Ava Coulter

A few other notes because I apparently can’t keep them all in one post

It has occurred to me that no war was mentioned, and that I assumed there was a war because Ember’s brother was in the army and Ember’s family kept a bunch of weapons around. So, disregard my comments if there is no war…

Also, your sword fighting scene was great! I was act…[Read more]

Hi @nanisnook! I finished reading your chapters and wrote up some of my thoughts:

I really liked your chapters. Ember is a likable main character and her brother is also likable! I did feel a bit like the chapters went by pretty quickly with a lot of action (which was nicely done, by the way!) but not quite as many internal moments to pause and…[Read more]

@typewriter77 Yay! Another Redwall fan! I’d also love to get my hands on their recipes…

@nanisnook

Well, I’ve gotta jump out here now. I wrote 832 words and my final line is:

She shifted her feet and stared at the ground.

THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing with me, girl!!!!! <33

@nanisnook

Yup, but probably just for a couple more minutes. 🙂

@daisy-torres

WOOHOOO!!!!! WAY TO GO DAISY!!!! Awesome word count!!! <33

@nanisnook

Okey-dokey!!!! 😉

@typewriter77

It kind of depends on your characters, I think. A couple of the themes I’d be interested to see in a detective short story would be loving enemies, and trust. I feel like there are some unique ways those themes could be explored in a short story.

@daisy-torres

Yup, I’m actually having a hard time to get myself to write anything, so I’ll probably be here a while. 😉

@nanisnook

Yup!! I’ll join at :30!!!

@morgan

That’s true:)
Oh yes, I definitely! Animals and nature are my favorites too, (I mean, I do enjoy abstract and planned scenes, but animals are at the top of the list!) Aww, you have chickens? That’s awesome! That’s one of them in your Profile Portrait, right? I agree, they are amazing to photograph:)

@faith-q

Hi Faith! Sorry, I’m so late in welcoming you to Kingdom Pen, but Welcome!! 😀 *High fives for homeschoolers and chocolate!* Wow, seven siblings? Never really a chance to get bored then huh? I have two, and I never really get the chance, (boredom has strangely become a privilege of sorts for me XD ). But I think that that is spectacular…[Read more]

@relia,

Aw, I’m sorry (and I totally get it)! *pats your back and hands you chocolate and promises it’ll be ok*

@relia

XD I love your introduction! As I read it, I was thinking ‘I like this person already’! Loved the Gollum voice too, (it was absolutely hilarious XD ).
I’m Abigail by the way and if you don’t mind my stealing your awesome idea for introducing one’s self… also get ready for this XD I guess I’m a…[Read more]

@elizabeth

Hi Elizabeth!! I see I’m pretty late welcoming you, (sorry about this), but anyway Welcome to Kingdom Pen! Your genres are completely excellent and *high fives* another C.S. Lewis fan! Narnia is the greatest:) Have you read any of his other works?
That’s awesome that you’re writing a short story set in the Great Depression:D I love…[Read more]