Smiley

@grcr

And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂

I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!

@grcr @acancello @trailblazer

Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!

@grcr

Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!

I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

You guys are so tuning into my vibes right now 😍😎

I’m so glad :’)

That’s what introverts really are. Just various bottled condiments…

Lol oh I love that XD It’s perfect 🤭

@freedomwriter76

Ooooh I love them!!!! 😍😍😍😍

But NOOOOOO LEONNNNNN 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Y’ALL!!!! I’ve got 14 more chapters to edit…then I’ll be done with the major editing of my novel!!!

Girlll!! That’s so exciting and bittersweet at the same timeee 😍😍✨✨😭😭

Congratss!!!!

@euodia-vision

Girl…my brother and I have been watching The Hobbit movie trilogy…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Oh. My. Goodness. I LOVE that so much XDDD 😍 I love writing snippets like that too. They’re so fun XD <3

Hi!!

@smiley

Awwwww those two chapters! I like Jayla’s background…

But Yelena! Don’t say those things to Buckyyyyyy 😭

@s-tastet

Or any other of Ted Dekker’s books?

@s-tastet

Oh, okay! Yeah, I think I preferred AD30, but 33 was still good. It was really sad though – I won’t spoil XD

Have you read the Chosen series by Jerry B. Jenkins? It’s basically the show, but written as a book, and it’s SO good!! I liked all the insight into the characters. I’ve only seen a few episodes of the show, so I might be…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello

Thanks! If you want to read more, I can tag you on the forum where I am posting the whole story and asking for critiques.

I feel so bad for Sef but I LOVE their relationship! It makes me so happy! 🙂

@esther-c

Sounds fun!! Min and Allison gave pretty good examples. I don’t really have that much experience writing scripts, but I wish you luck!

@acancello

Lolol 😂

@freedomwriter76 I will pray for your friend!

@whalekeeper

I will pray for your church! That sounds really rough.

Thanks! I do make a lot of my own food, but now a days most places sell gluten free stuff, it’s just pricey.

@smiley

Yeah they did a good job of him seeming human. If vision looked straight up robot I think we’d all be going 🤮🤮🤮 about the romance XD

Also he is really sweet, and you can tell he cares about wanda.

@freedomwriter76

AHHHHHHH

That was SO good and adorable and amazingggggg

😭😭😭😭😍😍😍😍

I love Alpine’s backstory!!

@smiley

Wanda better be on that list, I’m still mad at freedom for not including her, *does a Wanda’s head tilt to freedom*

besides the twin should be together

OoOOOOo freedom got the head tilt!!!

Don’t worry, she is. 😉😂

I think my top 5 rn are…

1. Steve

2. Bucky

3. Wanda

4. Spiderman

5. Hawkeye

(Pietro hasn’t quite surpassed those…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!

@savannah_grace2009

I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