Liberty

Are you struggling with the plotting itself? or missing scenes?

If you have a vague idea for a scene, you have the base for that scene. How would you describe the event? What emotions are the characters going through? Where is the setting? How did the characters get there? Who all is there? Which ideas could happen first? Are some of these ideas…[Read more]

Oops got the tag wrong @theducktator 

@theductatorI love those Madlib quotes! Maybe I should go dig up some of my own…

Oooh memories were just triggered lol. Enjoy this one:Classmate 1: *eating a Clif bar* “This looks like a dehydrated hamster.”Classmate 2: “What?”Classmate 1: “Yeah, like just imagine sticking a hamster in the food processor and dehydrating it. It would look like this.”Same classmate also remarked that he liked eating rotten wood with termites.

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know exactly how to help, but I’ll try. Do you want scene ideas, or a workable method to create scenes, or something else?

Here’s a list of scenes I would kinda like to see someday. Discard if not helpful or unfitting.

• Aravember chasing a butterfly.
• Ara with a splinter getting helped by November (or some other swap…

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@princesachronicle22

It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?

@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h

Yeah, I think I will need a description (: I’m assuming you’ll need one for my charries as well?

Everton

“I hate this place.”

“Ever—”

“Can’t we just break through one of these—” he pounded a fist against the glass, “—windows?”

“Um, no. Take a breather, bro.”

Ev tried to keep his deep breath as silent as possib…[Read more]

@beth-torres Messed up your tag 👆

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beth-torres

Sorry I took so long to RP again!!

Oh and quick question, how is Navin pronounced?

Fynn 

“Just down this way.” Fynn led the way with long strides, but slowed down when Navin didn’t walk as fast. They fell into an awkward silence that Fynn racked his brain for a way to break. “So, you going to the dance tomorrow…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, that’s a pretty big thing to portray. And has gotten my brain on a rabbit trail with Moses and his siblings. Some people don’t realize that when they are critical of God’s minister they are undermining of God’s authority, just like Mirriam and Aaron over Moses’s non-Hebrew wife. As Mirriam learned, that’s not a good place…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Does he know what he will be doing is spying? Or does he think he’s supposed to watch out for Ara to keep her safe or something?

In other words, if he thinks the information being passed to his father will be for Ara’s benefit, why? Does he think that Ara could be unknowingly endangering herself, and that the King wants his…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

True. It’s not like Chase blames God, he just doesn’t get the whole God thing. He goes with the Marshalls to Church, and he will pray with them or listen to the Bible, but his attitude is “It’s your religion, you can do what you want, I just don’t get it”

The day Chase visited his father on his deathbed, he told Mr. Marshall…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I was wondering if they had an accent…

Amanda has an east Texas accent/drawl. So how I normally speak. XD

Jayson is from French speaking Canada, but has very little accent due to living to the school and living with the Katz’s since he was 7.

Raphael speaks English with a central American accent, Ashkenazic Yiddish, and…[Read more]

Finally a place to share this thought!

You know you’re a writer when a random sentence in (insert language) class strikes your fancy, so you write a short story instead of finishing your lesson.

For instance:

(.אנחנו הילדים)

Let’s hope I’m not double posting this…

You know others know you’re a writer, when your dad says in front of the whole church “when my girls hear the word ‘character’, they instantly come up with things like backstory and plot.”

And when you added “character arc, weapon choice, world building” under your breath, you know it’s true.

Did Wyoh just…*blinks*

@godlyfantasy12 hmmmm quite the predicament.

I do have a question: Does November genuinly believe that his father really is a good person?

Bc if so, I think him thinking that it will help the family and everything he does for his father is innocent is a great way to handle the situation. Plus, it can help show how later (like in later books…[Read more]

You know you’re a writer when you start acting out dialogue in the middle of the day, making everyone else question your sanity

You know you’re a writer when you create so many book ideas even when you know you’ll never be able to write all of them

@godlyfantasy12 NOT THE BABYYYYYYYYY

😭😭😭😭😭

thank you for making me feel like crying again😂