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Kathleen replied to the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
That’s really cool how it started off as a world you wanted to escape to. It kinda makes me want to do the same.
I feel like it would be really fun, but also could be really cathartic and make an interesting story with all the freedom for imagination.
How long ago did you start making the stories?
With each…[Read more]
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Anatra replied to the topic reunite/first kiss in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
This was interesting. I loved it. Well written, I had a good idea of the scene and the atmosphere, and even while knowing not much abt your characters, I had a good idea of their personalities. One thing that I think would be helpful here would be (like scoutfinch suggested) a dip into emotion regarding Kaunon. Maybe show a bit more of…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
@kathleenramm This is actually the sequel of a sequel of a spinoff for my original idea for Thirteen Ways, ha… It started out with me wanting to make a world where I could escape to, and gradually I just added on, and on, and on… And now, thankfully, I’ve run out of ideas for it.
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Kathleen replied to the topic The Art of Deception BOOK TRAILER!!! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 8 months ago
So cool! This really made me want to read the book.
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Kathleen replied to the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
That sounds really interesting! The world where anyone could be insane is so cool and works so well with the MC’s desire for family. It sets up a really clear desire vs fear.
Where did you get the idea for Spirals?
I really love these kind of simple yet really intriguing premises. I tend to overcomplicate things in…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic No Need To Open This Topic in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
@abigail-m I read it and enjoyed it! @devastate-lasting totally summed it up well, and no I would’ve have the heart to get rid of any of them
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Elfwing replied to the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
@kathleenramm intriguing!!
My plot stake? in my fantasy it’s these:
Stake 1: If they fail the world is destroyed by giant dragons.
Stake 2. If they fail they die in painful ways and goblins take over what is left of said demolished world.
my sci-fi novel…
1: If they fail to keep away from the lab that screwed up their genetics and made them…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic beta readers needed! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 years, 8 months ago
@nanisnook ok sounds good!! Yes, I am indeed! There isn’t really a deadline for finishing it as of right now. Also, I would suggest just looking up the definition of beta reader because I’m terrible at explaining it XD
So @keilah-h @nanisnook just email roseoakauthor at gmail dot com and I will get you on there in a few days. Sorry for not…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Top Ten Things never to do… in the forum Plotting 4 years, 8 months ago
@keilah-h fun!! XD
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Elfwing replied to the topic Top Ten Things never to do… in the forum Plotting 4 years, 8 months ago
@lydia-s thanks!! it was fun to do 😉
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Lin replied to the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
@kathleenramm I’m gonna use the current arc of Thirteen Ways since the stakes are the clearest. Basic premise: they need to gather ingredients for a spell to vanquish a demon. If they don’t, then some friends and family are lost forever to the demon.
In order to collect the ingredients, they must defeat the guardians of some of the ingredients.…[Read more]
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Kathleen started the topic What are the 2 (or 3) biggest stakes in your story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 8 months ago
What’s the 2 biggest stakes in your story?
So I’m going to be using the story I’m writing with my siblings, because my solo novel that I’m currently working on is still a baby.The MC Bennet’s main goal in the beginning of the novel is to get enough money so he no longer has to steal for a living.
In the beginning, the two biggest stakes if he…[Read more]
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imwritehere1920 replied to the topic Good morning, afternoon, or evening in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
Iiik! Sorry for being so late *sheepish grin*
My sister read Crenshaw awhile back and mentioned it to me! It sounds interesting.
I’d say my favorite book is…. *stares at all the books I love*…. I’ll go with Walk Two Moons! (…for now 😉 )
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Mary G replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 4 years, 8 months ago
AWESOME!!👏👏👏
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Mary G replied to the topic Advice for starting a Blog/Porfolio in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
Ooo!! Thank you! I definitely will incorporate some of the things you mentioned into my website! I really like the idea of character quizzes!
Thanks so much! And I will certainly let you know when I launch it!
Also is there anything, in particular, you would like to see on my website that isn’t on others? Or any specific posts you’d…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 4 years, 8 months ago
Oooo, I love Keziah already!!! I guess one thing about her that would make people (yours truly especially… 😛 ) LOVE her is to make her tug at your readers’ heartstrings and make her relatable. Make her a mirror in which, perhaps, from time to time, they see someone who is all too familiar. (The desire for revenge, brooding, and…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Advice for starting a Blog/Porfolio in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
Oooo, CONGRATS!!! How exciting! XD
I do not have a blog at the moment, but from a reader’s perspective, I know my favorite articles are ones about the writer’s (or other writers’)Â book(s), whether that be memes, behind-the-scenes peeks, extra scenes, cover reveals, etc. I especially love fun stuff about the book (Covers, memes,…[Read more]
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Mary G replied to the topic Writing a conflicted character while getting readers to root for her? in the forum Characters 4 years, 8 months ago
Oh, phew! I’m glad it was helpful! You are very welcome! My Pleasure!
Yes, definitely read The Hidding place!
I hope that link about forgiveness has something useful in it. If not, there’s  lots of other posts like that on that blog that touch deeply into the psychology side of writing. I read stuff on there all the time.:)
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 8 months ago
Ah, Danek… I could likely rant for hours about him, poor fellow. He’s a villain… of sorts. (It’s hard to explain without spoiling books 1 and 2.) But anyway, basically, he just wants someone to love him, but, unfortunately, it seems fairly impossible. His mother is dead; his father was emotionally crippled by her death and isn’t a…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Top Ten Things never to do… in the forum Plotting 4 years, 8 months ago
lol This is awesome! XD
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