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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Writing out of chronological order? in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Sep 2022 17:36:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a></p>
<p>I actually don&#8217;t write out of chronological order. I kind of have to follow the story from beginning to end, because I feel like I maintain the natural progression/momentum of the story better that way. Then I go back and edit however much I want, and that&#8217;s when I jump from scene to scene out of chronological order. I&#8217;m also a bit&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-114741"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writing-out-of-chronological-order/#post-118349" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Really struggling with opening chapters... in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jul 2022 01:44:35 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I totally feel this struggle. I have rewritten so many chapters, <em>especially</em> opening ones, because I’m almost never satisfied with chapters that I’ve written. Opening ones can be so difficult because you’re juggling introducing the book’s themes, characters, and conflicts all at once in a way that’s memorable, satisfying, and intri&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-110956"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/really-struggling-with-opening-chapters/#post-113608" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Choosing a Writing Platform?? in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jun 2022 05:07:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> Thanks for chiming in anyway! XD</p>
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<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/devastate-lasting/' rel="nofollow ugc">@devastate-lasting</a> Thank you so much! I know you have a lot of experience with online publishing, so I&#8217;m really glad you wrote an article about it.</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic How to make a side character more interesting? in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 16 Jun 2022 05:06:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> I think something to consider is what theme you&#8217;d like this character to represent, and then working with that. So if your themes are love and faith, maybe finding a way for this character to struggle with one of those things. An estranged family member they have to reconcile with, and demonstrate love? A health crisis they have to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109749"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-to-make-a-side-character-more-interesting/#post-111544" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile started the topic Choosing a Writing Platform?? in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 05 Jun 2022 05:19:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, my friends! It&#8217;s been a minute since I was last on here. I&#8217;ve missed you all!</p>
<p>I have a question for any of you who have tried writing platforms similar to Wattpad, for context. I recently finished co-writing a book with my sister and we&#8217;re not sure what we want to do with it yet, so we&#8217;ve decided to try uploading it to a writing site over&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-109696"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/choosing-a-writing-platform/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-website-is-up-and-functional/#post-109015</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 10 Feb 2022 08:39:02 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> Ahh girl that&#8217;s SO exciting!! Congratulations! The site looks great, it seems like you&#8217;ve put a lot of work into making it so nice. I&#8217;ll definitely be signing up for your newsletter! I&#8217;m so excited to hear more about all your artistic work!</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Free Christian Dystopian Book in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/free-christian-dystopian-book/#post-108779</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 01 Feb 2022 05:42:02 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Oooh thanks for sharing!! How exciting!</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic I&#039;m giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/4/#post-108530</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2022 21:13:33 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> Yay! A WIP chat (that I&#8217;m super late to! Sorry)! And I&#8217;m so excited for WFR 🙂</p>
<p>I&#8217;m about halfway through the first draft of a story my sister and I have been working on for years. Technically, this is around the third or fourth time we&#8217;ve tried to write it, but this is the new first draft of a freshly re-plotted version of the story&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107736"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-giving-you-permission-to-rant-about-your-wip/page/4/#post-108530" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/cover-art-sharing-space-critique/page/2/#post-108105</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 31 Dec 2021 06:05:46 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Haha no, definitely not weird!! I love thinking of my stories as a movie, which is kind of similar. I&#8217;ve actually taken some directing/filmmaking classes online because of this&#8230;but that might also just be because I love movies and visual storytelling XD</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 23 Dec 2021 18:26:25 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> I&#8217;m so late!! My notifications haven&#8217;t been working on KP, apparently&#8230;</p>
<p>I love your covers! The compositions are great and the details are so cool! It&#8217;s super hard making a good cover&#8230;I don&#8217;t have any for my WIPs at the moment but when I do I&#8217;ll put them up here. This is such a cool idea and space to share our covers! 🙂</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 16 Dec 2021 06:21:03 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>I love this poem! I think it&#8217;s beautiful and emotional, perfect for a captive to sing.</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 14 Dec 2021 21:38:41 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> Sure thing! And that&#8217;s so cool about all the fashion stuff. Your story sounds really interesting!</p>
