@power
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Power replied to the topic First chapter of Erimos in the forum Fantasy 1 year, 11 months ago
I enjoyed a good sci-fi novel, and you have piqued my interest with the Jack Rabbyits. Guess I’ll have to keep an eye out for more of this story down the line. 🙂
I do have a question and a suggestion.
- Â Why did you decide to have the two siblings fight each other at the very beginning of you story?
- Perhaps do a little…
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Power replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
(Aren’t the phycological effect of someone tagging a person and replying to their post quite interesting? It truly is amazing what a little dopamine can do.)
Salutations. I don’t believe we ever officially made each other’s acquaintance. I am Power (Though you may simply refer to me as the Black Mongoose for short.) Yes, I have written…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Loopy’s Space Comic in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
(Also, your decision to be a goldfish concerns me)
Well apparently mongooses can’t actually breath underwater (Why didn’t anyone tell me this?). So, after my little swim, I have decided that instead of actually being a Carassius auratus, I will just look like one. . . But, it seem that after blowing and sucking my cheeks in and out for…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Loopy’s Space Comic in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
W O W
Stunning and staggering!
The cosmic carrot salesbunny with pink puffy eyebrows is stupendous and space-tacular! (Also, I need one of those four eyed felines.)
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Power replied to the topic I’m new! in the forum Start HERE 2 years ago
Alas! Woe! WOOOEEE!!!
*sniffle*
*Whimper*
*Plop* (A tear cascading of my snout.)
What have we done to deserve such agony? Another poor soul as mad as a March hare! Another wayward mortal has fallen into the clutches of twitterwittedness! (Or in other words, we have a philbibliophiler on our paws.) Cupid’s barbed arrow has pierced her…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Critiques On My Fantasy World? in the forum Fantasy 2 years ago
So, are there any militaries/warsÂ
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Power replied to the topic Psst! Avast there. in the forum Historical 2 years ago
A tale have ye? Mayhaps, I may deign to lower my lofty gaze to behold your manuscript. I will give you fair warning though, if it haps to torment my dainty tum, I perchance may spew forth such baneful criticism that your ears shall ring for a month and a day. But, on the other side of the donut, if the writing is sweet like icing to my taste, I…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Here is a piece that I did for college a while back. I decided to dig it back up and work on it some. So, BEHOLD!!!
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Power replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
I forgot Watership Down by Richard Adams
(Bigwig!!! 😁)
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Power replied to the topic feeling ashamed of your writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@joy-calle If you don’t mind, which of your stories are you editing, and what do you mean by ashamed? (You think the writing is just bad, you truly feel embarrassed about the story/plot, or you feel sick/depressed when you try to edit?)
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Power replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
*The Great Spy of Gully falls from the ceiling and into the limelight*
GSG: I have arrived, and am ready for my questions!
Mike: Who are you, and how did you get in here?
GSG: Countless creature have asked me those exact questions! What do I usually answer? . . . Nothing!
Mike: Um, okay? Then why did you come?
GSG: Ah, now you are…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
WARNING: MASSIVE BOOK TITLE WAVE
Historical:
Men of Iron by Howard Pyle
In Freedom’s Cause: A Story of Wallace and Bruce by G. A. Henty
The Children of the New Forest by Frederick Marryat
Scout: The Secret of the Swamp by Piet Prins
Snow Treasure by Marie Mcswigan
Johnny Tremain by Esther Forbes
Resistance by Jennifer A Nielsen (Nielsen’s other…[Read more] -
Power replied to the topic Future Blog Post in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 1 month ago
So, from an old homeschool fogey such as myself, graduation was awesome! (The part that what my shrivel elderly gray matter can remember of two years ago.) Friends, families, cards with money, food. . . and the dreaded speech. Oh, how horrible that speech was! After taking college speech, I look back upon it and, well. . . 🤐
IT. WAS. BAD.
Also,…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
NP, I recommend next time sitting on Earth’s shoulder, or better yet, in one of it’s Mother Nature’s pockets. It’s a lot harder to fall from those positions.
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Power replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
What an epic Hot Wheels battle I just had!!! Who would have imagined that the black and red Lotus Concept would have survived to the very end! Beating the green and blue Country Club Muscle™ by literally trapping it against my floor mat, and box of pennies/rocks, then smashing the poor CCM to oblivion!!! 🏎️
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Power replied to the topic Tips, tricks, descriptions and new words! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Antiphilbibliophile (Against love book lovers)
Omphalophobia (The fear of bellybuttons [Beware of Veggies Tales!!!])
Quadcorn (A unicorn wearing a tricorne)
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Power replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
*Magnificent Facade Lizard Guy drops from the ceiling*
Greetings! I am the Magnificent Facade Lizard Guy! Quite a mouthful, but if it were pizza, you wouldn’t mind. Bane of a bad guys that is I! Terror of grammar teachers, sorry by the way. I also am also mute!!! Yep, you heard that right, mute! So, “How in the wide world are you speaking?”…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Thank you citizens for your assistance! Up! UP! AND AWAY!!!
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