Erica

@booksandbeakers

Welcome! I’m a newbie here myself so I have not yet established a set of questions to ask. I will start with you!!

Also, I love historical fiction. That’s what I mostly write. I was also homeschooled. *fist bump*

1) Do you play any instruments?
2) What is your favorite bird?
3) What time period in history do you like wri…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12

Tauren and Lesli

“Oh!” Lesli startles, looking down at Tauren on the floor. “Tauren…?”

She kneels down on the floor beside him, lifting his head off the floor.

“W-w-what h-happened?!” Matthew exclaims, eyes wide open.

“Oh my goodness, is he okay?!” Lyla rushes forward and kneels next to Lesl…[Read more]

@koshka

But, do you want critique on the history side of things?

Sure!
FYI I got my info from The Battle for Christmas by Stephen Nissenbaum, in particular pages 99-101.

@keilah-h

Yeah, it’s fun isn’t it? We’ve all gotta start somewhere, and legos/stuffies isn’t a bad place!

@whalekeeper

Thank you!!

@booksandkeepers

Thanks! That scene was one of my favorite to write, and I really felt like it was coming from the heart (I hope you get what I mean, that sounds cringy lol).

@felicity

Thanks for the feedback! It’s hard for me to imagine what you guys remember. He’s showed up a couple of times, but hasn’t had any real…[Read more]

@keilah-h

My sister did the IEW course and it scared me! I took one for creative writing which was a lot better and than two different Literature ones which were so enjoyable. 😀

@koshka

That sounds wild. XD

Oh, it was XD! It was actually kind of fun, once I got the hang of driving away from the doggies. XD

@loopylin

A bulldog? Lol, that sounds like an interesting story

Yes! A huge american bulldog. (Or maybe it was a pit bull.) Tbh, it was kinda fun. At one point, I had that huge dog running after me, and then there were THREE OTHER little dogs chasing me!! As long as the four wheeler is faster than the dogs, I’m okay XD.

@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings

Okay, y’all! After washing a huge amount of dishes and being chased by a huge bulldog on my fourwheeler while taking some warm gloves to my dad and little brother (XD) I can finally RP!!

Matthew

Paxton glanced over at Luna, who Lyla was talking to, as if for permission to speak. She nodded.

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@freedomwriter76

Yeah! I love my pair already! XD Ooh, cool! A phone and character workbook are both really cool! 😀

Lol, yeah, they sound cool! Yeah, I was so excited.

Riker’s wife’s name is Iris, yes! But don’t change the name! Plenty of us here on KP have characters that have the same name! 🙂

Okay! Thank you!! 😀

You are sooo welcome! 😀 I know,…

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@freedomwriter76

Ooh, cool! Glad to hear you had a great Christmas!!! I got clothes, mostly, which are always appreciated, and notebooks and pencils and the black combat boots I wanted!!! 😀 😉

Awesome!! Ooh, combat boots are cool! I got my first phone!! And a character workbook!

They do look pretty good…especially the guys…XD

XDXD

I’m glad they…

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@arien

You’re welcome! 🤣🤣

@booksandbeakers

😀 Thanks! Yeah Polish food is smaczny (tasty)!!!

Recently I tried a new recipe called wuzetka (east and west cake). It’s a chocolate cake with whipped cream in the middle. yum….we ate it on Christmas. 🙂

@sarafini

I still hate some kinds of writing, like essays.

@sarafini

If you want to write an autobiography but don’t want to right now, you could keep a journal or diary of important events as they happen, and then use it later on to write your book.

(That’s what I’m planning on doing one day when I’m an old grandma. 😀 )

@booksandbeakers

Ooh… Niagara Falls. And Poland sounds exciting. My fave food, the pierogie, is from there.

Yes! Niagra Falls was amazing!

Hey, you like Polish food too?! *high five* Pierogies are great! I’m part Polish and I love them!!! 😀

Yeah, my curisve can be… less than legible sometimes 🙂

Mine can be too. I’ve created my own style of cur…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I think it may be…? But it got stuck…maybe a Polish friend of his parents helped influence his name or something…? 😉 Thinking out loud here. XD

Yeah, that’s sounds good. I mean, Germany and Poland border each other so it’s fair to make some overlapping. 😀

@booksandbeakers

Yes, I will try and critique your novel after I come back from traveling.

No rush! Thanks! Enjoy your trip!

@freedomwriter76 writes about WW2 as well! I have plans for a book set during WW2 in Poland, but I haven’t developed it very much so it’s just an idea.

 None… just Puerto Rico. But I have a dream to go to Africa.

Nice! I’…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Um…yeah, CLIFFHANGER!

The absolute best cliffhanger that makes me want to yell, “WHO IS IT?”

I have a guess. But I won’t say. 😉

So, overall, really great writing!!!

I just had one question, which I meant to ask after I read this part on the second to last section you posted:

“Bobby.” A familiar voice comes from the fig…

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