Jaybird

@elishavet-pidyon

The author is Gail Carson Levine, right? (not sure I spelled that right XD). I’ve read two other books by her: The Lost Princess of Bamarre and The Two Princesses of Bamarre (I think those were the titles?? XD).

That’s true, she did a really good job taking a different approach to it!

Yesssss, go for it whenever you can!!…[Read more]

@trahia-the-minstrel

Ooh, I love your ideas! Unfortunately, I’ve already written him as an old man who asked for the son… however, it WOULD be interesting to change the child to a girl (especially if I start having issues with the prince). I would love to see Rumpel interact with a little girl. So that is a possible rewrite to consider!

Hey, I…[Read more]

@karissa-chmil

Thank you 🙂

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, yes. A skill our younger selves painfully possess. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, those are so good! What great characters.

@elishavet-pidyon

Aw, thank you! <3

@godlyfantasy12

Ooh, November sounds awesome!

Can we get this up and running again with brand new lines from characters? I still don’t really have many….but maybe we can expand this to be lines of not just dialogue but just very short bits of our books?

@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h@elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms @morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q@power [Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

So, I’m not the only one who does that!!! XD I very rarely read the ending of a book at the end of the book… Usually I spoil it for myself somewhere during the first chapter or maybe even before starting the first chapter… *facepalm* Honestly, I blame it on my writing style. I always know how my stories end and begin, so I guess…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ohhhh… you have to go to Glacier! It is the most beautiful place ever.

Yup! I remember when my family was doing our annual race to the top of somewhere in the White Mountains (NH) I got so thirsty and eventually drank from the stream that goes up. (: Then my sister came up behind me and surprised me. XD

That’s a good po…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Thx so much!

As for the middle boy I haven’t figured out everything about him, so can’t quite answer all those questions but definitely some things to think on!!

The abilities aren’t much of a spoiler when it comes to how they work.

I’ll use the youngest as an example-

His creature is the mouse type one, so he ends up havi…[Read more]

@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h @elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms@morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q @power @devastate-lasting @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @abigail-m@autumn-rebecca  @e-k-seaver @daisy-torres @gracie-j @libby @kayleigh-idea @r-m-archer @maryg3 @scoutfinch180 @writerlexi1216…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, that’s good! I’m glad to hear it was easy to navigate. That has happened to me a few times before on websites as well …

@jodi-maile

Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!

@karissa-chmil

Thank you! Btw, I’ve been reading posts on the Author Conservatory blog tour, and saw that someone named Karissa had commented. Was that you?😊

@annabelle

Thank you! And thanks for commenting, it means a lot!

@keilah-h

Thank you!

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you! I didn’t quite…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h

So to answer some questions it is in paragraph form in the book. The way it posted is pretty much how it is in the draft as of rn.

It is for the Cirque book!

Spotlight and clown are in there because it is in the Cirque book. Hope that sheds some light!

I’m not rlly sure about meters or stanzas or anything. I…[Read more]

@annabelle @elishavet-pidyon

I suppose Natalia is sort of that entire known world, but for some reason it seemed to me more like a kingdom in a wild, unknown land.

I wonder if there’s a thing on here for Antagonist development. Or maybe we should start a new one.

Uniqueness… That may turn out to be a struggle, especially as I’m not entirely…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Bonifer is worse than everybody. He’s like… the worst villain. EVER. That I’ve read about at least. There could be more evil or dark villains out there… but Bonifer is just so well-written for a villain. Andrew Peterson did a great job creating him.

@elishavet-pidyon

Ambition, bitterness, and pride… Those are pretty good traits…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @koshka Ugh, Bonifer Squoon. He’s almost worse than the other villain I hate….Wait, scratch that. He is worse.

Garten Longtreader….Well, I wasn’t so mad about him. But he is a horrible character.

@elishavet-pidyon Oh okay. I get it, I’ve done many of those myself.