<p>I totally get that about Psalms. It is poetic and emotional, I really like it for that reason.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s so nice to meet you! Hope to see you around the forums 🙂</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 14 Dec 2021 08:54:22 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/annabelle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@annabelle</a> Hey there! Welcome to the Kingdom! My name is Jodi. I write fantasy, historical fiction, and dystopia. I&#8217;ve been doing one short story a month for about the past eight months, but I&#8217;ve recently started working on a novella-length project. I&#8217;m also co-writing a fantasy/mystery book with my sister.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s so cool that you&#8217;re about to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107235"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hello-24/#post-107859" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic What&#039;s something you wish you knew when you first started writing? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 11 Dec 2021 09:07:52 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> Many, many things. I wish I&#8217;d known how to format dialogue properly, I wish I&#8217;d known that I didn&#8217;t need to follow every single piece of writing advice I&#8217;d ever seen to the letter, and most importantly, I wish I&#8217;d realized that characters are what make a story interesting. Plot does as well, but it is secondary to the emotional pull&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107196"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-something-you-wish-you-knew-when-you-first-started-writing/#post-107815" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 09 Dec 2021 22:36:42 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> Nice! My favorite Avenger is definitely Iron Man, but I also love Spider-Man 🙂</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 09 Dec 2021 08:52:34 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> Thank you!! It&#8217;s fun to write with her, we&#8217;ve been writing together for years but have never published anything together. Hopefully this project will be the one! That&#8217;s cool that you have so many siblings! I have three of them myself 🙂 If you ever need another beta reader, feel free to let me know! I&#8217;d be happy to help 😀</p>
<p>Yeah it&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107176"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/heyyy/page/2/#post-107773" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile and Ava Coulter are now friends</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 08 Dec 2021 20:46:49 -0500</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 08 Dec 2021 02:19:40 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> I have one WIP I&#8217;m working on with my sister! It&#8217;s a fantasy/mystery that takes place in a medieval-style city. The story follows two women as they uncover things about the mystery individually until their storylines intersect and they join forces to stop a big political coup from happening. We were initially inspired by old buddy cop&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107142"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/heyyy/page/2/#post-107739" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 07 Dec 2021 08:43:42 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> Ahh your WIP sounds so interesting! I like the Maze Runner too!! I&#8217;ve only read the first book but I&#8217;ve seen all the movies with my sister.</p>
<p>Yeah lyrics are pretty distracting, I can&#8217;t focus on writing at all with lyrics playing in the background XD</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 06 Dec 2021 01:21:34 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/avacoulter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@avacoulter</a> Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I&#8217;m Jodi, I mostly write fantasy these days, though I also write dystopia and historical fiction when I feel like it XD. And I&#8217;m also a big Marvel and LOTR fan!</p>
<p>Some questions:</p>
<p>What were the inspirations for your WIP (if you have one right now)?</p>
<p>Do you listen to music while writing or do you prefer silence? I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107110"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/heyyy/#post-107666" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Have you ever considered quitting writing? Why or why not? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 04 Dec 2021 18:59:33 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> Yes!! It&#8217;s so hard for me to move into writing a new book, editing is one of my favorite parts. I feel like it&#8217;s easier to see the light at the end of the tunnel when I&#8217;m almost done editing, you know? Like all the effort is about to pay off, because I&#8217;m almost done with the project, and it&#8217;ll be published soon or something&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107096"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-considered-quitting-writing-why-or-why-not/#post-107649" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Have you ever considered quitting writing? Why or why not? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 04 Dec 2021 00:05:40 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> Yes. I actually have quit writing before. I just thought I was never going to measure up as a writer on my own, since I&#8217;m always so harsh on my own work. I lose faith in it and just hate it and then delete it or abandon it entirely. That had been going on for about seven years before I tentatively stepped into writing again last&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-107092"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-considered-quitting-writing-why-or-why-not/#post-107642" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 21 Nov 2021 21:49:05 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elanor/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elanor</a> Great question! I wrangled with this for a long time in one of my stories. Here&#8217;s what I figured out from all that research and whatnot:</p>
<p>Think of the environment and how you can create environmental obstacles. In Avatar Volume 3, there are two episodes where Sokka and Zuko have to escape from a high-security Fire Nation prison surrounded&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106987"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-make-a-non-cliche-escape-scene/#post-107465" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic When is it okay to defy the government? in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 20 Nov 2021 21:27:35 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Thanks for starting this conversation! All I can say is that you guys are great and I&#8217;ve just learned so much right now reading through all your responses.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t have much to add, since I think you guys have covered everything that I would have said. I think I&#8217;ll just address the topic of Jornan and Emeric and the personal issues&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106974"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-is-it-okay-to-defy-the-government/#post-107450" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic The Wait is OVER! My Blog Is published! in the forum Publishing &#038; Platform</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Nov 2021 18:28:07 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/maryg3/' rel="nofollow ugc">@maryg3</a> Wow! Congratulations!! The design looks beautiful, I&#8217;m so happy for you!</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Legend of Zelda Fan Club in the forum Book Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Nov 2021 23:13:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> The forum ate my last reply so I&#8217;m replying again! XD<br />
I just checked my books and it looks like I have the Phantom Hourglass, Spirit Tracks, Ocarina of Time, Twilight Princess, and Wind Waker books! And I love Midna&#8217;s Lament and the Song of Time/Song of Storms. I also love the Gerudo Valley theme!</p>
