Elishavet Elroi

What if Isabel makes him tea and it tastes awful, but he drinks it anyway so she doesn’t feel bad?

@freed_and_redeemed

A happy/sweet Leon scene!!!!! I’ve been wanting to see some healthy scenes with him and his kids sooo badly! It’s such a sweet family and he loves them so much it hurts to read the not do happy scenes. XD

Ok, so thoughts….

Maybe forget for a moment the spoiler and write as if everything is normal. You can add implications…[Read more]

Finally a place to share this thought!

You know you’re a writer when a random sentence in (insert language) class strikes your fancy, so you write a short story instead of finishing your lesson.

For instance:

(.אנחנו הילדים)

I absolutely understand! In some ways fiction and KP are a get away for me, which can be a good thing or a really bad thing. God bless!

@godlyfantasy12

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! You’re baaaaack!

*regains dignity*

*curtsies*

Which I suppose posting this says I’m back too…. although that may be dangerous to assume.

Anyway, You Have A Kitty Now? I love kitties. Our two cats think they are royalty of the highest blood and therefore cannot be held accountable for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

That’s a really unique piece! I’m going to have to read it several times over. It feels like memories of childhood, but it’s not all sweet fluffy thoughts. What’s the translation for the end?

And thank you for tagging me! I’m beginning to really love your poetry.

(Please share this Marcel poem. 🙂 )

@livingwoodchronicles

It’s good to still be around. 😉

Life’s been pretty good, if a little mad. I’m in college now and get to write an psycology essay on pediatric burn recovery. Tonight. It’s due tomorrow. *Mental caos ensues*

But other than that, yes, it’s been good. God keeps us through it all.

By the way, have you read any of S. D.…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

Oi! You’re back! Hope you’re doing well!

I am also still here, although that fact may be questionable by the more active members of this little community. XD

Okay, completely unconnected, and I’ll disappear after this because I have never read KotLC, but…

If elves are vegetarian, why do they hunt deer in the Hobbit?

I mean, I am the person who has never seen the movies and despite not living under a rock still clings to a black haired, green eyed Legolas. I have also only read two stories from the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

It’s definitely been a while! A lot of things have conspired to keep me off KP. (Mainly College and Bible Quizzing) I’m still here though. How have you been?

Thank you, I await thy assessment in eagerness.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @sunny421 @godlyfantasy12 @Idon’tknowwho @anyone

So I’ve finally managed to write the rough draft for the opening scene of book one of project Heirs of Ashes. I desperately need thoughts and critiques on it, and ideas for the plot. Really just anything will probably help.

For those who don’t know, HoA is an ad…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m dumbfounded. This story is getting heartwrenching. (Which is, I suppose the equivalent of saying, “good job!” XD)

I do find it interesting how you are contrasting two different alcoholics. It foreshadows trouble if Leon doesn’t find healing and repentance. •_•

Let’s see….

Trippin

Silence reigned over the shore. The waves boke with muted care upon the rocks, and the wind watched them flee away listlessly. Even the birds in the trees on the bluff above only dared to whisper. But then again, the best gossip is shared under one’s breath.

The best gossip, like a new addition of matchwood to the…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, he’s really fascinating! I enjoy how his backstory is intertwined with his present.

Does his scarring play a half symbolic role? For instance, I also have a character who bears intense burn scars from an incident when he was a child. (Although they’re on his hands, feet, and neck [the burns on his face were light and did not scar])…[Read more]

@rae

Hi! (I’m Elishavet [obviously] and I don’t remember if I’ve met or otherwise greeted you because my brain just will not let me, so welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! It’s an honor to meet you, hopefully for the first time.)

I adore how unique your world is, even as you employ tropes and tools used elsewhere. It’s obviously your creation, and I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

O.O

That was so horrid and so sweet. I feel sorry for all those characters. So many emotions….

BUT ISABEL IS ADORABLE AND HEART WRENCHING. War is never so dark as when its affect is seen in children. But it’s never so full of hope as when it’s seen through their eyes.

Also, the line where Leon wondered if she’d recognize him…[Read more]

WIPs!!! Huzzah!!

Thanks for tagging me, @freedomwriter76 ! I don’t know how much I’ll be on, considering this is the last half of the FALL 1 semester at the college I’m at, but I’ll certainly be interested in what is going on here.

Ah, yes, I think I’ll spy on this site and maybe join in from the shadows from time to time.

Also,

Hi @joy-calle…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Leon seeking Riker is much more powerful – even if he doesn’t succeed. He might not know where exactly to look, but Leon looking for Riker shows his heart. I like it.

Also, another thing I’ve been meaning to mention to you: I was reading an autobiography that made me think of you. It was by Benjamin Urshan, a minister born in…[Read more]