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Brainstorm Help: Supervolacoes, ravens, and ping pong balls in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Oct 2017 01:55:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a> You guys are the best. Thanks. I really needed some brutally honest feedback.<br />
Okay, I was definitely wondering about the genre-mixing. I&#8217;ll see what I can do about real animals with intelligent-seeming attacks. (Daeus, I find it creepy that you almost nailed my original idea to a T. Like even that scene you&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-56014"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/brainstorm-help-supervolacoes-ravens-and-ping-pong-balls/#post-47806" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Brainstorm Help: Supervolacoes, ravens, and ping pong balls in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/brainstorm-help-supervolacoes-ravens-and-ping-pong-balls/#post-47783</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 10 Oct 2017 23:45:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bethanysinkyroses/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bethanysinkyroses</a> that would be <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sierra-r/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sierra-r</a> and I have forgotten Cindy&#8217;s as well. 😛</p>
<p>The first thing that strikes me as I read your summary here is that you&#8217;ve focused a lot on symbolism.<br />
That&#8217;s a good thing. But it can also be a hindrance. In my experience, when I focus too much on the symbolism of a thing, it comes out one-dimensional as only&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-55995"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/brainstorm-help-supervolacoes-ravens-and-ping-pong-balls/#post-47783" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic *Stereotype Alert* in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 10 Oct 2017 22:43:25 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Alright. In one of my future story ideas, there is&#8230;</p>
<p>A strong female character. </p>
<p>She belonged to a group of outcasts, and was exiled for her violent behavior and extreme independence&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-55987"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/stereotype-alert/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>bethanys.inky.roses started the topic Brainstorm Help: Supervolacoes, ravens, and ping pong balls in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 10 Oct 2017 21:56:42 -0400</pubDate>

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I&#8217;ve been steadily trying to plan a story that has stayed in my mind for years (quite an accomplishment on its part) and is just roaring to be let out. Could you let me know two things: on a brutally honest scale of 1-very boring to 10-I would stay up all night reading that!!!!, does this interest you? What are some potential&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-55982"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/brainstorm-help-supervolacoes-ravens-and-ping-pong-balls/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Political Intrigue in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 02 Oct 2017 21:25:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a></p>
<p>Fun Question—<br />
What are you guys&#8217; opinions on political intrigue in fantasy? Is it riveting? Is it cliche? What do you guys think? How many of you have used it in your writing?</p>
<p>Jackson E. Graham</p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham replied to the topic Female in Sword Fight? in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Oct 2017 22:41:40 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>This angel doesn&#8217;t have wings, so he&#8217;s quite agile. The fighting arena is flat, so no parkour I&#8217;m afraid (saving that for a later book!). 🙂 </p>
<p>Jackson E. Graham</p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Female in Sword Fight? in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Oct 2017 21:50:35 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Alright. Female character goes up against strong, evil male angel character in sword fight. She&#8217;s skilled in sword fighting, but is not nearly as strong as the villain. How would she fight him without&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-54580"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/female-in-sword-fight/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus started the topic For all who love speculative fiction in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 Sep 2017 12:03:51 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;m excited to announce that on October 2nd KP will hosting a panel discussion dedicated to the topic of speculative fiction!</p>
<p>Yes, fantasy, sci-fi, the stuff we love. I hope you&#8217;ll be there. 😀 😀 😀</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the link.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-54138"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/for-all-who-love-speculative-fiction/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Josiah DeGraaf started the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 23 Sep 2017 19:57:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey all!</p>
<p>It is my pleasure to introduce you all to the new Kingdom Pen site&#8211;now faster /and/ mobile-friendly. 😀</p>
<p>As you may notice, it looks quite different. And while I <em>think</em> I&#8217;ve caught all the bugs, there may still be some that have evaded my eagle-eye. So if you find something, drop us a note here or email us at <a href="mailto:kingdompenmag@gmail.com" rel="nofollow ugc">kingdompenmag@gmail.com</a>.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53383"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/new-website-party/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy started the topic Mentorship in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 16:10:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heyyyyyy guys! Look who&#8217;s posting again&#8230; *gulps and ducks under the table* I know I&#8217;ve been sadly absent. Life. Eighteen. Schedules. Editing. Life again. You get it. 😛 </p>
<p>This is actually not a question about writing specifically&#8230; but rather, I want to know what you guys think about mentorship. As in, finding a mentor who will help you along&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-53127"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mentorship/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Article Question in the forum Fantasy</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/article-question/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 19 Sep 2017 22:44:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a></p>
<p>I just read the article &#8220;How to Resist Writing Sterotypical Fantasy Races&#8221;. In my book (which is set to be available for sale by Christmas), I have elves and an orcish race. Does this make it too&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-52799"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/article-question/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Invisibility in the forum Fantasy</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/invisibility/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 29 Aug 2017 17:16:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a></p>
