@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Developing A New Story Idea! (Help? XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@kathleenramm @koshka @keilah-h @elanor @jodi-maile @scripter-of-kingdoms@morgan @elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @avacoulter @faith-q @power @devastate-lasting @not-so-secret-secret-assassin @joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @abigail-m@autumn-rebecca  @e-k-seaver @daisy-torres @gracie-j @libby @kayleigh-idea @r-m-archer @maryg3 @scoutfinch180 @writerlexi1216…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 4 months ago
Ah, that’s good! I’m glad to hear it was easy to navigate. That has happened to me a few times before on websites as well …
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!
Thank you! Btw, I’ve been reading posts on the Author Conservatory blog tour, and saw that someone named Karissa had commented. Was that you?😊
Thank you! And thanks for commenting, it means a lot!
Thank you!
Thank you! I didn’t quite…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
So to answer some questions it is in paragraph form in the book. The way it posted is pretty much how it is in the draft as of rn.
It is for the Cirque book!
Spotlight and clown are in there because it is in the Cirque book. Hope that sheds some light!
I’m not rlly sure about meters or stanzas or anything. I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I suppose Natalia is sort of that entire known world, but for some reason it seemed to me more like a kingdom in a wild, unknown land.
I wonder if there’s a thing on here for Antagonist development. Or maybe we should start a new one.
Uniqueness… That may turn out to be a struggle, especially as I’m not entirely…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 4 months ago
OK SO! I know where I’m posting this might be A BIT WEIRD BUT HEAR ME OUT!!!!
So as of rn my second book in fantasy series, (the second book is Project DM) has a looong poem in it. I have just gone back and revised the poem and when I finished I was kinda blown away ngl, and I really like it so I wanted to share it with y’all! So this is kinda a…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 4 months ago
Eeek! I’m so excited! After ages, and my website being put up on the 31st of January, it’s finally fully functional (except for the privacy policy, I’m still working on that cause I’m bad at formal language😅) .
I’m so thrilled to share this with you guys!
My website URL is Hadassah.nz !
I hope you’ll enjoy the content on it! If any of you want…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Bonifer is worse than everybody. He’s like… the worst villain. EVER. That I’ve read about at least. There could be more evil or dark villains out there… but Bonifer is just so well-written for a villain. Andrew Peterson did a great job creating him.
Ambition, bitterness, and pride… Those are pretty good traits…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @annabelle @koshka Ugh, Bonifer Squoon. He’s almost worse than the other villain I hate….Wait, scratch that. He is worse.
Garten Longtreader….Well, I wasn’t so mad about him. But he is a horrible character.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Oh okay. I get it, I’ve done many of those myself.
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Lana Blanchard replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Those are really cool things! I’ve been to the Badlands IÂ completely agree!!
Oh, mine! Hmmmm… I don’t remember if I already said this… it changes frequently, so… whatever. Anyway.
In the White Mountains (NH) there’s Mt. Washington, and there’s a trail to climb to the top called Huntington Ravine. There’s a brief section…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Just imagine. . . in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Awww, I love the sound of that. <3
Ahhh, yes, they really, really are.
*waves back* THANK YOU! (XP Thank you.)
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@trahia-the-minstrel, @elishavet-pidyon
I COMPLETELY agree with you guys about Bonifer. He’s worse than Gnag himself! He RAISED Gnag! He always makes me so angry too! I mean, he betrayed all of Aerwiar. I never forgave him after I found out.
I kind of forgot about Weaver. He was pretty bad too.
@koshka, I think that Fang’s name was Slarb. And…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Just say the name ‘Bonnifer Squoon’ and I start getting real mad.
He just makes me angry cause it was all his fault everything happened. If it weren’t for him and all the horrible lies he told Gnag and his parents, the whole war wouldn’t have happened. @elishavet-pidyon thanks for reminding me how much I dislike him! I’d actually…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon What do you mean by “internal fanfiction?”
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Lana Blanchard replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Cool! I would probably be ShadowClan… but a medicine cat… so… I do not know… XD
What is the beautiful thing you’ve ever seen?
I like Jolly Ranchers too, except the blue raspberry ones I like best. (:
I would… hmm… probably a dolphin? Or a stingray? Or a husky? Or a unicorn?
What is the most beautiful place…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for the motivation! Maybe I should write some Wingfeather fanfic for my next blog short story of the month… that’s a good idea. Yeah, if and when I write some, I’ll let all you guys know!
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Okay, I got it, and read all of it! That is so good! I’ve tried to write that scene over and over and I’ve failed every time, so that’s pretty impressive that you’re able to do that.
When I was reading the part about Artham and Kalmar unwrapping Janner’s body… I started to cry again. I’m a very emotional person xD.
I also…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, you’re right, Janner’s death really does complete the story. He is kind of like a Christ character; a person to model yourself after. Good point!
I found it! But then I clicked the link and it said I don’t have access. I typed a message in the box it gave me so I can request access. I really want to read it!!!
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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 4 months ago
Hi everyone!
I’m considering joining the Author Conservatory, and I was interested to know if any of you are in it? If so, what are you thoughts on the program? Things I should know? Pros and Cons? Is there anything you wished you’d known before you joined, but didn’t?
For me, one of the things I’m struggling with is that I have already written…[Read more]
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