Tristan S.

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀

@elfwing

Aww, so glad you liked it! Smaug… Such a beautiful character… *sighs happily* XD

@akbaer

Oh, awesome! It’s been a while since I’ve read them, too, actually.

Woohoo! Another pineapple pizza person! I love it too.

Ah, yes, griffins are very cool.

*gasps* You’re a Jane Austen fan as well??? I’ve read Emma too! I’ve read four of her novels, actually, and my favorite is Persuasion, hands down! Even Pride and Prejudice has to ta…[Read more]

@keilah-h thank you!! Hopefully I’ll get them published before I’m an old lady 🙄

Oh! I liked all of them and I figured that you were referring to your work in general 🙂 sorry I can be confusing 😂

@akbaer

Your WIP sounds very COOL!! Have you read any books or seen any movies set in WW2?

Gollum is a very entertaining character! Wow!!XD I’ve only known two other people who could do an impersonation of Gollum’s voice!

IKR! When you watch too many you start to think about people and things very differently! Lol! But I think it’s a good th…[Read more]

@precious-y

thanks! And here’s more!

Kaunon stared in horror as Alinna was flung down into the water. He was now surrounded by dragons; Death Rams, but these were average size, even if they were as nasty as their alpha.

Kaunon tried to get to Alinna, but every time he reached the dragon taunting her it would snarl and throw her to a…

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@precious-y Thank you! My story is about a villain who has a conscience, so it’s been quite interesting to write.

@lydia-s

Yeah, you definitely should! It’s a great read!

Rafael is VERY well written!!

Ooo! I’ll have to check those out! I love the characters that make you laugh out loud, cheer on, cry, wring your hands,  and ask yourself, “WHY can’t I go and become a fictional character and live in this book and be a part of it all!!”😩 LOL!

See ya arou…[Read more]

@precious-y thank you so much!! I’ll post the rest of that one tomorrow if you’d like to read it! 🙂

@zatara

*high fives fellow pineapple on pizza lover*

Hi, I’m Lily!  Welcome to the K. P forum!  I hope you enjoy your time here!

Ah, I haven’t done a ton of superhero movies; except Big Hero Six and Unbreakable.

Wait!  There’s a haunted hotel in Yosemite?!  What was it like?

Ah, well that’s better than I can do.  I’ve never quite mastered the knitting needles (or the crochet hook *lol*).

I’ve read Katherine Applegate!  I haven’t tried Endling yet (The One and Only Ivan, and Wishtree are thus far my favorites.)

Cool!  I read the Wingfeather saga awhile back; who’s your favorite character?

Currently, I’m reading th…[Read more]

@keilah-h ah ok! I figured. Yeah, it’s so fun to make up peoples and species… imagination is the limit for the most part. And that would be cool to do!

this may or may not interest you…. but the Serpent People in my story are (very loosely) inspired by the description of giants given by the Native American tribes. it’s a scary thing to look…[Read more]

@lydia-s oooo gooesbumps!! Dragon!! that word…it just ‘instills terror in the hearts of men’ (to quote Smaug XD)

@akbaer sorry the forum ate my post again lol

I like peppermint too! we had a wild kind all over the place where I used to live, so I’d pick it and use it for tea.

Well, good to meet ya! see you around! 🙂

@keilah-h

Awesome topic!!! Here’s a pretty decent one from my fantasy WIP. It needs punctuational edits though…

The clearing was silent. Not even a ryip’s chirp broke the stillness. The long grass was smashed and flattened, the brush along the edge of the trees looked like it had been trampled, and in many places, the sod had been ripped up i…

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@faith-q

Ah, yes, I understand. Honestly, I don’t really use maps. The places in my worlds pop into existence as I need them. It’s probably not the best way to make geological decisions, but it’s what I’ve done so far. 😉 I’m totally going to check out that website @daisy-torres mentioned though… it sounds awesome!!!

@e-k-seaver

Agh, this is such a tempting offer! Unfortunately, my plate is kinda full right now, so I don’t think I’d be able to get it done by the deadline. 🙁  I hope you get the feedback you’d like! Congrats on finishing a novel!

And, @gracie-j, thanks for tagging me!

@nova21

lol I may or may not feel very similarly about some of my characters… 😉

@nova21

I’m late (this is a theme in my commenting life rn… *facepalm*), but here are a couple of my MCs’ first lines. As a side note, BRILLIANT idea.

These two say their first three lines in the same scene and to each other. First, there’s Trevor, a moody, brooding bully (cinnamon roll type guy, though he doesn’t know it at the moment). Then,…[Read more]