<p>In a battle, how would you reveal someone who can turn invisible at will? Has to be something that not everyone can do.</p>
<p>Jackson E. Graham<br />
<a href="http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham" rel="nofollow ugc">http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham</a></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Tree in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 22 Aug 2017 01:12:52 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;ve been thinking of including the Tree of Life in my story (named differently, but basically the same as the one in Genesis). However, I was wondering if non-Christians who read my book would think I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-50224"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/tree/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Possible Book Title in the forum Fantasy</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/possible-book-title/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 20 Aug 2017 01:04:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a></p>
<p>I have another book series that I&#8217;m going to write in the future, but I am having difficulties with the title. Pick the one you like:<br />
1. The Heathen&#8217;s Sword<br />
2. The Heathen Sword (without &#8216;s)<br />
3. The&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-50038"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/possible-book-title/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/way-too-many-cliches-in-one-place/page/3/#post-39839</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 11 Aug 2017 01:33:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi guys,</p>
<p>I made another one. Btw, I don&#8217;t plan to keep posting these here, so if you want more of them, subscribe directly to the channel.</p>
<p><iframe loading="lazy" width="1080" height="608" src="https://www.youtube.com/embed/qVBW2Ubcxyw?feature=oembed" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe></p>
<p>I&#8217;ll tag a few people I don&#8217;t think have seen these.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/aratrea/' rel="nofollow ugc">@aratrea</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/josiahdeboer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@josiahdeboer</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/spradlin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@spradlin</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/shannon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Shannon</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bethanysinkyroses/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bethanysinkyroses</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/winter-rose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@winter-rose</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/delightinlife/' rel="nofollow ugc">@delightinlife</a> </p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Christ Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/christ-characters/#post-39428</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 09 Aug 2017 12:38:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/graciegirl/' rel="nofollow ugc">@graciegirl</a> Oh dear. I confess I know nothing about this.<br />
The only input I have is Aslan as a CC&#8230;<br />
<a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> You know anything about this? (see above post)</p>
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				<title>WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Creature Question in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 05 Aug 2017 21:54:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> I agree about how Lewis used his mythology. He even tied in mythological characters to Christianity, which is no small feat! </p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/warrioroftherealm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@warrioroftherealm</a> I agree that it is a good idea to stray from the topic of evolution while writing about Christian topics. Try to make up a backstory to your dragon-like creature that completely rules out&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-47688"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/creature-question/#post-38972" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snapper replied to the topic Weird novel idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 04 Aug 2017 22:12:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> So that&#8217;s what brainstorming looks like.<br />
Awesome. </p>
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				<title>EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Weird novel idea in the forum Novel Idea Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 03 Aug 2017 17:06:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> Those ideas are pretty cool. The white tree in Gondor would have a cool story to tell!<br />
That&#8217;s a good question about where a tree actually thinks. I was thinking maybe somewhere in its trunk&#8230; I dunno. I&#8217;ll have to think about that.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/seekjustice/' rel="nofollow ugc">@seekjustice</a> I could always do both trees. It would be cool to compare notes! We should definitely&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-47514"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/weird-novel-idea/page/2/#post-38810" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jackson Graham started the topic Creature Question in the forum Fantasy</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 28 Jul 2017 22:49:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/gretald/' rel="nofollow ugc">@gretald</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bluejay/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bluejay</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/writefury/' rel="nofollow ugc">@writefury</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/daeus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/hannah-olsen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hannah-olsen</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/sarah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Sarah-H</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/kate-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/emma-flournoy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@emma-flournoy</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/dragon-snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dragon-snapper</a>, <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/michael-stanton/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-stanton</a></p>
<p>I&#8217;m in a dilemma. I&#8217;ve created this creature for my fantasy book that is like a large dragon type creature. It is covered in metallic scales, has a long tail, and looks pretty much like a dragon except&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-47000"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/creature-question/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What do ya&#039;ll think about taking breaks? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jul 2017 16:15:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> :O :O :O Is that what happened??? :O :O :O Wow&#8230;<br />