<p>I hadn&#8217;t seen Spencer&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106659"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/legend-of-zelda-fan-club/#post-107011" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic When you don&#039;t like the direction of your story... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Nov 2021 19:44:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/abigail-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@abigail-m</a> Hey and welcome back! Thanks for replying! I&#8217;m so glad this is such a relatable issue, since I tend to struggle with it a lot. Especially recently, I&#8217;ve realized more and more that you should just write what needs to be written, even when you feel like you should be adding other things. Trying to add in themes just kills my writing, so&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106655"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/page/2/#post-107007" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Nov 2021 17:42:52 -0400</pubDate>

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				<pubDate>Fri, 05 Nov 2021 17:39:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> no worries! I love your Zelda fanart!</p>
<p>Once, I was Link for Halloween. I still have the whole costume, partly made by myself and partly bought online. I actually have a replica Master Sword, which is pretty cool, and the Hylian shield. Both are fairly heavy to carry around but I plan to hang them on my wall someday 🙂</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106652"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/legend-of-zelda-fan-club/#post-107003" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 03 Nov 2021 20:11:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> Oh cool!! Thanks for tagging me! I look forward to chatting with y&#8217;all haha XD</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Worldbuilding in a dystopian novel in the forum Sci-Fi</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 26 Oct 2021 19:10:43 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>That premise sounds interesting! I&#8217;m definitely leaning toward the resistance saying no to Torrent, I feel like that would make her have to come up with her own solutions, which would be interesting to read about. I&#8217;m also a big <em>Rogue One</em> fan, so&#8230;yeah. That might have something to do with my choice XD</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic The most awkward intro ever ;) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Oct 2021 20:57:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lorelei-writer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lorelei-writer</a> Ooooh that sounds great! I love the way you&#8217;ve set the two characters up to meet and help each other. Now I wanna read the whole story&#8230;thanks for sharing the description! &#x1f601;</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic When you don&#039;t like the direction of your story... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 20:03:00 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>No worries! Thank you for your input, I always appreciate hearing other people&#8217;s advice about this issue, since it is something I struggle with more often than I like. With relatively small short stories, I&#8217;m fine with restarting them, since a thousand or so words is not as big of a commitment to me as a novel is. But I&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106230"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/page/2/#post-106174" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic What&#039;s something you thought was necessary in writing, but actually wasn&#039;t? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 17:11:24 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>True, villains and antagonists don&#8217;t always need to be in a story. I&#8217;m usually writing some kind of story where they&#8217;re like, far away, so they don&#8217;t always show up in the main story (you know, like a Sauron kinda thing), so I always feel like I have to find ways to have them interact with the protagonist. But&#8230;I don&#8217;t always need&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106223"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/whats-something-you-thought-was-necessary-in-writing-but-actually-wasnt/#post-106163" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 17:01:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydia-s/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydia-s</a> so sorry for the late reply! And thank you so much for your advice, I&#8217;ll definitely keep it in mind next time I&#8217;m faced with something like this. I ended up trying to rewrite it a couple times and on about the third try, I got something I really liked! So I&#8217;ve finished that short story now &#x1f601;</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Hi, I’m a Christian Fantasy Writer! in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 16:54:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> Oh good, thanks! And I&#8217;m 21 &#x1f601;</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic The most awkward intro ever ;) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 00:27:20 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>So cool! A synopsis would be much appreciated, I enjoy hearing about other people&#8217;s works! 🙂</p>
<p>Yep, pretty much same. Ever since I thought to myself that I could write stories like the ones I was reading, I&#8217;ve been trying to tell stories XD</p>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 16 Oct 2021 00:21:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> That&#8217;s so cool! We might have the same ocarina! And Song of Storms is such a beautiful one to play. I love Song of Time too!</p>
<p>I love the inspirations for your story. The novel I&#8217;m planning to write is about a girl who has to save her country from an invading army, but this WIP is still in the very beginning stages of planning&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106184"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-im-a-christian-fantasy-writer/#post-105896" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic The most awkward intro ever ;) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Oct 2021 16:52:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lorelei-writer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lorelei-writer</a> Hellooo! Welcome! I&#8217;m Jodi, and I write a bunch of things, usually fantasy or dystopia these days depending on my mood XD</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Some questions:</p>
<p>Do you have a WIP you&#8217;re currently working on?</p>
<p>What inspired you to start writing? I&#8217;ve always loved fantasy books, which is how I ended up writing so much of it&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Anyway, nice to meet&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106163"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-most-awkward-intro-ever/#post-105752" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Oct 2021 16:46:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/trahia-the-minstrel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@trahia-the-minstrel</a> Welcome!! I&#8217;m Jodi, and I&#8217;m a huge LOTR, Marvel, ATLA, and Zelda fan too (and Mario, and a bunch of other video games&#8230;)!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m so happy to meet more people who have ocarinas (<a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/scripter-of-kingdoms/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scripter-of-kingdoms</a> I didn&#8217;t know you had one too)! I have a small collection of ocarinas and I used to perform at local markets with them XD my fav&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106162"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-im-a-christian-fantasy-writer/#post-105750" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic This is Koshka, and these are her books in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Oct 2021 22:30:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/koshka/' rel="nofollow ugc">@koshka</a> I love C.S. Lewis too! I used to have a list of poets/poetry that I liked, I&#8217;ll be sure to send some of my favorites your way if I find it again 🙂</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Oct 2021 21:26:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/melancholic-writer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@melancholic-writer</a> I majored in English in college, and I minored in history because I thought it would give me more content for stories (which it did!) so&#8230;yeah! It was challenging but definitely worth it</p>
