Orielle2023

@otherworldlyhistorian

They have some special words and phrases but I haven’t made any special languages like Sindarin (lotr eld language).

Cool. But how did you know I was thinking of Tolkien’s languages when I asked you that question? 🤩

(BTW, Tolkien’s fantasy is my favorite….basically all I read or watch in that genre.)

A magnet school is basi…

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@otherworldlyhistorian

Hi! Nice to meet you. That’s super cool you are a twin! Though I don’t read a lot of fantasy or sci-fi, your work sounds interesting. Do your creations have a space language and have you created maps for their world?

Other questions:

1) What is your favorite bird?
2) Do you play any instruments

3) What is your dream job…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ooooo. I like this already. Cant wait to read it! ☺️

@mineralizedwritings

Orielle do you have a fave parrot? I like Camelot macaws! (I feel like that’s a cross between a scarlet and harlequin, yall I’m so rusty on my birds! XD)

Never heard of that kind of parrot before but it sounds cool!!!  My favorite parrot is Mr. Cotton’s parrot in Pirates of the Caribbean. JK. Umm… probably the sweet heart parrot.

@princesachronicle22

I also love your name, very pretty!

Awww. Thank you. ❤️ It’s a combination of the name of the Oriole bird and a Tolkien elf. 🥰

Favorite bird? Parakeet. They’re great pets, and adorable!

Nice….I want a parakeet someday. Do you have one???

@diving-into-the-future

Hi Audra. Nice to meet you! I love your writing themes!

Right now I work full time as a barista but still find time to live, be with my fam, and write. I also play violin and am learning Spanish.

Here’s some questions for you to consider. 🙂

1) What is your favorite bird?

2) What is your dream job?

3) If you are…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Welcome to KP! Your profile picture is adorable!!!!

I am a barista that loves people and birds and also writes historical fiction. I have a lot that I have written over the years and a couple WIP’s going right now. I also play violin and am learning Spanish. Graduated from home school a few years ago. Looking forward to…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

So, my grandparents visited recently and my grandpa told me about a guy who goes to his Bible study. This man is a little mentally ill and right now he is being taken care of by the government financially. After his parents passed away, this man inherited a huge estate and millions of dollars. Unfortunately, some of his…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

Okay, so please forgive me if I missed this in part one… but I, as a reader, would like to know if Annie resents moving from Greensburgh. Does she not like the rough-and-tumble pioneer life? From what I’ve read, I don’t think she misses it, but you might want to clarify a little!!!!

Thanks for the tip! Annie loves the pione…[Read more]

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Happy New Year everybody! Here’s part three.…[Read more]

@arien @everyone

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!

I hope everyone has a fabulous 2023!!! In our writing this year, may inspirations keep coming, courage to continue strong to the end always be present, and joy abound as we share with each other and encourage one another.

Thank you to the wonderful community here on KP.

Blessings. *hugs*

@mineralizedwritings

Wow. I really like how you are developing the story. Also, how you gave a little more insight about how Keiryn really is. It was a great read. I feel like I can relate with those who want to explore the upper world (despite it being looked down upon)….I’m at a place in life sort of like that…wanting to experience things and d…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Because it’s first person, thoughts can be a part of narration. I don’t think you need the quote marks around the inner dialogue.

Ahhh, I understand totally. You’re right. Hmm. Never thought of that. *thumbs up*

Really enjoying your descriptions too! I feel like I’m there, and I feel a bit like Annie is a extension of mysel…

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@lydia-s

This is such a fun idea!!! Hi and nice to meet you! *fist bump*

1. Ring-bearer (this is you): which race would you be? Elf, dwarf, human, or hobbit?

I’d be an ELF…with long braided hair, maybe greenish brown eyes, and a bow….:) 🙂 As you can see from my forum name, Orielle, I love elves. 😉

For the rest of the Characters, I am…[Read more]

@booksandbeakers

I would say maybe break up the story Annie tells into smaller paragraphs. And possibly note exactly where the visitors are from.

Good points.

And maybe construct Nellie a little more. As in, what is the motive for her bossiness? Will it cause strife later? Does she have a nice side?

After reading my story over again, I did think…[Read more]

@starofthenorth

Thanks for the response! Yes, I agree with you that Pa does seem to just assume the Grants are new pioneers….appreciate you pointing that out.

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Next Post…..Part Two of the Annie Adams story. Enjoy. Or ignore.…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I love the kindness in Layson. He seems like such a protective big brother kind of character.

I also guessed it was Keiryn lol.

Great chapter and of course I’m super curious what Layson is up to. 😄

@mineralizedwritings

“Well, that’s very lucky for you.” She looks up at Tauren, but her gaze seems to look down.

Loved this!!! 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

Wow. I totally love how you do the italics and write what your characters are thinking or write flashbacks. It was a great read and I want to know WHO is behind the door. I have a hunch who it might be. &#x1f…[Read more]