*stares at wings and claws*<br />
*blinks at dragonish self in a mirror*<br />
*runs screaming from the room*</p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jul 2017 16:13:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> you know, I just might.</p>
<p>Oh great. Now I&#8217;ve committed. XD</p>
<p>Hmmm&#8230; that does sound like Chewbacca. One side of him, anyway. I suppose it could go either way, but I always felt that he was an extrovert.<br />
But then, Han is a full-blown ESTP, so I guess they&#8217;d probably kill each other if they were identical. 😛</p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jul 2017 16:33:54 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a></p>
<blockquote><p> I just like tangible explanations once in a while, you know?</p></blockquote>
<p>&#8230; yeah. I think you&#8217;re definitely a Sensor. 😛 Congratulations; those are rare among writers. 😉<br />
Hmm&#8230; MBTI is one of my obsessions, in case you hadn&#8217;t noticed. 😛 Maybe I&#8217;m just leery of over-extending myself or being too confident in my own powers of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-46505"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mbti-is-fake/page/5/#post-37832" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic A Wanderer Returns in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Jul 2017 23:05:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mariposa/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mariposa</a> The pleasure is mutual! No, sadly, four-wheeling in the snow is an opportunity not yet afforded to me. The four-wheeler is actually my aunt and uncle&#8217;s, so I only get to use it about 4 or 5 times a year. But I absolutely love it! 😀</p>
<p>@that-writer-girl-99 Very well then, it&#8217;s settled! I nominate you as queen&#8211; and I shall be the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-46432"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-wanderer-returns/page/3/#post-37784" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emily D posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Jul 2017 11:22:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> Just wondering :).  He&#8217;s about the only philosopher I&#8217;ve heard of and actually read some of his work :P.   He was a really great author though.   </p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic What makes a good music video? in the forum Music</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jul 2017 15:26:48 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/donyclark/' rel="nofollow ugc">@DonyClark</a> I actually listen to music more than I watch it, but let me tag a few others for you who might better be able to answer your question. 🙂</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/leumeister/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Leumeister</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/charisetter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Charisetter</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/f5a8c3e92/' rel="nofollow ugc">@f5a8c3e92</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/radicalglitter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@RadicalGlitter</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/cloudy/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Cloudy</a></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Jul 2017 22:01:33 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> Haha yes. XD<br />
<a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/anna-brie/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Anna-Brie</a> Trruuuue though. It just seems that all those introverted writers forget that we exist. *squints* 😛</p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Jul 2017 15:20:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> what you said about Introversion vs Extroversion is quite true&#8212; but I tend to believe that the need for alone-time is <em>because of</em> the fact that an Introvert&#8217;s world is in their head. That&#8217;s where they feel most comfortable; just with themselves. While they can enjoy the society of their friends, it will never be as natural or&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-46088"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mbti-is-fake/page/5/#post-37476" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emily D posted an update: @mark-kamibaya Hi!  I saw that you like philosophy.  Just [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Jul 2017 09:26:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> Hi!  I saw that you like philosophy.  Just wondering, do you like Francis Shaeffer&#8217;s books?  </p>
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				<title>Anna Brie replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mbti-is-fake/page/4/#post-37460</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Jul 2017 07:01:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> <a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jane-maree</a> The&#8217;s probably more extrovert writers than we realize. I know at least one outside KP. Another ENFP funnily enough. And i know we have a couple of ENFJs here.</p>
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				<title>Daeus replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jul 2017 16:21:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mark-kamibaya</a> WHAT!?!? The earth revolves around the <em>sun</em>???????</p>
<p>Here, have some fun with this. (one piece of language, fyi)</p>
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				<title>Emma Flournoy replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jul 2017 16:20:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> That&#8217;s what you get when you make clickbait. XD It&#8217;s an interesting discussion at any rate.</p>
<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/bethanysinkyroses/' rel="nofollow ugc">@BethanysInkyRoses</a> REALLY? That makes a lot more sense now. I always thought it was Bethany Sinky Roses and could never figure out why. Thank you for the enlightenment! *chuckle* Sorry &#8217;bout that. No apostrophe in a username&#8230; Aaaand are&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-45488"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mbti-is-fake/page/3/#post-36863" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Kate Flournoy replied to the topic MBTI is Fake in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jul 2017 16:09:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='http://kingdompen.org/members/mark-kamibaya/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Mark-Kamibaya</a> yes. Most people do use it as a classification system, which bothers me to no end. If you dig down deep and really get to understand the process though, you&#8217;ll see the sixteen types are really only a general summary of probabilities built on the common tendencies/stereotypes of the different functions. (Not cognitive functions;&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-45483"><a href="http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/mbti-is-fake/page/3/#post-36858" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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