TheLobsterLover

@loopylin

You’re splitting up the twins?! *Horrified gasp*

Although, I can’t really say anything here. That is a huge plot point for my first book.

@lightoverdarkness6

That sounds wild. XD

@freedomwriter76

Would you mind/like it if Wilkins and Dáithí run into one/a group of your charies?

I was thinking maybe Ezekiel or Fin’s group, if it wasn’t a problem (although the group is pretty large, so Ezekiel may be better?).

@arien

Why did I start writing? Let me think…I don’t know. I grew up in and around books, and I guess it just naturally transferred to writing them. My siblings and I made up stories and histories for our made up play world’s, and we always intended to write them down.

Why am I still writing? I love words; how they work, how they change, and…[Read more]

@orielle21

Fun story! I liked your Bensnickle (Or however his name is spelled). Writing wise there aren’t very many things I’d tweak.

But um, do you want critique on the history side of things?

Wilkins

A headache. He sat up and rubbed his eyes, waiting for the pain to subside.

The room around him looked long deserted. Half a musty tapestry dangled from the wall, it’s other half lying forlorn on the stone floor. He shivered and wrapped his arms around his knees. Where am I? 

A castle. The shivers up his spine muntiplied down his arms,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Um wow. I can definitely see the favorite. XD

I found one new character song over Christmas break. For Daithí. (‘Justice Calls’ from Jonah by Sight and Sound.)

And a few instrumentals, but do those count?

@godlyfantasy12

Arabella has Auld Lang Syne? Is that the real song?

*Slowly faints*

Daithí MacLassair: about 18-19 years old, 6′ but lightly built. A red fox in the book, Daithí has Flame red hair that comes down partially over his ears but not in his light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less. Foxish features. He’s the nephew of a Lasairin Clansman, and has devoted his life, and death, to the cause as a spy and assassin. H…[Read more]

Wilkins OLaith: about 16 years old. Is a gray fox in the book, a boy here. About 5’6″, and of a slight but strong build. Has tousled grayish-brownish-blonde hair cut a bit raggedly but shorter than Daithí’s. Dark eyebrows and lashes make his misty gray eyes stand out all the more. He’s a resistance fighter, yet with a gentle voice and a courteous…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Bwahaha!!!

Actually, there isn’t much to worry about when it comes to Wilkins… Daithí may be another problem, but the two both need help, er, development.

Awww, no body better hurt those poor darlings!

@godlyfantasy12

I hope I got what November would say right…

The Twins

Run? The very idea! Vulkasin crossed his arms, face solemn.

Zlatan stepped back slightly to think. He ran one hand down the back of his neck, winced. “Then v’at would happen to you?”

“You…you don’t understand.” Novembré frowned and tugged at his curls. “I’m……[Read more]

@sarafini

I last mention I could find of her was on page 231, but then I don’t know where she went or with what group.

I was also skim reading so may have missed her.

@lightoverdarkness6
Congratulations on writing 1000 words! 🎉

Interesting story, but I must admit that I don’t read many books with abusive situations in them though (Unless you qualify knights/cowboys/spacemen attempting to kill/steal each other’s loot as abusive 😋).

As a tactical guy though, there is something I would like to point out.…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AHHHH!!! You’re back!

I can’t wait to read more about Fin, and all those other charies!

And…

I may need to add in a character in desperate need of development. You see, I wasn’t going to worry too much about him because he wasn’t in the first book. But now that’s changed (mad author laugh) and I need to figure him out. So, I…[Read more]

@sarafini Just so you know, Hunter is a dragon/human hybrid creature.

He looks human in all respects, except he has a teal, scaly tail, and wings. His brother Echo and sister Omega were with him several minutes ago, but they might’ve left….?

Hunter

A girl came up to him. “My name is Jasmine and I just moved here. I’m 14 and in 9th g…[Read more]

@arien I don’t know why I write overall. Most stuff I write is fanfiction, and I just write that because I love exploring ideas I have about characters I like…….

My Rexy series was inspired by the fact that I have autism, and that I hate it when people call it a “disability.” Like, there is nothing that stops me from living a normal-ish life.…[Read more]

@orielle21 No, I’ve never read that! What’s it about?

@whalekeeper Good idea, let’s talk more about KOTLC!

I like the series, but being a science person, I wasn’t a huge fan of how she doesn’t explain the natural laws of the world. Like okay, I get that the theory of relativity is way off in the KOTLC universe, but what theory do they have in place to explain its [real] effects?

Or the periodic…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 LOL yeah. Nyx, you’re hilarious.

poor Crosshair though…….

@sarafini is your charrie talking to one of mine? Or someone else’s? Just so I can figure out what to reply.