<p>That&#8217;s cool! I definitely feel the struggle trying to find time to write haha, I am also just coming out of a writing break and I&#8217;ve been&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106058"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-2/#post-105308" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Oct 2021 17:00:23 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hello! Welcome to the Kingdom! I&#8217;m Jodi, I write a lot of things but fantasy, historical fiction, and dystopia are my go-to genres.</p>
<p>I have to tell you that I love the sound of your books!! They totally sound like something I would have stayed up waaaay too late reading when I was in middle school and had more time to read 🙂</p>
<p>I also love&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106053"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/this-is-koshka-and-these-are-her-books/#post-105303" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Greetings From Myself (And a Brief Introduction to My Works) in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Oct 2021 16:48:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elishavet-pidyon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elishavet-pidyon</a> Helloooo! Welcome to the Kingdom! My name is Jodi, I write fantasy, historical fiction, and sometimes dystopia.</p>
<p>I love the sound of your poetry, especially by the squirrel poet. Are you a fan of the Redwall series, by any chance?</p>
<p>I am also learning to play the piano! It&#8217;s slowly getting easier but also harder as I force myself&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-106052"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-myself-and-a-brief-introduction-to-my-works/#post-105302" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Oct 2021 16:42:57 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi Tasha! Welcome to the Kingdom. My name is Jodi, and I write fantasy, historical fiction, and the occasional dystopian piece. I was homeschooled pretty much my whole life and I just graduated from college this year! 🙂</p>
<p>I love fairytale retellings! What other kinds of fantasy stories do you usually write?</p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic How to know if your book should be a standalone or series? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Oct 2021 17:14:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/joy-caroline/' rel="nofollow ugc">@joy-caroline</a> Ooh good question! I am someone who always makes the mistake of turning books into series when they should probably just be standalones. I think one of the ways to tell is to take a look at the scope of the story: if it is big and covers a long period of time with a lot of important events taking place in that passage of time, it&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105912"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/how-to-know-if-your-book-should-be-a-standalone-or-series/#post-104864" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Oct 2021 16:26:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/madelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@madelyn</a> Thank you!! Honestly I think my biggest problem is turning off my inner editor, since because I listen to it, I end up adding things that I think would sound good from an editing perspective but that creatively fall flat and sound pretty boring when compared to the fun and unexpected things I&#8217;d been writing before. I&#8217;ll be sure to keep&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105909"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/#post-104861" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic When you don&#039;t like the direction of your story... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 02 Oct 2021 00:09:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> You did help! Thank you! I think the thing is that I have to probably cut some of these scenes that are bugging me&#8230;</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/faith-q/' rel="nofollow ugc">@faith-q</a> Haha yes let&#8217;s get some much-needed advice XD</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> That is a good solution! Thanks!</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/anatra23/' rel="nofollow ugc">@anatra23</a> Yes *cries* I think that&#8217;s what I have to do, cut a bunch of new stuff that I&#8217;ve written until I get back to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105873"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/#post-104805" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile started the topic When you don&#039;t like the direction of your story... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 30 Sep 2021 17:01:45 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, everyone! I wanted to ask for some advice about a problem I have with a short story. Right now, I mostly do short stories, but this has been a big problem for me with novels as well.</p>
<p>So, here&#8217;s the problem: I&#8217;ll usually start a story with a clear idea of the direction it&#8217;s taking, the feeling I want the story to have. I&#8217;ll follow that&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105843"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/when-you-dont-like-the-direction-of-your-story/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jodi Maile replied to the topic Have you ever written a story with multiple POV? in the forum Topic of the Week</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-written-a-story-with-multiple-pov/#post-104742</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Sep 2021 01:21:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/kathleenramm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kathleenramm</a> I&#8217;m working on a short story by myself right now. I&#8217;m thinking it might just be one POV, but it might require me to write two. I&#8217;ve been practicing one POV for a while now so I hope I&#8217;ll be able to accomplish it effectively XD</p>
<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/elfwing/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elfwing</a> Oh cool! That&#8217;s so interesting that you do that too! It does work really well when you need&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-105826"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/have-you-ever-written-a-story-with-multiple-pov/#post-104742" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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