@lightoverdarkness6
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings
So after several KP deletings and accidental refreshing the pages, I FINALLY typed this! Sorry it took so long😅🤦🏻♀️.
Oh okay! I like the name Everly better too😊. Whoa, a trap door?! Our poor charries😅😬.
Matthew
Me and Carter leaned, hands on our knees, panting.
I looked over at Carter. Smiled, “I t…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hey Everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hey there!! Welcome to KP, Erica! I’m Lightoverdarkness6, a southern teen girl that loves to write. I’m currently writing a contemporary fiction story. It’s in the very beginner stages.
I like your books name! There’s a spoiler forum on here where you can share your spoilers if you want to 😊. I saw that you’re into aquarium…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
Is her name Evelyn or Everly? I think you’ve typed both😅.
Matthew
“Oh…I’m not s-sure.” I stuttered.
“Hmmm.” Kaine looked up at the castle. Laughed, “Intimidating isn’t it? I’m going. I need to find Everly.” And with that, he walked off.
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Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Awww thank you!! Yeah!! That’s one reason I chose this for my username. To spread light and remind others that “The light will always prevail.” 😊
That’s cool!! Yep, I Love mine too ❤️ ❤️. Now, I don’t always like them, but I will never stop loving them.
Thank you!! I thought of questions I would want to be asked. Ooh, great answers!!…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings
Ooh I like Evelyn already!! Can’t wait for Lyla to meet her!! -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Lyla
Cold. It was cold. I opened my eyes and slowly looked around. I was in a cold, bland, room with stone walls. Stone? I stood up and rubbed my arms. Then he walked over to the wall and felt the cool, rough, stone.
Where in the world am I? And where’s Matthew?!
“Well, I’m not accomplishing anything by staying in this room,” I said aloud.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Here’s Lyla!!

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin
I forgot to do Lyla’s bio too 🤦🏻♀️😂.
Lyla is 13 years old, and Matthew’s twin sister. She is actually only 8 minutes older than Matthew😂. She has light brown hair with a touch of blonde. And she has blue eyes. She’s a lot feistier than Matt. In fact, she usually protects him from the common bulli…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
That is such a cool idea!! Let’s totally do that! And Loopy, you captured Matthew’s personality perfectly👍😊!
Matthew
After Kaine climbed over the wall, we found the stairs he had spoken of and met back up with him, Carter turned to me, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
“Hey, Matt. I’ll race you to t…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Introducing a Fellow Writer in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
Hi!! Welcome to KP, Felicity! I’m pretty new to the forum too! Cool! I write in Contemporary Fiction, but if I did write Fantasy, I’d steer clear from magic too. Your WIP sounds cool! SEVEN SIBLINGS?!?!? Wow!! I have three😂.
Now for some ask the newbie questions!!1. If you could meet your 3 favorite characters from a book/favorite act…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh my gosh, you are just so sweet!!! <3 <3
Yes :)!
You are so welcome!!!
YES!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah! Oh cool!
I haven’t read that one before. I’ll have to look it up ;).
Oh, okay! That’s good. 🙂
Are you doing anything for Thanksgiving? We’re going to our aunt and uncle’s house.
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Light replied to the topic Book Ideas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
Yes! I know, right?! XDXD
My dad is really good at math too!! My dad explains it to me, and then I pretend to understand, then immediately go to my mom to explain it. XD. My mom is really good at explaining math, and my dad is good at just math. So they make a good team to teach me😂.
Yeah, I’ve never even read a story about H…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Hey everyone!! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 7 months ago
I’m so sorry I’m just now responding! We had a lot of house work to do today😅.
Yes❤️❤️!!
Oooh, yes!!! I read him some the other day in the Fantasy School AU, other than being a little confused with all the characters, his favorite characters so far are: Wolfgang, Paxton, Leo, and Riker! Yesss, girl, I think Leo may be my favo…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 7 months ago
Thank you!! Yes it was!
YOU’RE SOOO WELCOME!!! Yes!!! XD.
Okay!! Girl, take your time. I know you’ll do good!! Good luck!!
Also, girl, I just read that part on the Fantasy RP AU where Edric dropped November and Joshua tried to catch him, and they both got hurt, and Girl!! Oh my gosh that part was heartbreaking 💔! But so swe…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
OH MY GOSH!!! NO!!! NOVEMBER!! JOSHUA!! Oh my gosh, Aramis and Edric better be glad they aren’t real people😡😤😡.
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Light replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 7 months ago
I’m sorry girl, I would’ve responded sooner but I’ve been at yoga with my grandma and then went to eat lunch.
OH MY GOODNESS, GIRL!!!! I’m in love already!!! Oh my gosh that first chapter my heart was breaking for Leon😭😭❤️❤️❤️! Riker!❤️❤️!! Ughh!!! Sweet Riker and Leon. And Ezra!! Poor Ezra❤️😭. This is SOOO GOOD!!! I need more!…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings
Matthew
”Oh yeah?” Kaine said, looking at me, brows furrowed. I knew he was wondering why I stuttered so much. Quite frankly, I wasn’t sure! I always got nervous when I was around new people, if I’m around a pretty girl, or if I’m afraid something happened to Lyla. And when I get scared, I stutter.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic song lyrics critic and ideas for next verse in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 7 months ago
Whoa this is so good!! I like the kind of low haunting melody that you sang it in. Also u have a very good voice! Yes, I agree with @kathleenramm, I think it would sound really good with Guitar.
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