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@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!!!!

And wolfgang 😥 I love him to

Lots of really good stuff in there! I like how you show that Leo’s unforgiveness/bitterness effects all the brothers and makes it harder for them to get through a difficult time together. I really liked the scene where Wolfgang is against the bunk, trying to stay out of it, and feeling…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Wow, I had no idea Nyx had more than one tail! 😂

Lol, It feels like I should know this by now XD

@godlyfantasy12

Nyx**

Lol.

Taking a deep breath, she closed her eyes, willing her mind to clear. Slowly, she could feel herself becoming entwined with the boy, Tauren’s, own feelings. Could hear his heart, beating in tune with hers. Could almost see his emotions, drifting into her, likes a rainbow of colors.

Wait is this some kind of power t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

where his tails faced Grimm and the others. He flicked them at the crowd before muttering to himself.

Ok wait how many tails does Nix have?

Or was that a typo XD?

@freedomwriter76

Who doesn’t have bias toward Leo? XDXD

Oh, I LOVE Hold You Tight by Dan Bremnes!! I’ve been listening to that one a lot lately, and it reminds me of my charrie, Asher too!

And any song by FK and C is awesome…and Matthew West…

Those are some great songs! I heard one the other day called “Any More” by Madilyn Paige that…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Thanks for the awesome topic! I don’t think I’ve actually met you yet, so Hi! 🙂

Ok, so I actually haven’t seen LOTR XD

1. Ring-bearer (this is you): which race would you be? Elf, dwarf, human, or hobbit?

I’d be human.

2. Gandalf: a wise and/or powerful mentor-type character

Jonathon Ledger

3. Aragorn: a character who’s good at s…[Read more]

@orielle21

Oops tagged you wrong ^^

@oreille21

WOW! I thoroughly enjoyed that! Such a great read!

Also, one of the boys has thick brown curls?! 😍😍 That’s just like my OC Tauren!

I’d love to read more!

@arien thank you so much! It makes me more motivated and inspired to write when I know people are liking it 🙂

And ikr? Layson is so sweet with the kids 😭

@loopylin

Oh! I love it! I really like the one of the guy leaning over writing, it’s like such an aesthetic shot! 😍

@booksandbeakers

Hey!! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, young adult fiction-writing, God-loving, amateur writer! *whew*

I like to dabble in a little bit of everything, concerning writing: my WIP is dystopian, I have a set-aside-for-a-long-time fantasy duology, I have a his-fic idea, and I…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity

As of now, the last chapter I’ve posted is all I have written. I promise one or two new chapters within the first week of the new year!

Oh, and the last part at the end of the chapter where Ami remembers that they forgot Artemis… well… pretend that never happened. Let’s just pr…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

So I think I get what you’re saying. 😅

Are you asking what happens to the people inside The Orb, or outside The Orb?

@godlyfantasy12

*blinks*

Woah. That playlist is looooong!!

🤣

That’s awesome!!!!

Santa Baby- Lindsey Stirling

You listen to Lindsey Stirling!!! Girl, I looove her music!! (Even tho I’ve only heard her Christmas songs XD)

@freedomwriter76

Gratitude by Brandon Lake (Chosen Performance Version)

*gasp* You’ve watched the Chosen?!?! Our famil…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

I can’t remember if it was here or another forum you were asking about critiques…

I’ve seen two different formats for critique sharing here, but that doesn’t mean you can’t do something different.

Some people share a scene from there WIP, about 1-2k words, and ask for specific feedback. Often times this is if you are asking…[Read more]

@felicity @orielle21

Lol, the whole thing of you two not telling us you’re sisters…XD

I do the same thing sometimes XD

At my old youth group, my sister and I didn’t tell new people we were siblings, because idk, why? It’s a bit hard to keep up in person. We each tried to make friends there on our own so it wasn’t super obvious. We had a…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @godlyfantasy12

Tauren and Lesli

“Oh!” Lesli startles, looking down at Tauren on the floor. “Tauren…?”

She kneels down on the floor beside him, lifting his head off the floor.

“W-w-what h-happened?!” Matthew exclaims, eyes wide open.

“Oh my goodness, is he okay?!” Lyla rushes forward and kneels next to Lesl…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, it’s fun isn’t it? We’ve all gotta start somewhere, and legos/stuffies isn’t a bad place!

@whalekeeper

Thank you!!

@booksandkeepers

Thanks! That scene was one of my favorite to write, and I really felt like it was coming from the heart (I hope you get what I mean, that sounds cringy lol).

@felicity

Thanks for the feedback! It’s hard for me to imagine what you guys remember. He’s showed up a couple of times, but hasn’t had any real…[Read more]

@koshka

That sounds wild. XD

Oh, it was XD! It was actually kind of fun, once I got the hang of driving away from the doggies. XD