Elishavet Elroi

@Freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 Any of you want to go next?

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*sniffs*

MY BABYYYYYYYYYYYYY…

I don’t think I’ll get tired of reading about him any time soon… 😉

1. Definitely! I thought the contrast between the visible and invisible blood on his hands was particularly powerful.

2. Yes. @elishavet-pidyon made a phenomenal point: the fact that Ryker believes his trembling is because of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Crosshair

One of the soldiers drew his pistol. “Give us one good reason why we should tell you our names.”

The other had his hand on his holster, ready to draw.

Next to one of them, a young woman stood, evidently trying not to attract Crosshair’s attention. The way she hung close to…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, I absolutely adore Chuck Black! From all the responses about him, I get the impression he’s popular around here 🙂 His Kingdom and Knights of Arrethrae series are sooooo amazing! I use his works as mentor texts because I love his writing voice and style. He really puts the feelings into every word, sentence, paragraph,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 All right then, here we go.

Crosshair

It was a little amusing, the way the fox thing was snarling at him like it wanted to bite his head off. Crosshair knew he could easily kick it into the wall before it even penetrated his armor.

“Hey!” one of the characters yelled, before also…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon

Sorry y’all.

Mikkel

Grey tunics, mail shirts, long swords, helmets, and shields. The taller one wearing a matching grey cloak, the other’s crimson.

Who were these fellows? Two foreign soldiers, stepped out of the castle walls?

Where was he?

movement caught his attention. Another…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon yes we are I believe

I think @koshka or @elishavet-pidyon should go next

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

November 

Everyone had stepped back when new new stranger had appeared.

Another one?!

How many people were in this place?!

Nyx seemed to agree.

”ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! MORE OF THEM?!” The fox’s ears were flicking and his eyes ticked back and forth between each person.

The one group had ex…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 who wants to go next?

@elishavet-pidyon wanna go next?

@godlyfantasy12. @elishavet-pidyon. @koshka

Mikkel

Weapon ready, blood hot, heart solid stone. A small weathered door stood at the end of this passage. Mikkel pressed himself to the wall as close to the door as he dared. He felt Riker and Ezra beside him.

Voices…young voices.

“Are there any female guards that you know of?” a girl. “If not…p…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon y’all can go next if u want

@elishavet-pidyon That’s super sad, but amazing storytelling all at the same time. I want to read your book……

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76

The Gang

”Could you tell the type of song?”

”Type? What? It’s a song, idiot, how much more do ya need to know?” 

November squinted, his face flushing; he was thankful no one else could hear his friend’s snarky replies.

Arabella placed a hand over her mouth, also paling. She shut her eyes and released…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

This is getting awesome!

The Brothers

“Singing.” Vulkasin grinned.

Nyx came back, placing his tiny self between Lyn and the building.

He turned to the Mynclaises. “Is it usual for Ocran’s gaurds to sing?”

Alyona shook her head.

He turned to the fox. “Could you tell the type of song?”

Ara…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon that would be interesting! Or instead of getting caught maybe they just get seperated, that way we don’t have a “timeline” on when we have to find her, but the pressure is still on because they’re separated due to being chased by guards or something so he doesn’t know what’s happened to her (same with everyone else who was sep…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

The Gang 

Corvina… 

The name made Ara and November’s blood run cold. They’d forgotten about her in all of the chaos, but now…they remembered. She was here too.

Looking for them.

Even Lyn went silent, her eyes getting a far-off look, and Nyx’s fur bristled.

The moment faded however, when Nyx’s ears…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.

@elishavet-pidyon

The brothers

“Let’s review what we know.”

Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.

“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]

@koshka @freedomwriter76

@elishavet-pidyon sounds good to me! As for a lot of charries, it is but ya know what it’ll be fine. We all end up going for a while without RPing anyway sometimes so I think it’ll be fine if we stay as a group (but maybe during the adventure one at point we get separated with different characters (like not with our own…[Read more]