Elanor

@kathleenramm

I will have to check ATLA out, my best friend has nothing but good to say about it. I think I’ll enjoy them.

@kathleenramm

yes, those are the best! I am attempting to write one of those charries right now… not sure I’m succeeding XD meh, whatever I’ll try anyways

Yes, they’re historical fiction, and I totally liked them. Be prepared for tears at certain points. They are Young Adult, and although they’re not graphic in war descriptions, if you don’t…[Read more]

@abigail-m

sorry forgot to tag you on the response XD

@kathleenramm

Ah ok, I figured. Sorry, I am TERRIBLE with figuring out names for charries. It’s like me trying to use the pain scale to tell the doctor how bad my pain is XD

Doctor: “So, your pain is, what, on a scale from 1 to 10?”

me: “Uhhh… five?” *silently “this is why I use Voltaren and don’t tell people. Stupid pain scale.” XD

Thanks! Move went well!

Thank you, I’d like to try. I’m actually going through my 1st draft and realizing “oh my word! this character is waaaay too elusive!” like, she’s orphaned, yes, but her adopted family is sort of ‘there’ and not there. Like, her cousins are mentioned, but they never come into the story! XD that annoyed me XD so I have added…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

uhhh wow!!! I love it! so good

sorry I’m late on commenting.

I really like it! The flow is fitting, in my opinion; like, how I imagine the queen from how you describe is; lost, suspicious, somewhat regretful, bitter, and mind wandering in the past, so her thoughts are short, blunt, to the point, and not too many details added…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

my favorite backstory… oooof that’s hard

XD

well, it would have to be…

Lord Rodolpho Greco from The River of Time series; he’s a traitor for most of the series, and you’re never sure if he’ll turn on the MC because he’s so elusive and never reveals what he’s thinking, but has the skills and the power, and the elusive…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I know I’m late, I’m so sorry! Life became a whirlwind of activity, and I haven’t been able to get on here until now.

One way you can have the girls meet Lyn is to have them wake up to her examining them. From there, they can panic, thinking she’s going to hurt them, and you can have a lovely scene of confusion. 😉 Or they could…[Read more]

I’m so sorry I’ve missed all these sprints! Between working, 4H, and volunteering, I haven’t had much time to be on here. 🙁 Hope they went well for you all! <333

@joy-caroline

Agh, I’m late! Life got crazy busy. 🙁

If you’d like/have the time to make another collage, you could do one for one of the books I’m co-writing! It’s titled Falling. Some of the themes are dragons, black snake/scales, forests, traitors, comas/sickness/near death, and blacksmiths. It’s in a tribal/Viking fantasy-type world. :D…[Read more]

@faith-q

Super late to this thread (life has become a whirlwind of activity…), but honestly, I do not have much experience with children’s POVs. The youngest character’s POV I’ve ever written was a… *thinks for a moment…or two* Well, a fourteen-year-old, so she’s not much of a child. I hope the others could help though! 😀 <333

@typewriter77

Oh, fun! That sounds like a very smart job. 🙂

Yes, Susan! 🙁 I think (desperately hope) that she does end up in Narnia… (Aslan did say “Once a king or queen of Narnia, always a king or queen”) I think she was just trying to be grown-up… That could just be my older sister bias coming through though… 😛

Well, I am grateful…[Read more]

@faith-q

Of course:) Thank you also!:D

@faith-q

Hi Faith! I’d love to join (I need some accountability for a project too:)

@godlyfantasy12

i would say first of all

i LOVE this kind of fantasy!! EEE

also, I would use observation of the people around them

like, to a certain extent observing differences.

also, them being overwhelmed and totally (not) FREAKING OUT would not be unrealistic. I mean, I just did the same to my MC. Well, she was unconscious and it was a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!

YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).

Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I’m not sure what category Gollum falls under? But he’s by far my favourite villain