ryry

@euodia-vision

That actually sounds really awesome! 😄 I’d love to read something like that! Just like Kathleen said, if you are able to pull it off right, (as in make it realistic) then I think it would be really interesting!

@felicity

Byron Len is awful! But I like how he’s a “coward” deep down. Like when they mention God he’s like, “Oh let’s move on.”

It’s Derek Len actually. 😅 I’ll have to make that clearer. Bayron Len is actually dead. XD You’re good, tho.

Ikr? I’m still deciding if he’ll have a redemption arc or not.

Asher!!! *grinds teeth* what are you doi…

[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

I’m so glad it encouraged you!! 😄

Will do! Here it is!:

So I will sing Your praises,
Throughout all eternity.
I will tell of Your goodnes…

[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Oof, sorry!! I went to bed really early last night, so I’m just now seeing this.

Asher

“Not at all,” Ara said. She looked around and asked, “Are you alone?”

I frowned slightly, biting my lip before speaking. “I…well…not exactly…my…my…” I trailed off.

My what? He’s…not that…no…he doesn’t think of me as that…

Ara no…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Eddie

“No…we haven’t seen anyone…you’re the first. What are you doing here? Are you friend or foe?”

“I’m a friend.” Eddie said, tugging her yellow sweatshirt down over the stun gun at her side. “I woke up here with my twin sister. I’m just trying to find her so we can go home.”  She paused and nervously wrapped her tail around…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahh GIRL!!! Oh my goodness I LOVE IT!!!! I needed to hear (read??) that :). I don’t think that it’s too short, but, by all means, if you want to, I’d love to see the last line!!

@whalekeeper

To help ya out a bit, I know that @gracie-j @joy-calle @r-m-archer and @rachel-leitch all have. Can’t think of anybody else right now. 🙂

@keilah-h

“We should all come.” said Ellie, her tail flicking [I just thought that’d be an interesting detail–her tail can twitch back and forth, right?].

Yeah, that’s perfect! Ellie does that a lot, actually, especially when she’s nervous. Don’t be scared to write for my characters.

@mineralizedwritings

It felt a little rushed how everything happened, but I mean it is only a first draft. In the scene with Ami and Ev talking through the hole in the wall, Idk what you are planning to do with that, but it was really predictable. As soon as there was a hole in the wall, I knew where it was going 😉. I know the whole thing with…

[Read more]

@joy-calle

That’s awesome! I actually have soli deo gloria as part of my dedication for Where Faith Remains. (The book is dedicated to God since it’s my first book, and I knew from the moment I started writing it that I wanted my first book to be solely His.)

So cool!!

@sarafini

Ok, thx!

I have yet to figure out my style. I’ve been trying to read articles on style and such but haven’t written enough to figure mine out yet. I know that I do much better writing in 1st person instead of third person but that’s as far as I’ve gotten.

Yeah. In all honesty, I still need to figure out my style as well. Like, my olde…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12 @any-one-else

Dylan

The young man moaned, grimacing.

I frowned and touched his shoulder again. “Hey…”

He jerked slightly at my touch, then tried to push himself up from the floor. He lost any strength that he had and, before I could catch him, face-planted back into the floor .

Oh wow…that’s gotta…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah yeah maybe!!

@esther-c

Ooh interesting!

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you for the link of the video!! I’ll check it out 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyone-else

Here are some random writing prompts that I found: (I’ll post a few more in a minute)

@whalekeeper

Of course!!