Erica

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Ezra reminds me of a friend I had when I was younger. Yeah, him and Eva… <3

@lightoverdarkness6

When I was 6, I gave my neighbors Saint Bernard a bath, and he ate the soap😂😬🤫.

That’s hilarious! 😀

@felicity

Oh I just saw that you replied😅🤦🏻‍♀️.

You’re so welcome! I Hope you like it😁.

Yes, Golden Retrievers are great dogs. One of our neighbors has one, and he runs around the neighborhood all the time. He’s like our dog because he stops at our house all the time😂. That’s another reason we haven’t gotten a dog. My dad jokes all the time ab…[Read more]

@felicity @freedomwriter76

Oh yeah! I love Ezra! He’s so sweet to Eva 🥲🥰.

@felicity

Ok! I’ll be waiting (no pressure lol)

Can’t wait to read it though!

And yeah, I totally thought you meant you were going to face us, the giants 🤣

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Don’t forget about Ezra!! I really like his mood board. Yeah, freedomwriter76, how do you make such REAL characters?!

@mineralizedwritings

You made me laugh… no, you guys aren’t the giants…it’s my own fears and insecurities. 😀 Alright, I hereby resolve:

On Monday, November 28, I will start a topic for the first part/chapter of Overcome for all your thoughts and critiques.

Thanks girl! @starofthrnorth you too!  You’re helping me to expand my horizons!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yesss, girl!! Any of your charries deserves to be fan girled over😂😊❤️!! Your so good at creating meaningful characters. But especially Riker😊❤️. And Leo❤️❤️.

@Felicity

yeah! We’d love to see your writing! Lol, we aren’t scary giants then are we? 🤣

I have never had a bad experience sharing writing here!

@starofthenorth

I’ve got good news and bad news…which do you want first? JK! 🙂

This was fun to read but like mineralizedwritings said, I don’t have full context so do what is best for the direction you are taking your book and the personalities of your characters! 🙂

1. I don’t think Briana comes across as a feminist, but more like a tomboy…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Ooh! Interesting.

Ok it’s a bit hard to get a full feel for it, I’ll do my best to provide some feedback anyways! 😀

It seems really unhealthy (Ig that’s what your going for, nothing wrong with portraying that)

I would say an unhealthy dynamic gets a bit more complicated when you add romance, I saw the couple hints in there…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Aww, thanks!! <3 🙂 Amen, sister, he is faithful!!!!

Mmm, without Hobby Lobby… I cannot imagine a world like that XD

Ooooofda, braces are no fun! How much longer do you have to have them on?

@arien

It really is a good book! It’s one of the few books that my dad likes, and he’s not a reader. The intricacy of the plot is sooo well done; it’s just one of those super complicated storylines that keep you hooked! You really should write an article!

I ordered The Eagle of the Ninth from the library the other day, so I’ll let you know w…[Read more]

@arien

Ooh, what’s your WIP about? That’s great that you discuss adoption, I think there need to be more books about that.

Lets see if I can do this without too many spoilers… 😂

Ok so Lesli (18) and Tauren (16) live in the mining district of the west hills bunkers, one of many scattered over the country after a devastating civil war about 160…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes! Eowyn struggles with depression and fear, like you said, and she’s not a feminist either.

I know! Faramir’s the one who stands up to Eowyn and tells her to stop trying to die in battle. He’s the one who really heals Eowyn. And the part where Eowyn finally accepts everything and agrees to marry Faramir . . . gives me…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

You play cello! 🙂 Wow, good for you!! I’ve heard it’s pretty hard, but it sounds super beautiful. Organs are so solemn and I have great reverence for them. And bagpipes, they are really fun to listen to!

That’s so neat that you’re Scottish!!

@theloonyone

Oh ok! I totally get that. Italicizing in KP is a pain. I went back and italicized my whole thing here only for KP to not save the edit 🤦‍♀️. I was thoroughly dissapionted and it didn’t let me try again, so my second chapter doesn’t read the best.

@madelyn

Yes, The Count of Monte Cristo is good! Sometime I want to write an article or something about how the quest for revenge is different in The Count and The Lantern Bearers by Rosemary Sutcliff. (You should read it! It’s the third in the Roman Britain Trilogy: The Eagle of the Ninth, The Silver Branch, and The Lantern Bearers.)

It’s tech…[Read more]