Elanor

@elanor

Beautiful!

@elanor

I love it so much! <3

@elanor

Beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

Thank you!! 😊

It’s crazy that I just happened to write a poem on war and peace as well.

How interesting!! 😅

I like yours a lot as well!

Beautiful, @elanor!

Now that I think about it, I’m really stuck on the edits so I might as well share what I’ve got here and see if you guys can’t help me get unstuck. I’ve made a few small changes that you may notice, but the main thing that I’m struggling with is settling on an ending.

I’ve written several endings that all have slight variations in words and…[Read more]

Thanks, @elanor ! 😀

You grasped the concept of my poem perfectly! I’m glad you enjoyed it and found it relatable. 🙂 Because it’s very personal, I really wasn’t sure if anyone would be interested in it. I’m glad I decided to share it!

I’m still working on those last lines. I’m torn between fleshing them out and changing them a bit to better…[Read more]

Awh, thanks @acancello, thanks @elanor!

God is so wonderful! 🙃 One of my big favorite sections at work got permanently assigned to another person and I was reassigned to another section with seemingly less responsibility where, supposedly, I can learn more. My mind was emotional about it most of the day, especially since most of my work was still…[Read more]

@elanor 🤗🤗 So many times I have wished someone was there in my pain, knowing my struggle, or just there. Awake in the middle of the night when I have a heartache or pains that meds can’t kick in fast enough to ease. Someone to pray over me. Someone to remind me of Jesus’ words.
Then the Lord often pops a song or Scripture in my head about Him…[Read more]

@Elanor, that’s beautiful!

Here’s one I wrote a bit ago inspired by a Bible Study on Ephesians and stepping forward in faith through an open door.

Now pursuing a dream once set.
Sounds of victory over regret
Still echo in my head.
Triumphant.
Triumphant.
Least of all the saints, onward
Serving most of all my Lord
Still forward even when I’m…

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Nice poem, @acancello! And I like yours, @mineralizedwritings, and the Masked and Victory poems, @elanor. 🙂

I haven’t written any lately, I’ve been so busy with work. Maybe I’ll write one this weekend.

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks! <3

@elanor

Thanks! I’m glad you like it! Yeah, I get that. This poem was my entire mood I think… last winter? Maybe it was the one before that.

@elanor

That is amazing!

@elanor @overcomer @janellebelovedpig @starshiness

Those are great! Here is one of mine I found, I wrote it for some of my best friends who were leaving the neighborhood a few years ago.  Its dosent really rhyme, but the words flow great together!

The neighborhood By- Allison C

Everything you said, everything you did

Changed the ne…[Read more]

That’s fun, @elanor! 🙂

This is my most recent poem. Most of my poetry is brief in length. Usually, I get out an idea or a feeling and then stop.

Forgottenings

Sediments of nostalgia shape a place:

Like icing on a cake, wrinkles in a face

Aging, changing, but ever the same feelings,

Nameless emotions, memories stirring

Like ghosts,…[Read more]

@Elanor that’s awesome!

@elanor

That is beautiful!