@elishavet-pidyon
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.
Crosshair
“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love them all! Dang, you’re really good at interesting dialogue. That first one is both adorable and hilarious, and that last one is so sweet 🥰
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I tried!
Zlatan
“You would do well to leave the bite out of your voice.” the lad was gripping the hilt at his side, but he didn’t draw.
Zlatan quietly replaced his own blade. He liked this boy.
Slowly, Victor released his grip. “We need to find a place to wait out the night. I know…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
The Gang
Nyx’s hackles had immediately raised at Crosshair’s tone. His tired head lifted in a piercing gaze and his ears perked.
Viktor’s hand flew to his side but Lyn was too busy focusing on her companion to pay any mind to others around her.
Thankfully, Viktor eventually calmed the situa…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic Please Help: I need a character to fall off a roof and survive but be realistic in the forum Plotting 3 years, 9 months ago
Thank you, that’s an interesting thought. I think I shrugged it off too quickly in my story…
THank you all for your help
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen-of-alvastia I’d be a Throne Warden, cause I’m the oldest, which is kinda cool. And my brother would eventually be king….that would be weird.
And my mom was the middle child in her family! That means she’d be queen!
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
That sounds amazing!! 😮😮
Yeah, it’s my biggest writing dream. Ever. Period. I started one at one point but the symbolism was what tripped me up most…
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Annabelle replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yep, same as @elishavet-pidyon. I’m subscribed here, so I always read whatever everyone says.
So, since apparently, you’ve read the Wingfeather Saga, (at least I hope you have), who’s your favorite character?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”
Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.
“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Arabella
All eyes turned to focus on their group. Ara frowned at the attention and reached for November’s hand. She allowed a piece of her hair to fall over one eye, hoping to hide some of the stares.
Her anxieties had gotten better since their recent adventure with Lyn and Nyx, but the t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 you wanna go next?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I’m sorry y’all. For some reason I can’t seem to get anything written and sent in. Don’t wait for me if you can help it. I’ll try to jump back in as soon as possible.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.
Crosshair
“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.
Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h u on?
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter how bout y’all?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h gonna go ahead and RP my charries just watching it all XD so at least they’re doing SOMETHING 🤣
Jocelyn
“Yeah. So long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So, what’s your name?”
All of the men lowered their weapons, which made the twins a bit more at ease. But not Nyx.
Which, truth be…[Read more]
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon aww I love that moodboard! It feels really innocent and dreamy, like lying in a sunny meadow and imagining fairies in the flowers 🥰✨
@katthewriter OOH I really adore the color scheme and the lyrics, it looks so great 🤩
@dreedomwriter76 I already feel so bad for Leon even tho I don’t know much about his story D: Y’all are so…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
HEY YALL LONG TIME NO…POST?? Anyway…Ik it feels like FOREVER!! But why don’t we get this RP back up and running!! I’m real excited to interact with all the soldiers/charries!!!
It’s not really a good time for me to RP (as in my charries can’t really do much but watch the interaction…[Read more]
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Mary G started the topic How Many is too many Character!?!?!?! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey! I hope everyone is having a great summer!
I have a quick question: Can you have too many character in a novel?
So I decided to do a Carrie count because in the last year there have been a lot of uninvited but intriguing character barging in on my WIP.
I have 34 named characters!! Is that too many. Not all of them are in the same chapters…[Read more] -
Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Ok then! I’ll wait till you have something.
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